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Michkooo

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Damn this game is good ! Love the characters and the sex scenes. I'm intrigued by the universe and the plot. That Ch 7 scene with Meredith was so hot, I hope we see more of her.

Can't wait for more Amber content too.

Really cool AVN glad I found it
 

Elhemeer

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oieb, I know you said you're done, but I just want to throw in my two cents.

Everything you said is true ... and I agree: They're NOT pros. They consider themselves pros 'cause they don't really have anyone to compare themselves too.

They've been brought together as a marketing face for a clearly corrupt government agency. They're kids and flawed rookies that were thrown out into the field with minimal training. The Team is less than four years old, and from every indication they trained themselves. They have talent, but they're mostly potential -- even Ghostraven.

They're pushing at their constraints -- the MC is just another facet of that. But the MTF wants them to be just good enough to keep the public happy. They don't care if the girls are good at protecting this kid with troubling powers -- if he doesn't make it, that's fine with them.

I saw a suggestion that the story might morph into the MC's group (presumably the sisterhood, Parker's crew, his aunt's crew, and anyone else he gets on his side) eventually taking on the MTF and it's leadership. Maybe they'll get some real training before then, if that's where the story goes.

Anyway, all that stuff you pointed out is stuff people learn over time, working with veterans who pass that training on in the field. The sisterhood don't have any of that -- at least none that we've seen. Hopefully that shows up in the next part.

Also, the entire first part of the game took place in ... pretty sure it was exactly 7 days, right? Attacked Friday night, Saturday and Sunday at HQ, The five school days and The Fight on Friday night. I guess they woke up Saturday morning, so maybe 8 days total.

We all saw how all the sisters acted in that time. They have training and they can fight, but they're not pros, and they've never been bodyguards before -- and they had no-one to tell them how to be pros. And as far as I can tell, that was on purpose.
 

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The issue with that is that it would still be extremely short notice, if Riley had alcohol then they wouldn't have gone to the shop, and Riley gave MC details on where Lake's shop is in Riley's room not MC's room so unless MC randomly gave Ev precise details on where they were going when he told her they were going to the store then the bug wouldn't have helped locate them.

It's more likely the bug was to monitor MC in case he manifested before they expected it.
I did mean the bug might have only been part of the intel they were collecting on him. Having something on his phone, for example, could give real-time position details if they did something like that too. Though I don't really remember if he's shown to have it with him.

Anyways, those were just examples. There's a non-zero chance there's bugs and other devices being used to monitor him we haven't been explicitly shown.
 

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Origin Story [v0.8.1] [JDOR] - Update only

Ren'Py/Python version changed, read the Spoiler before installing!

You need to delete the "OriginStory-0.8.1-pc/renpy/common/00layeredimage.rpy" file

Win/Linux: v0.7.0 -> v0.8.1 [1,32 GB]
- MEGA - PIXELDRAIN - - WORKUPLOAD

Mac: v0.7.0 -> v0.8.1 [1,32 GB]
- MEGA - PIXELDRAIN - - WORKUPLOAD

Win/Linux Compressed: v0.7.0 -> v0.8.1 [214 MB]
- MEGA - PIXELDRAIN - - WORKUPLOAD

Mac Compressed: v0.7.0 -> v0.8.1 [218 MB]
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I'm looking for a compressed version of the full game?
 
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oieb

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This may be a stupid question, but... Does this mean we won't get Chokehold's power?... It's a cool power, but the murder attempt may be a bone-killer; a pity, really. I think that if someone can make it work, it's JDOR, though. "You're dating Chokehold?! Wasn't she the one who tried to tear your limbs off?" "We're past that. It's water under the bridge." I'd love to see that.
 
