VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.6.0] [JDOR]

[Deleted member 7726487]

Why do you think they always go there in groups? It's where the "Council of Women" gathers. Don't underestimate the bathroom network.

True. But She was the adult in the room, an experienced hero, could watched for a few days to see how it affected the others. Now she could possibly need saving again if she becomes an addict. I noticed she was looking at her hands at the shop.

Anthony's going to have an army of super heroines if they continue to spread the word. I would love to see the story from his perspective. I wonder why we were told and not shown what happened in the bathroom.

 

[Elduriel]

I wonder why we were told and not shown what happened in the bathroom.

probably fear of the NTR crowd

 

[Deleted member 7726487]

probably fear of the NTR crowd

Yes but even hinting at it would bother them. hopefully this game gets a fan thread.
The MC is written in a way that it doesn't feel like he is in a relationship with anyone, Moonsong is the only one that comes close.
Evelyn just still feels like a friend (now with benefits). None of the women feel like his, yet.

 

[Elduriel]

Yes but even hinting at it would bother them. hopefully this game gets a fan thread.
The MC is written in a way that it doesn't feel like he is in a relationship with anyone, Moonsong is the only one that comes close.
Evelyn just still feels like a friend (now with benefits). None of the women feel like his, yet.

it's the reverse of that more like. Moonsong made it clear it's just fucking for the time being. On the other hand Evelyn wants more, but is willing to let MC fuck others on the side.

 

[Deleted member 7726487]

it's the reverse of that more like. Moonsong made it clear it's just fucking for the time being. On the other hand Evelyn wants more, but is willing to let MC fuck others on the side.

I guess its based of the choices I made. Evelyn was pissed until her birthday. So it feels weird. I didn't know about the threesome until I read it here. I will have to do a replay.

 

[Elduriel]

I guess its based of the choices I made. Evelyn was pissed until her birthday. So it feels weird. I didn't know about the threesome until I read it here. I will have to do a replay.

oh yeah, the Evelyn content can be quite different depending on your choice turning down Moonsong in the first chapter.

 

[Elhemeer]

Since the MC can feel what the clone experiences (and Cat can as well) we can probably safely assume the clones aren't entirely "risk free", at least in terms of sensory transfer.
They don't transmit everything of course (like, the MC can't see through their eyes), but pleasure certainly seems to work, so that suggests pain does as well.
That could potentially be pretty detrimental if he can't either shut it off or at least dampen it somewhat. I'm inclined to think the link would just stop if the clone died, but you never know, it might send the MC into shock or something. If they make it so clone death = MC death then there are VERY few reasons to ever actually pull one out.

Actually, if you go forward to the three-way, you realize that the MC will learn to see through their eyes on purpose eventually. The implications of that scene definitely imply that experiencing one of them dying while in that state could be devastating.

 

[BeingADikDik]

I feel like on 'safe mode' that Ruth's encounter with Anthony should be modified to simply be a power-induced high without sexual euphoria. A love interest obtaining sexual satisfaction from another male (whether by old-fashioned sex or powers) seems like it should either be avoidable or modified in safe mode.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

I feel like on 'safe mode' that Ruth's encounter with Anthony should be modified to simply be a power-induced high without sexual euphoria. A love interest obtaining sexual satisfaction from another male (whether by old-fashioned sex or powers) seems like it should either be avoidable or modified in safe mode.

She shouldn't have gone to try it out to begin with. It's extremely out of character for a supposed superhero to just go willingly subject themselves to something like that with no idea of what it actually is or how it works. It's some "Oh, Robin got captured and put into an elaborate death trap again!" campy bullshit from the 60s Batman show levels of stupid.

 

[Hungover00]

She shouldn't have gone to try it out to begin with. It's extremely out of character for a supposed superhero to just go willingly subject themselves to something like that with no idea of what it actually is or how it works. It's some "Oh, Robin got captured and put into an elaborate death trap again!" campy bullshit from the 60s Batman show levels of stupid.

Holy five-hour orgasm Batman! Bif, smack, Sploosh!

 

[Adhdclassic]

When MC fucks Evelyn noticed the door opened then closed that means Amber was in the room am I correct. it just was never pointed out instead the clone took center stage. Is it NTR if the girl is not with you again confused. I was under the assumption you would have to be dating or married to be NTR. In this game the closest would be Moonsong and Evelyn am I wrong.

 

[Demonius]

When MC fucks Evelyn noticed the door opened then closed that means Amber was in the room am I correct. it just was never pointed out instead the clone took center stage. Is it NTR if the girl is not with you again confused. I was under the assumption you would have to be dating or married to be NTR. In this game the closest would be Moonsong and Evelyn am I wrong.

some people consider any women with someone else and not the MC as NTR. whether they are a love interest or not.

 

[Adhdclassic]

some people consider any women with someone else and not the MC as NTR. whether they are a love interest or not.

