VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.6.0] [JDOR]

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Snugglepuff

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RC-1138 Boss said:
We are talking about people who can summon mind wolves, relieve someone's else yesterday and even teleport people by just touching them once. Suspension of disbelief is a must here. :p
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Suspension of disbelief is also dependant on context within the setting and characters as well.
Like if Batman punched the moon out of orbit without any explanation of how he was able to, or anyone questioning it, when there's been nothing to show he's ever had the ability to do that.

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HornyyPussy said:
As others have said, you are COMPLETELY ignoring the story part of the VN which makes your points....well, pointless.
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You have no idea what you are talking about. Where in any of my post have I ignored the story, since I was only talking about powers that I do or don't like for the MC..... and super powers are pretty much the main part of the story.
I have even stated I liked the story and look forward to more.

A pointless post is a post calling another persons post pointless. You add nothing to the debate.
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Nezron said:
You have no idea what you are talking about. Where in any of my post have I ignored the story, since I was only talking about powers that I do or don't like for the MC..... and super powers are pretty much the main part of the story.
I have even stated I liked the story and look forward to more.

A pointless post is a post calling another persons post pointless. You add nothing to the debate.
have a ok day
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Sure kid, sure.......
 
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Snugglepuff said:
Suspension of disbelief is also dependant on context within the setting and characters as well.
Like if Batman punched the moon out of orbit without any explanation of how he was able to, or anyone questioning it, when there's been nothing to show he's ever had the ability to do that.

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The joke here is that in Batman, "Because I'm Batman" is quite accurate, as he has ∞ plot-armor and ∞ way of BS if he has "time" to prepare. I still HATE the Batman vs Superman fight.
 
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OWSam000 said:
I think the time-stop superpower that Luci had is too powerful to exist. (Just similar to one of the characteristic of the famous Speed Force that the Flash has, can nearly stop time moving forward but still aging). Such powerful ability won't stop some ambitious people kidnapping her to steal or transfer her power for their purposes, whatever how powerful she thought her father was.
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yeaah, that one is a thinker... once you get it you really don't need any other powers. And to think she does onlyfans or whatever to make money adds insult to injury, she could literally do anything else to get money. I guess it's an ego thing or something.
 
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Seems a fun game so far even if there's little choices. The MC tho....derpy looking as fuck. What's with the black eyes? looks like he has chronic insomnia...

Lady Steel is easily best girl, so far above the others it's no contest. Evelyn's dialogue seems really out of character when she talks to MC on her birthday, calling herself a cumslut and saying stick it in her ass.
 
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Lord Soth said:
Seems a fun game so far even if there's little choices. The MC tho....derpy looking as fuck. What's with the black eyes? looks like he has chronic insomnia...

Lady Steel is easily best girl, so far above the others it's no contest. Evelyn's dialogue seems really out of character when she talks to MC on her birthday, calling herself a cumslut and saying stick it in her ass.
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My understanding is that the MC is intentionally looking a bit rough around the edges, since he's still recovering from near-death experiences.
 
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Lord Soth said:
Seems a fun game so far even if there's little choices. The MC tho....derpy looking as fuck. What's with the black eyes? looks like he has chronic insomnia...

Lady Steel is easily best girl, so far above the others it's no contest. Evelyn's dialogue seems really out of character when she talks to MC on her birthday, calling herself a cumslut and saying stick it in her ass.
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Tbf some girls talk like that when they are horny/feel secure with their partner/intend to make their partner horny.

But i still agree with you, its one of my few critics with the avn that imo (!) a lot of the women talk like male college bros. I got this feeling from the very beginning when the 4 friends talk in the school together.

The girls dialogue lacks .. feminity in lack of a better description. Somehow its not every women tho but Evelyn, invisible girl and moonsong are strong contenders for this.

Oddly its not so much the case with Lady Steel who supposedly behaves/acts less feminine.
 
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Lord Soth said:
Seems a fun game so far even if there's little choices. The MC tho....derpy looking as fuck. What's with the black eyes? looks like he has chronic insomnia...
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The MC is basically "Year One Invincible" at this point. The game starts with him getting mauled damn near to death by an anthropomorphic tiger guy and he gets his ass handed to him a bit later on in a bar fight because he's a moron that decided it would be a good idea to take on like 3 guys by himself instead of waiting for not-Wonder Woman to finish taking a piss.

Lord Soth said:
Lady Steel is easily best girl, so far above the others it's no contest. Evelyn's dialogue seems really out of character when she talks to MC on her birthday, calling herself a cumslut and saying stick it in her ass.
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Well, yeah, obviously. She's an Alex fan. :ROFLMAO:
 
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UnoriginalUserName said:
The MC is basically "Year One Invincible" at this point. The game starts with him getting mauled damn near to death by an anthropomorphic tiger guy and he gets his ass handed to him a bit later on in a bar fight because he's a moron that decided it would be a good idea to take on like 3 guys by himself instead of waiting for not-Wonder Woman to finish taking a piss.



Well, yeah, obviously. She's an Alex fan. :ROFLMAO:
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Alex is the rich swimmer, right?
 
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The writing is good. Mrs Steel is used to show that having one ability even though powerful still leaves you vulnerable. I don't think she has won any fights without help. And students with powers such Lucia and Anthony can affect her.
hence why the MC needs multiple abilities for him to be a top hero.

I can understand why she let Anthony use his finger poke of doom. seems like the only way to get those feelings from another person. but it was still disappointing that she just tried something after listening to a bunch of girls in a bathroom say it feels good.

It seems that Anthony is the one with the harem and the MC just wants to copy powers.

Not sure why Lady Steel, Marina and Mrs Ross would ever choose the MC over Anthony.
 
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