VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.6.0] [JDOR]

[e6mill]

we're simply made to think that Parker is the antagonist

No way!

 

[billybob2010]

thank you for finally having amber appear

 

[kriskano]

Great game, thank you

 

[Rehwyn]

Right, but what I mean is I wonder if in a future chapter giving money to the homeless person has another potentially positive impact. Maybe that homeless person was more than they seemed, for example.

So I checked the script around this event out of curiosity.

Spoiler: Minor code spoilers

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That said, we don't know how Cat might react to us in Episode 7 depending on if you chose BJ or Fuck. So it'll be interesting to see.

 

[DriveBy]

Great storytelling - keep up the good work, dev!

 

[nikam]

Awesome game, loving the story so far, can't wait to see what happens next. In the meantime, does anyone know which game the scene on the phone is from?

Spoiler: scene from v0.5

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[Camlar]

I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not? The tags doesnt include it but people keep talking about it on this thread and the game starts with a disclaimer. I want to clarify that I dont care if characters have a sexual past or even do sexual things such as dancing with other people or suggestive things as long as it doesnt actually break the boundry of becoming explicitly intimate and sexual, meaning having sex with other people while the game is taking place and forcing you into a position to watch it.

I appreciate any comprehensive response since the game looks legitimately great and I was looking forward to trying it but I dont want to waste time on something that will make me deeply uncomfortable and make me drop it after spending significant amounts of time on it. Im here for wish fullfilment in the end and good stories about romance and some kinky stuff between the player character and others.

best wishes and apologies for potential spelling errors.

 

[nikam]

I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not? The tags doesnt include it but people keep talking about it on this thread and the game starts with a disclaimer. I want to clarify that I dont care if characters have a sexual past or even do sexual things such as dancing with other people or suggestive things as long as it doesnt actually break the boundry of becoming explicitly intimate and sexual, meaning having sex with other people while the game is taking place and forcing you into a position to watch it.

I appreciate any comprehensive response since the game looks legitimately great and I was looking forward to trying it but I dont want to waste time on something that will make me deeply uncomfortable and make me drop it after spending significant amounts of time on it. Im here for wish fullfilment in the end and good stories about romance and some kinky stuff between the player character and others.

best wishes and apologies for potential spelling errors.

Only done the main route so far but the only NTR I've seen is one scene(male giving oral to female), that takes 2 clicks to get through and some lines of dialogue where some characters you haven't been with yet explain they are sexually active(no descriptions or specifics, just general statements). Dev explains it better in the dev notes faq.

 

[blkcrow20]

I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not? The tags doesnt include it but people keep talking about it on this thread and the game starts with a disclaimer. I want to clarify that I dont care if characters have a sexual past or even do sexual things such as dancing with other people or suggestive things as long as it doesnt actually break the boundry of becoming explicitly intimate and sexual, meaning having sex with other people while the game is taking place and forcing you into a position to watch it.

I appreciate any comprehensive response since the game looks legitimately great and I was looking forward to trying it but I dont want to waste time on something that will make me deeply uncomfortable and make me drop it after spending significant amounts of time on it. Im here for wish fullfilment in the end and good stories about romance and some kinky stuff between the player character and others.

best wishes and apologies for potential spelling errors.

No, there is not. It was talked about a lot partly because there is a joke about it in the game and partly because some people don't know what the hell they are talking about.

 

[Jericho85]

I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not? The tags doesnt include it but people keep talking about it on this thread and the game starts with a disclaimer. I want to clarify that I dont care if characters have a sexual past or even do sexual things such as dancing with other people or suggestive things as long as it doesnt actually break the boundry of becoming explicitly intimate and sexual, meaning having sex with other people while the game is taking place and forcing you into a position to watch it.

I appreciate any comprehensive response since the game looks legitimately great and I was looking forward to trying it but I dont want to waste time on something that will make me deeply uncomfortable and make me drop it after spending significant amounts of time on it. Im here for wish fullfilment in the end and good stories about romance and some kinky stuff between the player character and others.

best wishes and apologies for potential spelling errors.

