VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.8.2] [JDOR]

[Rehwyn]

On the topic of Chokehold, I'd like to point out that she'd fit alphabetically here in the Profiles.



And if she is resilient enough to survive Ruth without having super strength that would make her a danger to others, she's a perfect candidate for solving part of MC's problem with regards to being with Ruth.

 

[Daermon420]

And if she is resilient enough to survive Ruth without having super strength that would make her a danger to others, she's a perfect candidate for solving MC's problem with regards to being with Ruth.

This is an interesting thought. I kinda figured we'd be using the pills with Ruth to get the durability to withstand her before having sex with her. It'd give a story reason to test those even on a manwhore run that fucks every opportunity.

But I could see it maybe going this route.

 

[Rehwyn]

This is an interesting thought. I kinda figured we'd be using the pills with Ruth to get the durability to withstand her before having sex with her. It'd give a story reason to test those even on a manwhore run that fucks every opportunity.

But I could see it maybe going this route.

Yeah, I could see Chokehold also being a good pill test opportunity too. Maybe a little behind-the-scene fight wager or something?

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

It could be. But would Ruth even want to participate in such a wager? Plus they are trying to keep Jack's powers a secret.
They only needed to reveal them to Cat and Marina because otherwise those two would be rapists would have succeed in sending Cat to that prison.

 

[oieb]

And if she is resilient enough to survive Ruth without having super strength that would make her a danger to others, she's a perfect candidate for solving part of MC's problem with regards to being with Ruth.

Yeah, but it kinda kills the harem. That or pills just gives Jack a way to get Steel's power without dying, it doesn't give him a way to handle it. He'd most definitely kill any girl he hugged.

And yes, I agree with you that Chokehold could be a potential LI or something. She won't die in the fight, it'd be very bad for the plot regarding Steel's fears, not to mention a waste of perfectly useful power.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

He'd most definitely kill any girl he hugged.

I doubt! His power seems to make him better at using his powers than the original owners, which is why many who have such power become megalomaniacs.

 

[Daermon420]

I doubt! His power seems to make him better at using his powers than the original owners, which is why many who have such power become megalomaniacs.

Plus, as seen by the girl who can drink cum to stay young, powers that rely on sexuality seem to enhance that to make them easier to use. I believe either Emerald or Moonsong remarked that the MC was way too good at fucking for his experience level, near zero, so I think his power works in a similar way. I'd bet that any power he picks up would be changed in a way that'd allow him to still fuck without negative consequences.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

I doubt! His power seems to make him better at using his powers than the original owners, which is why many who have such power become megalomaniacs.

He is not better at using them. When Jack and Ruth attacked the rapists in the bathroom he used a emerald energy blast strong enough to crack one of the guy's head against a wall. Because of that Ruth had to cover for him with director Brown and warned Jack about controlling his shots next time when not fighting a sexual assaulter. His reply was that he had no idea how to control it.

Something similar but less dramatic happened after he had sex with Saphire, he subconsciously activated her powers for a moment.

I think Jack's power give him acess to the full capabilities of the powers he is copying from the start without need for training, but he still has trouble controlling them as the events above show.

Changing the matter a bit, i wonder what the rapist was going to say about principal Brown before Ruth bitch slapped him. Somehow i get the suspicion that will be plot relevant in the future.

 

[Rehwyn]

Yeah, but it kinda kills the harem. That or pills just gives Jack a way to get Steel's power without dying, it doesn't give him a way to handle it. He'd most definitely kill any girl he hugged.

And yes, I agree with you that Chokehold could be a potential LI or something. She won't die in the fight, it'd be very bad for the plot regarding Steel's fears, not to mention a waste of perfectly useful power.

That's why I said partially solves the issue. From the sound of it, Chokehold's power is more like extreme resilience rather than super strength (though we'll see more soon). If MC gets her power, he could still do some stuff with Ruth, so long as he didn't cum on her. It'd be a way for at least some stuff to start while they figure out how to deal with the fact that MC getting Ruth's power would make him a liability to other LIs.

 

[Daermon420]

He is not better at using them. When Jack and Ruth attacked the rapists in the bathroom he used a emerald energy blast strong enough to crack one of the guy's head against a wall. Because of that Ruth had to cover for him with director Brown and warned Jack about controlling his shots next time when not fighting a sexual assaulter. His reply was that he had no idea how to control it.

Something similar but less dramatic happened after he had sex with Saphire, he subconsciously activated her powers for a moment.

I think Jack's power give him acess to the full capabilities of the powers he is copying from the start without need for training, but he still has trouble controlling them as the events above show.

Changing the matter a bit, i wonder what the rapist was going to say about principal Brown before Ruth bitch slapped him. Somehow i get the suspicion that will be plot relevant in the future.

When he attacked the rapist he wasn't actively trying to fuck the guy, so I doubt his power would hold back in that scenario to prevent hurting that guy. And he barely practiced at all using that particular power so blasting someone with it in the heat of the moment it's no surprise he'd go a bit overboard.

