VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.8.2] [JDOR]

[Rehwyn]

Yeah, and already pointed out in the very post you quoted that I agree this is not a brainless game. But I'd argue it is a fuckfest, simply one with a purpose.

Yeah, wasn't disagreeing, just emphasizing the point.

 

[buttsman69]

Some people aren't gonna like the game and that's okay, although it pays to be constructive with criticism.

I will say though, within the bounds of the story, it does irritate me when MC is careless with a pretty important secret.

That said, I actually think it's pretty accurate because he's an 18ish year old boy who just received sex powers, lost his virginity, and fell facefirst into a veritable ocean of pussy. I'd be more surprised if anyone could keep their mouth shut while eating out so many babes

 

[Rehwyn]

Some people aren't gonna like the game and that's okay, although it pays to be constructive with criticism.

I will say though, within the bounds of the story, it does irritate me when MC is careless with a pretty important secret.

That said, I actually think it's pretty accurate because he's an 18ish year old boy who just received sex powers, lost his virginity, and fell facefirst into a veritable ocean of pussy. I'd be more surprised if anyone could keep their mouth shut while eating out so many babes

Clearly he just needs to keep his mouth even more full of pussy to keep that tongue occupied.

 

[e6mill]

Also, whoever Scarlett Shadow spoke to on the phone (assuming it wasn't Parker) sounded like SHE had a good idea of what MC's powers were (maybe not, but she sounded like she knew whereof she spoke). And WTF did tiger boy mean when he blamed us for whatev TF he was on about? IMO keeping MC's power secret is sounding like a lost cause at this point.

 

[Rehwyn]

Also, whoever Scarlett Shadow spoke to on the phone (assuming it wasn't Parker) sounded like SHE had a good idea of what MC's powers were (maybe not, but she sounded like she knew whereof she spoke). And WTF did tiger boy mean when he blamed us for whatev TF he was on about? IMO keeping MC's power secret is sounding like a lost cause at this point.

Yeah, it's not going to stay a secret permanently. Too many people know (though largely not due to MC's fault), and it'll be impossible to hide if he ever actually joins the Sisterhood team and starts using multiple powers publicly.

As for tiger boy, we don't know exactly what's going on, but it sounds like whoever is directing Scarlett Shadow manipulated him to believe MC was responsible for something he wasn't in order to get MC in contact with the Sisterhood.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Before I touched on this point I wanted to check in game myself to get an accurate count.

I'd agree this isn't a brainless game, there seems to be a lot of thought put into the characters, their motivations, personalities and the overall plot.

But even though we seem to be still in the early stages of this game the MC has had sexual encounters with a lot of women. 11 already so far to be precise. Some even when first meeting them including Moonsong, Emerald, Isabella, Meredith and Sapphire . Others after knowing them a bit Amber, Anna, Arwen, Evelyn, Cat and Lucia .

That's getting action at a rate equal to most fuckfest games I've played, easily.

Which ties into my previous point about it being unlikely the MCs powers will become a problem as far as him having sex. This is a fuckfest, just one with a purpose. And that'd be completely disrupted if suddenly the MC can't fuck anyone but Ruth without risking hurting them. Especially in a harem game.

Jack having trouble controlling powers he copied is a plot point. There are quite a lot of brainless fuckfest game involving super powers around here. Were Origin Story one of them Jack and Ruth would have already done the deed with some barely plausible explanation to it (if any) and he would have a even better control over the super strength than her, as those games usualy devolve into some generic power fantasy.

I don't expect much sex action between the two at least until the story progress enough for him to have a better (and conscious) control over the copied powers and the limits of his own, or Moonsong figure out a way to stop him from copying powers everytime he has sex.

 

[Daermon420]

There are quite a lot of brainless fuckfest game involving super powers around here.

And I never said this was a brainless fuckfest game. Quite the opposite actually if you read that post you quoted. Just because he hasn't had sex with Ruth yet doesn't make this any less of a fuckfest. It's just not a brainless one. He's getting tail left and right at a pretty fast pace.