There is no NTR. It's been discussed a million times and the thread nuked a million times over it too. This question is also addressed in the dev notes on the OP.

Spoiler: From Dev Notes:

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[CrazyRabbit]

Parker is too obvious to be sus. The one who betrays MC must be completely unexpected to create an impression and shock among the audience - that's how good writing works.
She certainly has hidden agenda as shown by ending 0.6 and I can't trust her 100% until her motives become clearer, but I don't think she's the antagonist here.

So far, we only have seen 3 actually seen or mentioned characters who are supposed to be villains to MC;

1) the were-Tiger dude who attacked MC & Evelyn at the mart parking lot; dead now by the Sisterhood
2) Scarlet Shadow (not sure I have her name correct or completely wrong, been a while since she appeared lol) Ninja girl Super villain who sort of looks to be acting like a counterpart to Ghostraven.
3) Scarlet's Shadow's mistress - SS said her mistress has plans for MC.

If Parker is a villain, she could be SS's mistress I guess?
But I'm not so sure about that.

Sure she kept secrets from MC, but I've seen games until now of a parent/foster parent character keeping the child (MC) in the dark for their own good etc etc.
Not saying you're necessarily wrong, but there needs to be more evidence to convince me she's someone evil than just "she's keeping secrets and somehow connected to MC's superpowers origins."

But I guess time will tell.
MC is still only just starting out, and I'd say it's gonna be quite a while until he starts facing his supervillains.

Aside from the obvious "Parker is a full blown LI" so it would be hard for her to be an antagonist (or at least an irredeemable one), she's shady and more important : never present enough, so her development as a LI is pretty stunted for now (same for Riley who has no romantic/lustful feelings for MC whatsoever).
Perhaps we're given that peek of her shadiness to give us some doubt on her agenda....
But for me, Parker is no villain nor serious antagonist. At worst, she's an helicopter step-aunt, and she's wrong to be so secretive. She'll have to work some more if she want to be fully redeemed, though.

My biggest issue with the last update is that BS of MC having addictive cum and "pheromones" that attract and make him handsomier....er...handsomer...handso - fuck it, prettier to the ladies.
Meaning aside from Evelyn and Amber (whom we finally saw and damn, she's a knockout ) and perhaps a bit of Moonsong (cause now she's all ut addicted to MC's meta-schlong) ; no other girl is truly interested in MC, or at least not because they find him genuinely attractive ; and that's a bummer...

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Aside from the obvious "Parker is a full blown LI" so it would be hard for her to be an antagonist (or at least an irredeemable one), she's shady and more important : never present enough, so her development as a LI is pretty stunted for now (same for Riley who has no romantic/lustful feelings for MC whatsoever).
Perhaps we're given that peek of her shadiness to give us some doubt on her agenda....
But for me, Parker is no villain nor serious antagonist. At worst, she's an helicopter step-aunt, and she's wrong to be so secretive. She'll have to work some more if she want to be fully redeemed, though.

My biggest issue with the last update is that BS of MC having addictive cum and "pheromones" that attract and make him handsomier....er...handsomer...handso - fuck it, prettier to the ladies.
Meaning aside from Evelyn and Amber (whom we finally saw and damn, she's a knockout ) and perhaps a bit of Moonsong (cause now she's all ut addicted to MC's meta-schlong) ; no other girl is truly interested in MC, or at least not because they find him genuinely attractive ; and that's a bummer...

His abilities are built around sexuality, it is quite logical that MC develops additional baits, the production of aphrodisiac by his body to lure women, because his main function is to steal more abilities through sexual contact. This fits well with the game lore.

 

[Bad Wolf]

My biggest issue with the last update is that BS of MC having addictive cum and "pheromones" that attract and make him handsomier....er...handsomer...handso - fuck it, prettier to the ladies.

I agree. If that were the case. But it was saying they become addicted the more people are around him and even moreso if they've already been with him. I think. I could be wrong and if you're right, then I agree. But other games have pulled the addictive cum before. At this point it's pretty much a cliche.