Even discounting the story hints that his power makes it easy for him to seduce, excellent at sex and even changes some powers he's picked up I doubt JDOR would make it so the MC has trouble fucking without hurting someone. It'd go against the very theme of this game, a guy who fucks to get superpowers, if you take away his ability to fuck, or even just make it difficult for him to do so. Especially in a harem game where Ruth is one of the obvious primary love interests. If getting her power made it so he couldn't have sex with the others it'd defeat the entire purpose of making this a harem to begin with.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

When he attacked the rapist he wasn't actively trying to fuck the guy, so I doubt his power would hold back in that scenario to prevent hurting that guy. And he barely practiced at all using that particular power so blasting someone with it in the heat of the moment it's no surprise he'd go a bit overboard.

Even discounting the story hints that his power makes it easy for him to seduce, excellent at sex and even changes some powers he's picked up I doubt JDOR would make it so the MC has trouble fucking without hurting someone. It'd go against the very theme of this game, a guy who fucks to get superpowers, if you take away his ability to fuck, or even just make it difficult for him to do so.

Sexual powers making the person more attractive and/or better at sex was already established before. That has no bearing on Jack having trouble controlling the powers he copied. Also JDOR has been very consistent into not turning Origin Story into a brainless fuckfest up until now (that is not the main theme of this game). So i doubt Jack's issues with controlling the powers he gets will simply disappear.

 

[Daermon420]

Sexual powers making the person more attractive and/or better at sex was already established before. That has no bearing on Jack having trouble controlling the powers he copied. Also JDOR has been very consistent into not turning Origin Story into a brainless fuckfest up until now (that is not the main theme of this game). So i doubt Jack's issues with controlling the powers he gets will simply disappear.

But it has been established that his power both makes him better at sex and alters the powers he picks up. So it'd track that his power would alter anything he picks up to either make him even better at fucking, or to at least prevent them from interfering.

That could even be one of the MCs weaknesses. His durability/strength get weakened or even turned off when he's having sex. So villains would aim to seduce him and take him out while he's in the act and vulnerable.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Something similar but less dramatic happened after he had sex with Saphire, he subconsciously activated her powers for a moment.

A power he has never used before and that he can control within seconds of acquiring it.

Changing the matter a bit, i wonder what the rapist was going to say about principal Brown before Ruth bitch slapped him. Somehow i get the suspicion that will be plot relevant in the future.

I think it would have been very helpful to let him finish trashing the principal.

 

[Jantio1999]

I think it would have been very helpful to let him finish trashing the principal.

I think it was more of a joke by the dev, I mean an arrow with leveling up...

 

[Dr.TSoni]

I think it was more of a joke by the dev, I mean an arrow with leveling up...

Likely, but it still shows how easily MC masters new powers

 

[Jantio1999]

Likely, but it still shows how easily MC masters new powers

I don't think so, see the other stuff, he need to do a lot, and could control the strength.He couldn't control, his duplicate showing up/disappearing, it just showed up by accident...

 

[Daermon420]

I don't think so, see the other stuff, he need to do a lot, and could control the strength.He couldn't control, his duplicate showing up/disappearing, it just showed up by accident...

Yet he managed to get it to participate in spit roasting Evelyn without much trouble. Another example that his power makes him good at sex and using his powers for that purpose.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

I don't think so, see the other stuff, he need to do a lot, and could control the strength.He couldn't control, his duplicate showing up/disappearing, it just showed up by accident...

But of the various powers he has accumulated, it seems to be the only one that creates some problems for him.

Yet he managed to get it to participate in spit roasting Evelyn without much trouble. Another example that his power makes him good at sex and using his powers for that purpose.

in fact it seems that only the appearing and disappearing is the problem since he seems to be able to control it once "summoned"

 

[Daermon420]

in fact it seems that only the appearing and disappearing is the problem since he seems to be able to control it once "summoned"

Yep, but I did notice it just happened to appear when he was getting frisky with Evelyn even though he had no idea how and didn't do it intentionally. It's almost like his power sensed Evelyn would enjoy getting double teamed and activated the clone to help him out.

 

[xXWolfZz]

Not vibing with this game after its initial promising start with the premise reminding me of Sky High horny edition.

Dont really like the sisterhood, moonsong especially rubs me the wrong way. Cant wait to betray them 1st chance I get. (I know ill get no chance with this spineless MC)

Hate how MC basically tells everyone about his broken super powers (like what logical reason would you do that dumb af).
MC prob one of worst ive played in recent memory tbh

Cant believe im saying this but all these girls just constanly talking about sex is a real turn OFF. Evenlyn also having a 360 personality change in 1 day and just becomes a slut like the rest of cast who thought that was a good descision?

Dunno why im takin this game seriously cuz the writing in general just so mid.