VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.5.0] [JDOR]

[motseer]

how many episodes will the game have? Does the game will have a lot of choices and does the choices will matter for the game or its a linear path? How many girls the game will have?
Jacquesdor

The answer to all those questions and more are in the Developer Notes on the OP.

 

[MikeOG]

damn that redhead milf

 

[DuckDairyDip]

I really enjoyed this. Wish there were plans for more choices or branching or at least more choices for smaller scene variations, but it is what it is. Looking forward to seeing how this turns out over time.

 

[grahegri]

OriginStory-0.1.0

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[dong345]

That's like death and taxes. Certain as hell!


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Mrs Ross is on the List too

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What will be Mrs.Ross's power?

 

[Jacquesdor]

You should just put another spot in the banner, empty of course. It would be hilarious

Well you'll notice on the main menu there where all the characters appear on the letters of the title, there is an empty letter. And I went all out with that, grabbed a render that Amber "appears" in and positioned it exactly where her face should be.

What will be Mrs.Ross's power?

Mrs. Ross is vaccinated, so no power I'm afraid. She will, however, play a big part in one of the storylines coming up.

 

[!Berserker!]

Origin Story [v0.1.0] [JDOR]

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[OnlyTomatillo]

For a solo developer the renders look amazing.

Don't bother with animations if they're not your thing, you can still make an amazing and entertaining game without them.

 

[rafaaa]

The answer to all those questions and more are in the Developer Notes on the OP.

doesnt say how many chapters neither how many girls

 

[Jacquesdor]

doesnt say how many chapters neither how many girls

I have twenty chapters already written... it'll be going for a while.

9 main girls... and a bunch of other girls who dip in and out of the story.

 

[motseer]

doesnt say how many chapters neither how many girls

20 chapters, 9 potential main LI's (so far) and I'm not sure of the # of side girls.

Edit: Heh, I was too slow...

 

[!Berserker!]

I have twenty chapters already written... it'll be going for a while.

9 main girls... and a bunch of other girls who dip in and out of the story.

Got any discord buddy ?

 

[Deleted member 6168082]

Whether the MC is the virgin or one/some of the LIs, we need to 'fix' that ASAP.

I think with something good, it's better not to rush things.

Let things build up, let things take their time, let the enjoyment build until you explode and release lots of white creamy goodness (if that's what you want to do)

I was confused by the version, since most 1.0 are for full releases? or I might be confused about that. I am used to seeing 0.1 etc until 1.0 (completed)

 

[HornyyPussy]

Freeroaming

THIS IS NOT A SANDBOX GAME, however, there will be some free roaming sections within the story, however, these will be sporadic and not too involved. The first freeroam section in Chapter 1 contains roughly 45 minutes of backstory and lore, so I highly recommend exploring it fully.

What you describe is quite literally what sandbox is.

There is no "freeroaming" tag on this site. Your gameplay mechanic would fall under the sandbox tag. And if they did change the sandbox tag to "freeroaming"(as is apparently being discussed in tag changes), you'd still deserve the tag. It might be a minor aspect of the game (if it's so "sporadic", why even waste time coding it?), but it is still an aspect of the game. And an aspect many people despise in AVNs.

I have no clue why some of you devs keep trying to tag dodge a bloody game mechanic you chose to put in your friggin games. Nor why some mods assist in you attempting to bypass the tag. All it leads to when you guys pull these shenanigans is when people that hate sandbox encounter it ingame (which they will, you can't hide a game mechanic ffs) they come to the thread and start complaining about why it wasn't tagged. As they well they should.

It's your game to do with as you will, and good luck. But you'd get more respect being honest about your content than trying to tag dodge.

No, what's in this VN would be under "point&click" not "sandbox".

And considering how open the dev has been do you really think he would try to lie about this one thing? Maybe you should get your head out of your ass......

 

[Fazed]

Freeroaming

THIS IS NOT A SANDBOX GAME, however, there will be some free roaming sections within the story, however, these will be sporadic and not too involved. The first freeroam section in Chapter 1 contains roughly 45 minutes of backstory and lore, so I highly recommend exploring it fully.

What you describe is quite literally what sandbox is.

There is no "freeroaming" tag on this site. Your gameplay mechanic would fall under the sandbox tag. And if they did change the sandbox tag to "freeroaming"(as is apparently being discussed in tag changes), you'd still deserve the tag. It might be a minor aspect of the game (if it's so "sporadic", why even waste time coding it?), but it is still an aspect of the game. And an aspect many people despise in AVNs.

I have no clue why some of you devs keep trying to tag dodge a bloody game mechanic you chose to put in your friggin games. Nor why some mods assist in you attempting to bypass the tag. All it leads to when you guys pull these shenanigans is when people that hate sandbox encounter it ingame (which they will, you can't hide a game mechanic ffs) they come to the thread and start complaining about why it wasn't tagged. As they well they should.

It's your game to do with as you will, and good luck. But you'd get more respect being honest about your content than trying to tag dodge.

Dude cry more. There is obviously a difference between a game that uses a sandbox as its main nexus and a game that is mostly a click to progress VN with small bits of interactive exploration throughout. You sound like sandbox stole your wife. chill out.

 

[ohhiimfox]

Just finished playing ch1 and gotta say motseer ur were right! nice girls with a light DCU/MCU touch i like it.

Jacquesdor Keep it up! it looks really promising and get rid of that sandbox tag please.. that might spook ppl like me

 

[motseer]

No, what's in this VN would be under "point&click" not "sandbox".

And considering how open the dev has been do you really think he would try to lie about this one thing? Maybe you should get your head out of your ass......

Dude cry more. There is obviously a difference between a game that uses a sandbox as its main nexus and a game that is mostly a click to progress VN with small bits of interactive exploration throughout. You sound like sandbox stole your wife. chill out.

Don't waste your time on him. I assure you his post will be deleted before too long.

 

[shamtiiomi]

nice start but not enough to be hooked up....
story wise is nice not to cringe and fun at times
renders looks good and models too,but [this is entirely my taste]i wish can have more variation on body model's i only see plain tits,hand tits,nice tits,and melon tits,but i dont see any peach ass,in any model,even riley and parker form behind[in the bikinishot]they look plain too plain not curves,so yeah im an ass man myself not titts can change that,...
about the freeroam part,is ok if we have some shit to do but when isnt any particular thing ,completely ruin inmersion,
the same for point and click,the flashbacks are "ok" but how can you know if you are seeing all of them?
if i need to give a score will be 3,5 points of 5 so not so bad and like many other newly games time and space for improvement ,so it is a good start

 

[rKnight]

Origin Story follows MC, a seemingly normal nineteen-year-old struggling with his social status and his virginity,

"Our story takes place twenty years after a virus known as 'Virginity' has swept the world and turned much of its adult population into Wizards."

'The Sisterhood' targeted and violently attacked the MC for reasons unknown to him,

THX for sharing...

 

[motseer]

Just finished playing ch1 and gotta say motseer ur were right! nice girls with a little DCU/MCU touch i like it.

Jacquesdor Keep it up! it looks really promising and get rid of that sandbox tag please.. that might spook ppl like me

Yeah, that tag never should have been there... Glad you liked the release. I've been following Jaquesdor's development thread for a while and looking forward to it. Thankfully, as HornyyPussy said, There's been a minimum of stoopid... so far.