VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.6.0] [JDOR]

[duckydoodoo]

The girls immediately around MC cant be the main culprit storywise for one reason, MC's male best friend's power is directly tied to the Meta. Anyone who spends time around him would eventually be caught out. The main atagonist has to be working from outside MC's immediate perview. With 2 exceptions, the first being his buddy is part of the plot against him, or having access to the Meta, he recognizes all the good that will happen to MC and pulls a Dr. Strange in Infinity War, with the if i talk about it it wont happen or something worse will. Honestly aside from a plot device, his buddy is completely useless now that i think of it.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Whether it makes sense isn't the issue. It just ruins the fun of chasing LIs. Why even try to win Ruth over when you can just sit in her vicinity for 2 weeks and she'll be more cock hungry than josy?

It does indeed, I agree. It's just, I'm always sad when we can't win over the LIs without the help of pheromones, mind control (however mild) and magic cum....
But, I say it again, I agree it's completely relevant to MC's powers. I just don't like it, I like natural feelings of attraction and it feels like cheating.
How to be sure the girl would be genuinely attracted without those powers ?
Is Moonsong getting infatuated with us ? Seems like it, but is it because MC is a good guy, attractive to her, or is it only/partly the powers so it's meaningless ?

1. I understand what you're talking about, and I have a few possible answers: 1. This game is not that deep in terms of plot and relationship development. It's fun, it's memetic, it's a great parody on superhero topic, but the game is more about sex and kinks than full-fledged relationships - that's how I see Origin Story.
2. As for Ruth, it seems that it was pointed out that the spells do not work on her because she has a high resistance threshold.
3. What does pheromone do anyway? Does it just make girls aroused and cause sexual appetite, or does it create deeper emotional feelings? Because for me, these two concepts have always been different.

 

[Bad Wolf]

I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not?

"I know this is an annoying question at this point but does this game actually contain NTR or not?" ...
Yes.

No. It doesn't. Evelyn has a power to see and feel what others do. She's not the one doing them. But there's one thing I personally didn't like was her getting touched by that one dude, so she can experience the orgasmic high that he can give. It wasn't a sexual touch, I just would've preferred if it was an option.

 

[blkcrow20]

No. It doesn't. Evelyn has a power to see and feel what others do. She's not the one doing them. But there's one thing I personally didn't like was her getting touched by that one dude, so she can experience the orgasmic high that he can give. It wasn't a sexual touch, I just would've preferred if it was an option.

I know what you mean but she did say it felt more like she was drunk or high, said it didn't feel orgasmic.

 

[CrazyRabbit]

1. I understand what you're talking about, and I have a few possible answers: 1. This game is not that deep in terms of plot and relationship development. It's fun, it's memetic, it's a great parody on superhero topic, but the game is more about sex and kinks than full-fledged relationships - that's how I see Origin Story.
2. As for Ruth, it seems that it was pointed out that the spells do not work on her because she has a high resistance threshold.
3. What does pheromone do anyway? Does it just make girls aroused and cause sexual appetite, or does it create deeper emotional feelings? Because for me, these two concepts have always been different.

1. Given the gravitas given to Amber's situation, Ruth backstory, that Kyle kid in the parc, etc... ; I don't see the game that way. There's is some fun made to the superhero genre, great humor and even a Meta commentary. But there is plenty of seriousness in it.

2. Where was it pointed ? Genuine question, I don't remember this part...

3. It creates the opportunity and the addiction. The girl wouldn't even be interested without it, or would never want to go beyond a one-night stand. And then those becomes the base of the deeper feelings.
So artificial attraction, I don't like it

 

[Jericho85]

I agree. If that were the case. But it was saying they become addicted the more people are around him and even moreso if they've already been with him. I think. I could be wrong and if you're right, then I agree. But other games have pulled the addictive cum before. At this point it's pretty much a cliche.


Amber is a total knockout. Agreed. Need more of her. As for the addicts, you're also forgetting about Emerald. She's completely addicted and having DTs for it. lol

Well it wouldn't be a proper super hero porn without properly porntastic powers You gotta forgive a little cliche lol... and alliteration...

 

[blkcrow20]

2. Where was it pointed ? Genuine question, I don't remember this part...

I think it was during the conversation between Parker and the guy at her company. Saying Ruth had a higher resistance, probably due to her strength.

 

[Bad Wolf]

Well it wouldn't be a proper super hero porn without properly porntastic powers You gotta forgive a little cliche lol... and alliteration...

 

[Beefle]

I like to imagine you guys with one girl sitting on your dick and one on your face and suddenly you put a sad face on and think "aww, but do they really love me?"