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Dr.TSoni

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This may be a stupid question, but... Does this mean we won't get Chokehold's power?... It's a cool power, but the murder attempt may be a bone-killer; a pity, really. I think that if someone can make it work, it's JDOR, though. "You're dating Chokehold?! Wasn't she the one who tried to tear your limbs off?" "We're past that. It's water under the bridge." I'd love to see that.
No, but we should be able to have the powers of Inferno and Scarlet Shadow
 

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This may be a stupid question, but... Does this mean we won't get Chokehold's power?... It's a cool power, but the murder attempt may be a bone-killer; a pity, really. I think that if someone can make it work, it's JDOR, though. "You're dating Chokehold?! Wasn't she the one who tried to tear your limbs off?" "We're past that. It's water under the bridge." I'd love to see that.
There's the power stealing drug that Georgia had developed, knock her out and pop a pill in her mouth. Much the same way Ruth did to MC, which would a delightful symmetry and irony
 
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Elduriel

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This may be a stupid question, but... Does this mean we won't get Chokehold's power?... It's a cool power, but the murder attempt may be a bone-killer; a pity, really. I think that if someone can make it work, it's JDOR, though. "You're dating Chokehold?! Wasn't she the one who tried to tear your limbs off?" "We're past that. It's water under the bridge." I'd love to see that.
who would want to fuck that lunatic. With the pill potentially, but they are not exactly on that level yet to force prisoners into medical experiments. Plus with Ruth's power super strength is already covered, should be enough 90% of the time, the other powers can compensate for the rest. Once you have Lucia's it's child's play from there on.
 

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well, my laptop (which is from my work) controlled the part which I can enable/disable Windows Defender Smartscreen, now I can't play this shit. Any recent android port? The last one according to my search was May, unless there is an October that I can't seem to find?
 

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2. What was Chokehold's plan?: Let's say for a sec that she hadn't hoped to leave that place uncuffed; there were still a lot of things that could have gone wrong. She had what she needed to kill Ruth, but the more time it took, the more likely it was that she would fail. She should have known that. I mean, what if Ruth discovered her weakness by chance, or some people decided to stop the fight before things went Oh-the-humanity on live TV? Ruth couldn't have handle her, but someone else might have. There were a lot of people there with unknown powers; some more could arrive anytime. Chokehold's powers can't protect her from everything. Other supers might make Ruth temporarily intangible, saving her; teleport Ruth away; move Chokehold around with telekinesis without touching her; paralyze her; mind-control her; send her to sleep; make her phase through the ground, burying her; mess up her homeostasis; suck the air out of her lungs, suffocating her; and, of course, shoot her. Can she withstand a bullet? I don't think so. Anyway, the only chance she had was to do it quickly before anyone realized what was going on, but she didn't. She took her time and even put a pin on it to kill Steel's friend. Why would she do that? It's stupid.

As for her plan I think everyone already covered she just wanted to kill Ruth and humiliate her in the process. why did nobody jump into the ring to stop it? would anyone who watches UFC matches hop in the cage to stop a fighter from killing another fighter? nope, they are all their for blood and the spectacle. only refs and a fighters team would dare stop the fight. and as we know there are no refs in super fights just rules that are upheld arbitrarily by the venue who only cares about making money.

someone has a plan, its highly likely Scarlet shadow or whoever her name is, instigated chokehold into this fight as well as orchestrated the distraction that kept the sisters busy and unable to intervene quickly. add the fact that Ruth made it clear the people pulling the strings in the background actually want her out of the sisterhood, so we know why they didnt intervene, they saw her humiliation and loss as their chance, and if she dies then they dont even have to kick her out cause she dead.

As for it being stupid, chokehold chose a calculated path of retribution, and succeeded til the MC got in the way. the pretty boy with a bruised face. before he punched her in the junk i was pretty sure he was toast even though I knew he is the MC so technically would live to see another update. without him she would have accomplished all of her goals.
 

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who would want to fuck that lunatic. With the pill potentially, but they are not exactly on that level yet to force prisoners into medical experiments. Plus with Ruth's power super strength is already covered, should be enough 90% of the time, the other powers can compensate for the rest. Once you have Lucia's it's child's play from there on.
I would for science.
 
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