Jack having trouble controlling powers he copied is a plot point.

True, but his power helping him with sex is also a plot point. So it'd make little sense if his power didn't mitigate any negative side effects of other powers he gets when it comes to sex. Especially since it is also a plot point that his power can and does sometimes alter the powers he gets.

 

[oieb]

I doubt! His power seems to make him better at using his powers than the original owners, which is why many who have such power become megalomaniacs.

Seems is the key word here. This is just a theory so far. My point is that Jack needs to figure it all out before doing anything with Ruth.

 

[oieb]

That's why I said partially solves the issue. From the sound of it, Chokehold's power is more like extreme resilience rather than super strength (though we'll see more soon). If MC gets her power, he could still do some stuff with Ruth, so long as he didn't cum on her. It'd be a way for at least some stuff to start while they figure out how to deal with the fact that MC getting Ruth's power would make him a liability to other LIs.

Oh, OK then. I misunderstood what you meant.

 

[oieb]

From the sound of it, Chokehold's power is more like extreme resilience rather than super strength

You know? That really puzzles me. She is immovable... but what is that? If it's extreme resilience like you said, why isn't it called resilience or durability? It'd make much more sense.
Also, if we believe Ruth, she seems to think it's a physical ability rather than a mental one. I can only think that Chokehold's body is super solid, so hitting her would be like hitting a block of concrete. Now, someone like that should be able to puch pretty hard and her strength would be above average, but apparently it is not, or her power would be superstrength, right?

 

[e6mill]

You know? That really puzzles me. She is immovable... but what is that? If it's extreme resilience like you said, why isn't it called resilience or durability? It'd make much more sense.
Also, if we believe Ruth, she seems to think it's a physical ability rather than a mental one. I can only think that Chokehold's body is super solid, so hitting her would be like hitting a block of concrete. Now, someone like that should be able to puch pretty hard and her strength would be above average, but apparently it is not, or her power would be superstrength, right?

There was an old print comic X-men villain who was immovable like that. I can't recall his name. He moved himself pretty quick when Wolverine gave him a claws suppository tho!

 

[Elduriel]

Seems is the key word here. This is just a theory so far. My point is that Jack needs to figure it all out before doing anything with Ruth.

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Oh, OK then. I misunderstood what you meant.

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You know? That really puzzles me. She is immovable... but what is that? If it's extreme resilience like you said, why isn't it called resilience or durability? It'd make much more sense.
Also, if we believe Ruth, she seems to think it's a physical ability rather than a mental one. I can only think that Chokehold's body is super solid, so hitting her would be like hitting a block of concrete. Now, someone like that should be able to puch pretty hard and her strength would be above average, but apparently it is not, or her power would be superstrength, right?

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[Dr.TSoni]

Seems is the key word here. This is just a theory so far.

Of course, until the scene happens or we have new information to deny it, it's all theoretical.
I recommend you use multiquote, someone might give you a hard time for multiple posts

There was an old print comic X-men villain who was immovable like that. I can't recall his name. He moved himself pretty quick when Wolverine gave him a claws suppository tho!

Blob?

 

[Daermon420]

You know? That really puzzles me. She is immovable... but what is that? If it's extreme resilience like you said, why isn't it called resilience or durability? It'd make much more sense.
Also, if we believe Ruth, she seems to think it's a physical ability rather than a mental one. I can only think that Chokehold's body is super solid, so hitting her would be like hitting a block of concrete. Now, someone like that should be able to puch pretty hard and her strength would be above average, but apparently it is not, or her power would be superstrength, right?

My guess as to that power is it'd allow Chokehold to nullify any active attempt to move her if she didn't want to move. So couldn't shove her, use a takedown, grab and pull any limbs into a hold etc. That type of power would give her a huge advantage in MMA type fights where takedowns and grapples are so prevalent. But you could still hit and hurt her.

