- Mar 21, 2018
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I'm back to moan about grammar stuff!
"evolved passed" should be "evolved past" you walk past something, you get past a tragic event in your life, you evolved past something. Passed is for "I passed a building" but you still "Walk past a building" because English is a dumb language.
both (I only recall 2) uses of "outcasted" should just be "outcast" you could use "cast out" or even "shunned" but yeah, "outcasted" just doesn't feel right.
"They meaned something" should be "They meant something" or "They mean something" I'd go with "They mean something" as the character is speaking in the present.
Aside from that, all appears to be good
"evolved passed" should be "evolved past" you walk past something, you get past a tragic event in your life, you evolved past something. Passed is for "I passed a building" but you still "Walk past a building" because English is a dumb language.
both (I only recall 2) uses of "outcasted" should just be "outcast" you could use "cast out" or even "shunned" but yeah, "outcasted" just doesn't feel right.
"They meaned something" should be "They meant something" or "They mean something" I'd go with "They mean something" as the character is speaking in the present.
Aside from that, all appears to be good