 

[Rehwyn]

Aside from the obvious "Parker is a full blown LI" so it would be hard for her to be an antagonist (or at least an irredeemable one), she's shady and more important : never present enough, so her development as a LI is pretty stunted for now (same for Riley who has no romantic/lustful feelings for MC whatsoever).
Perhaps we're given that peek of her shadiness to give us some doubt on her agenda....
But for me, Parker is no villain nor serious antagonist. At worst, she's an helicopter step-aunt, and she's wrong to be so secretive. She'll have to work some more if she want to be fully redeemed, though.

My biggest issue with the last update is that BS of MC having addictive cum and "pheromones" that attract and make him handsomier....er...handsomer...handso - fuck it, prettier to the ladies.
Meaning aside from Evelyn and Amber (whom we finally saw and damn, she's a knockout ) and perhaps a bit of Moonsong (cause now she's all ut addicted to MC's meta-schlong) ; no other girl is truly interested in MC, or at least not because they find him genuinely attractive ; and that's a bummer...

His abilities are built around sexuality, it is quite logical that MC develops additional baits, the production of aphrodisiac by his body to lure women, because his main function is to steal more abilities through sexual contact. This fits well with the game lore.

I agree. If that were the case. But it was saying they become addicted the more people are around him and even moreso if they've already been with him. I think. I could be wrong and if you're right, then I agree. But other games have pulled the addictive cum before. At this point it's pretty much a cliche.


Amber is a total knockout. Agreed. Need more of her. As for the addicts, you're also forgetting about Emerald. She's completely addicted and having DTs for it. lol

Whether it makes sense isn't the issue. It just ruins the fun of chasing LIs. Why even try to win Ruth over when you can just sit in her vicinity for 2 weeks and she'll be more cock hungry than josy?

On the topic of MC's attractive/addictive powers, I'm sure it'll come up at some point and MC might have some internal turmoil where he wonders if the LIs like him for who he is or just his powers.

The impression I got is more like it's just a general attraction and lowering of sexual inhibitions. It probably makes it easier for him to sexually attract people. But I very much doubt it'll cause any sort of long-term romantic or love feelings.

So most likely he'll conclude it's really not that different than being inherently handsome or good in bed, but on a supernatural level. It can help with that initial attraction and getting people in bed for casual sex, but not have much affect on deeper relationships (outside of perhaps the sex itself).

 

[S1nsational]

I like to imagine you guys with one girl sitting on your dick and one on your face and suddenly you put a sad face on and think "aww, but do they really love me?"

When your powers fuck with peoples minds that's a genuine concern.

Honestly, this discussion about the narcotic effect of MCs powers is important, and should happen in game too.

Gradual subtle brainwashing is the bases of a lot of horror in media

 

[CrazyRabbit]

I like to imagine you guys with one girl sitting on your dick and one on your face and suddenly you put a sad face on and think "aww, but do they really love me?"

I feel seen.

On the topic of MC's attractive/addictive powers, I'm sure it'll come up at some point and MC might have some internal turmoil where he wonders if the LIs like him for who he is or just his powers.

The impression I got is more like it's just a general attraction and lowering of sexual inhibitions. It probably makes it easier for him to sexually attract people. But I very much doubt it'll cause any sort of long-term romantic or love feelings.

So most likely he'll conclude it's really not that different than being inherently handsome or good in bed, but on a supernatural level. It can help with that initial attraction and getting people in bed for casual sex, but not have much affect on deeper relationships.

As Markiplier would say : I hope you right

 

[Canto Forte]

Moonsong is the slut of the sisters and she jumps on MC just like Arianna Grande or Taylor Swift do every other month.
Remember, they are THE TAYLOR SWIFT AND ARIANA GRANDE TOTAL SLUTS OF THE CELLEBRITY WORLD IN THEIR UNIVERSE.
Moonsong immediately gets her sister to bang MC because of his power, she then gets him to bang the girl in the cell and bribes her to do it promissing her freedom. How you tell us you never bothered to read the story in this game is very much not subtle at all.

wonders if the LIs like him for who he is or just his powers

this discussion about the narcotic effect of MCs powers is important, and should happen in game too

IT happened with the orgasm drugster and EVERYBODY LOVES TO GET DRUGGED OUT OF THEIR MINDS ON HIS ”POWER”
End of fake concirn about a fake lack of discussion or reaction from every body.

Saying Ruth had a higher resistance, probably due to her strength.