In fact, stopping any backward momentum from a strike and instead just taking all the force might even make someone with this ability weaker to strikes. Think for example someone getting punched hard enough to knock them back, now imagine that person was instead immovable because they were pinned against a wall. In the situation where the person is pinned against the wall, unable to move, they'd absorb more of that kinetic energy from the punch to their body instead of it being lost via motion and take more damage as a result.

 

[Rehwyn]

You know? That really puzzles me. She is immovable... but what is that? If it's extreme resilience like you said, why isn't it called resilience or durability? It'd make much more sense.
Also, if we believe Ruth, she seems to think it's a physical ability rather than a mental one. I can only think that Chokehold's body is super solid, so hitting her would be like hitting a block of concrete. Now, someone like that should be able to puch pretty hard and her strength would be above average, but apparently it is not, or her power would be superstrength, right?

My guess as to that power is it'd allow Chokehold to nullify any active attempt to move her if she didn't want to move. So couldn't shove her, use a takedown, grab and pull any limbs into a hold etc. That type of power would give her a huge advantage in MMA type fights where takedowns and grapples are so prevalent. But you could still hit and hurt her.

In fact, stopping any backward momentum from a strike and instead just taking all the force might even make someone with this ability weaker to strikes. Think for example someone getting punched hard enough to knock them back, now imagine that person was instead immovable because they were pinned against a wall. In the situation where the person is pinned against the wall, unable to move, they'd absorb more of that kinetic energy from the punch to their body instead of it being lost via motion and take more damage as a result.

Yeah, it's honestly a little unclear what Chokehold's power is precisely. Obviously it allows her to survive strikes from Ruth though somehow, or else she'd not be entering the ring with her.

 

[Daermon420]

Yeah, it's honestly a little unclear what Chokehold's power is precisely. Obviously it allows her to survive strikes from Ruth though somehow, or else she'd not be entering the ring with her.

Well Chokehold is a professional fighter with an ego to match. Just because she thinks she can take a punch from Ruth doesn't mean she actually can. And as to why they'd allow the fight to go on even if it's uncertain whether Chokehold could take a punch from Ruth? Easy, money from the spectacle of two famous fighters duking it out.

The main difference between Ruth and Chokehold as fighters, other than their individual superpowers, is that Chokehold is a sport fighter used to conflict in a controlled environment where others aren't trying to actively kill her, so they hold back. Ruth on the other hand is a killer, given a superhero badge because the others in the Sisterhood vouched for her and wanted her on the team. That's why I think it's possible Chokehold is underestimating Ruth, and Ruth might end up accidentally killing her, since she's not used to holding back in a fight.

 

[HornyyPussy]

Blob?

He was ALMOST immovable

Stonewall was more immovable than Blob though (more immovable? Is that a thing?)

 

[Dr.TSoni]

(more immovable? Is that a thing?)

In superhero universes it's definitely a term XD

 

[Rehwyn]

Well Chokehold is a professional fighter with an ego to match. Just because she thinks she can take a punch from Ruth doesn't mean she actually can. And as to why they'd allow the fight to go on even if it's uncertain whether Chokehold could take a punch from Ruth? Easy, money from the spectacle of two famous fighters duking it out.

The main difference between Ruth and Chokehold as fighters, other than their individual superpowers, is that Chokehold is a sport fighter used to conflict in a controlled environment where others aren't trying to actively kill her, so they hold back. Ruth on the other hand is a killer, given a superhero badge because the others in the Sisterhood vouched for her and wanted her on the team. That's why I think it's possible Chokehold is underestimating Ruth, and Ruth might end up accidentally killing her, since she's not used to holding back in a fight.

I might be misremembering something, but I swear I saw that they'd fought before. Maybe I'm just imagining that though.

Episode 8 is going to serve as the "Season 1" finale on Steam though, so I suspect something significant will go down in the next update. The fight is one possible way.

 

[Daermon420]

I might be misremembering something, but I swear I saw that they'd fought before. Maybe I'm just imagining that though.

It's possible, my memory is a bit fuzzy on the details of that as well. From what I remember when the challenge from Chokehold is brought up by the MC Ruth says she's fought others with the same "immovable" power and won before.