Meaning aside from Evelyn and Amber (whom we finally saw and damn, she's a knockout ) and perhaps a bit of Moonsong (cause now she's all ut addicted to MC's meta-schlong) ; no other girl is truly interested in MC, or at least not because they find him genuinely attractive ; and that's a bummer...

Amber is a total knockout. Agreed. Need more of her. As for the addicts, you're also forgetting about Emerald. She's completely addicted and having DTs for it. lol

 

[envyNox]

I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not? The tags doesnt include it but people keep talking about it on this thread and the game starts with a disclaimer. I want to clarify that I dont care if characters have a sexual past or even do sexual things such as dancing with other people or suggestive things as long as it doesnt actually break the boundry of becoming explicitly intimate and sexual, meaning having sex with other people while the game is taking place and forcing you into a position to watch it.

I appreciate any comprehensive response since the game looks legitimately great and I was looking forward to trying it but I dont want to waste time on something that will make me deeply uncomfortable and make me drop it after spending significant amounts of time on it. Im here for wish fullfilment in the end and good stories about romance and some kinky stuff between the player character and others.

best wishes and apologies for potential spelling errors.

"I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not?" ...
Yes.

 

[c.mork]

His abilities are built around sexuality, it is quite logical that MC develops additional baits, the production of aphrodisiac by his body to lure women, because his main function is to steal more abilities through sexual contact. This fits well with the game lore.

Whether it makes sense isn't the issue. It just ruins the fun of chasing LIs. Why even try to win Ruth over when you can just sit in her vicinity for 2 weeks and she'll be more cock hungry than josy?

 

[HornyyPussy]

"I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not?" ...
Yes.

I agree, it's an annoying question.

Whether it makes sense isn't the issue. It just ruins the fun of chasing LIs. Why even try to win Ruth over when you can just sit in her vicinity for 2 weeks and she'll be more cock hungry than josy?

Maybe have a little faith in Jaq and see where the story takes us?

 

[blkcrow20]

"I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not?" ...
Yes.

It does not. Don't be an ass.

 

[CrazyRabbit]

His abilities are built around sexuality, it is quite logical that MC develops additional baits, the production of aphrodisiac by his body to lure women, because his main function is to steal more abilities through sexual contact. This fits well with the game lore.

It does indeed, I agree. It's just, I'm always sad when we can't win over the LIs without the help of pheromones, mind control (however mild) and magic cum....
But, I say it again, I agree it's completely relevant to MC's powers. I just don't like it, I like natural feelings of attraction and it feels like cheating.
How to be sure the girl would be genuinely attracted without those powers ?
Is Moonsong getting infatuated with us ? Seems like it, but is it because MC is a good guy, attractive to her, or is it only/partly the powers so it's meaningless ?

I agree. If that were the case. But it was saying they become addicted the more people are around him and even moreso if they've already been with him. I think. I could be wrong and if you're right, then I agree. But other games have pulled the addictive cum before. At this point it's pretty much a cliche.


Amber is a total knockout. Agreed. Need more of her. As for the addicts, you're also forgetting about Emerald. She's completely addicted and having DTs for it. lol

Had to replay it to be sure but yeah, I think it's exponential the more his powers grows and the more he sleeps around. Those he sleeps with getting the brunt of it and the others (like Ruth) getting the residual pheromones.

Amber is awesome ; I want her in the Sisterhood to make invisible horny babies with her

 

[CrazyRabbit]

Whether it makes sense isn't the issue. It just ruins the fun of chasing LIs. Why even try to win Ruth over when you can just sit in her vicinity for 2 weeks and she'll be more cock hungry than josy?

Exactly my point.
And even a jab at Josy (and it's not even my birthday)

My man

 

[duckydoodoo]

The girls immediately around MC cant be the main culprit storywise for one reason, MC's male best friend's power is directly tied to the Meta. Anyone who spends time around him would eventually be caught out. The main atagonist has to be working from outside MC's immediate perview. With 2 exceptions, the first being his buddy is part of the plot against him, or having access to the Meta, he recognizes all the good that will happen to MC and pulls a Dr. Strange in Infinity War, with the if i talk about it it wont happen or something worse will. Honestly aside from a plot device, his buddy is completely useless now that i think of it.