Ruth tells MC she smells Parker wet around them and she dildoes on the regular, so no, she is just a slut who likes to see all the other sluts get it on with MC before she gets her time to shine, as a total whore, just what girsl who hammer themselves on their dildoes tend to do.

I like to imagine you guys with one girl sitting on your dick and one on your face and suddenly you put a sad face on and think "aww, but do they really love me?"

MC had that and was all for letting the girls have their fun weith him. Starlets who fkk around like Ariana or Taylor do not want or need anything human like from their shags, just their dopamine spike from banging the IT guy of the hour.

 

[blkcrow20]

Another one for the ignore list.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

IT happened with the orgasm drugster and EVERYBODY LOVES TO GET DRUGGED OUT OF THEIR MINDS ON HIS ”POWER”
End of fake concirn about a fake lack of discussion or reaction from every body.

Monte... you never cease to amaze me with your senseless comments

But thanks for lifting our spirits.

 

[JJJ84]

Aside from the obvious "Parker is a full blown LI" so it would be hard for her to be an antagonist (or at least an irredeemable one), she's shady and more important : never present enough, so her development as a LI is pretty stunted for now (same for Riley who has no romantic/lustful feelings for MC whatsoever).
Perhaps we're given that peek of her shadiness to give us some doubt on her agenda....
But for me, Parker is no villain nor serious antagonist. At worst, she's an helicopter step-aunt, and she's wrong to be so secretive. She'll have to work some more if she want to be fully redeemed, though.

My biggest issue with the last update is that BS of MC having addictive cum and "pheromones" that attract and make him handsomier....er...handsomer...handso - fuck it, prettier to the ladies.
Meaning aside from Evelyn and Amber (whom we finally saw and damn, she's a knockout ) and perhaps a bit of Moonsong (cause now she's all ut addicted to MC's meta-schlong) ; no other girl is truly interested in MC, or at least not because they find him genuinely attractive ; and that's a bummer...

My biggest issue with the last update is that BS of MC having addictive cum and "pheromones" that attract and make him handsomier....er...handsomer...handso - fuck it, prettier to the ladies.
Meaning aside from Evelyn and Amber (whom we finally saw and damn, she's a knockout ) and perhaps a bit of Moonsong (cause now she's all ut addicted to MC's meta-schlong) ; no other girl is truly interested in MC, or at least not because they find him genuinely attractive ; and that's a bummer...

During the thread's lockdown, I sent the dev a DM, and posted part of it to this thread.
Perhaps you haven't seen it yet, if so here's the link;

https://f95zone.to/threads/origin-story-v0-6-0-jdor.183779/post-15880687

I think the big question that is to be imposed is, does the LIs (aside from Evelyn and Amber who liked him before he even manifested), truly like MC for who he is?
Or are they just interested in him because of his powers?

If our MC somehow gets influenced by a supervillain who neutralizes his powers temporarily, would the LIs' interest in MC drop?
It was the similar scenario with The Last Wish event with Yennefer in The Witcher 3.
Yen didn't feel any different even after Djinn's spell was broken cause she had always loved Geralt regardless of Geralt's last Wish with the Djinn in the books.

I think it might be quite interesting to explore something like that.
Also, I'd say it's gonna be a good character development to get into MC's dilemma thinking "do these LIs truly love me? Or do they only like me due to my powers?"

 

[Bad Wolf]

Monte... you never cease to amaze me with your senseless comments View attachment 4441782

But that's the Canto Forte we all know and love. Ahahaha

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

On the topic of MC's attractive/addictive powers, I'm sure it'll come up at some point and MC might have some internal turmoil where he wonders if the LIs like him for who he is or just his powers.

The impression I got is more like it's just a general attraction and lowering of sexual inhibitions. It probably makes it easier for him to sexually attract people. But I very much doubt it'll cause any sort of long-term romantic or love feelings.

So most likely he'll conclude it's really not that different than being inherently handsome or good in bed, but on a supernatural level. It can help with that initial attraction and getting people in bed for casual sex, but not have much affect on deeper relationships (outside of perhaps the sex itself).

This would be a good moment for the script, to make MC think and doubt and put the player in an uncomfortable position with it.

 

[Rehwyn]

This would be a good moment for the script, to make MC think and doubt and put the player in an uncomfortable position with it.

Indeed. I suspect it won't happen for a while though, since I doubt Parker's going to share this info any time soon.

 

[e6mill]

His abilities are built around sexuality, it is quite logical that MC develops additional baits, the production of aphrodisiac by his body to lure women, because his main function is to steal more abilities through sexual contact. This fits well with the game lore.