Ok thanks cause I was like I don't see this content. Story is fine without looking for hidden tags just enjoy it.

 

[lorkdubo]

She shouldn't have gone to try it out to begin with. It's extremely out of character for a supposed superhero to just go willingly subject themselves to something like that with no idea of what it actually is or how it works. It's some "Oh, Robin got captured and put into an elaborate death trap again!" campy bullshit from the 60s Batman show levels of stupid.

It's one of the weird things in the game. It's like there is a meth dealer at the corner and she goes and tries it just because. There is so much risk of ending addicted to the dude but she tries nonetheless.

 

[V2begone]

It's kind of funny how sensitive some guys are, just the need for a safe mode is borderline pathetic.
Also, the calls for realism come at really convenient times: we question the actions of a superhero underestimating a random nobody at a school toilet (which, im my opinion comes from a sense of superiority, arrogance or confidence that no student would be able to do her harm) but oversee the fact that mc was a nobody with no powers and instantly got to fuck two of the world's most famous/hot women, especially moonsong (before his power manifested), just because.

 

[Jericho85]

some people consider any women with someone else and not the MC as NTR. whether they are a love interest or not.

It's still not NTR whether they think that's what it is or not lol.

When MC fucks Evelyn noticed the door opened then closed that means Amber was in the room am I correct. it just was never pointed out instead the clone took center stage. Is it NTR if the girl is not with you again confused. I was under the assumption you would have to be dating or married to be NTR. In this game the closest would be Moonsong and Evelyn am I wrong.

Yeah that was definitely Amber coming to watch the show Evelyn was hyping all day.

Nothing about the clone scene is anything close to NTR. NTR is when a romantically committed love interest is stolen away by an antagonist. Future LIs or otherwise uncommited single LIs do not count because they can't be "stolen away" since they're free to fuck anyone they want. That's why the scenario usually starts with the LI being a faithful wife or girlfriend, then antagonist/rival comes in and lures her away against MC's will. Nothing like that exists in this game.

I think the only LI that is truly romantically committed to MC right now is Evelyn. She's basically MC's girlfriend if you're on her path. So hypothetically if an antagonist either wooed her away from MC or blackmailed her into fucking him (etc...), then yeah that would be NTR.

 

[Demonius]

It's still not NTR whether they think that's what it is or not lol. NTR is when a romantically committed love interest is stolen away by an antagonist. Nothing about the clone scene is anything close to NTR.

i know

 

[Jericho85]

It's one of the weird things in the game. It's like there is a meth dealer at the corner and she goes and tries it just because. There is so much risk of ending addicted to the dude but she tries nonetheless.

Meh... She already had an idea of what his power did and saw the effects of it from other girls and as of right now, she's got a complex about having sex with a guy without breaking them. So I imagine a chance to have a mindblowing almost drug-like orgasm with a mere touch on her arm would have been worth the risks for her.

Besides, Ruth doesn't really seem like she's the "look before you leap" kind of lady

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Meh... She already had an idea of what his power did and saw the effects of it from other girls and as of right now, she's got a complex about having sex with a guy without breaking them. So I imagine a chance to have a mindblowing almost drug-like orgasm with a mere touch on her arm would have been worth the risks for her.

Besides, Ruth doesn't really seem like she's the "look before you leap" kind of lady

I guess I see things differently, but the first thing I noticed about that guy's power is how fucked up and out of it the girls ended up like they were high as fuck.
That suggests his power creates an explosive overdose of dopamine production (he might even be injecting them with it with a tactile connection). They're going to get addicted to that.
Also, having too much dopamine increases aggression, reduces impulse control, and too much for an extended period of time can lead to mental issues like schizophrenia and psychosis.

Long story short : dude is dealing crack in the bathroom and Lady Steel just decided to go hit him up for a rock because apparently vibrators aren't a thing for her. You'd think a superhero that can crush cars with her bare hands would know better than to go subject herself to that without fully understanding it because, you know, she's supposed to be a superhero.

 

[lorkdubo]

Meh... She already had an idea of what his power did and saw the effects of it from other girls and as of right now, she's got a complex about having sex with a guy without breaking them. So I imagine a chance to have a mindblowing almost drug-like orgasm with a mere touch on her arm would have been worth the risks for her.

Besides, Ruth doesn't really seem like she's the "look before you leap" kind of lady

We don't know if it's an "orgasm" or chemistry manipulation, which in this case would be a mild control of the power. Mind you, what i don't like is the stupidity more than the act. I had the same problem with the step/adoptive mother (which was before the rework of the story/dialogue) hooking up at her son's birthday party. It's stupid, and it's obvious the dev is doing so in a deluded mind of realism. It's not that she is fucking someone else that the MC, that's fine given that they are not in a committed relationship but she should mind the place and time.