Definitely a good start for a game, but it has some minor issues (nothing horribly wrong, just small things detracting from the enjoyment.
Let me start by saying that I like a lot of the girls. The MILF is not my type, a bit too haggard and dour for my tastes, but the pregnant soon to be MILF definitely is. Younger girls are all nice to look at.
The story isn't original, the characters aren't either, but that's not really important, as long as it's done well, and apart from the Engrish issues (which are already being worked on, as the dev states), that does seem to be the case.
I do think it is a bit too full of mechanics for a Ren'py game, it's still basically a VN, but you need to make way too many clicks to get to the only interesting thing, the character interactions and the story.
And even if you tone down the complexity, the menu is still quite slow and unnecessarily complicated.
Alas, that's me and my personal problem and bias against Sandbox games, and it isn't the worst sandbox. The hint system works, and if the dev got rid of a few unnecessary clicks while trying to do anything, it really wouldn't be much of a problem anymore.
Overall, I had fun with it, despite some minor issues (more about them in the spoilers) and look forward to seeing more.
While I was playing it, there were a few things that I find annoying in regard to VNs, but most of them are really minor, and I don't want to make it seem as if I have more of an issue with the game than I have. It is a fun game, well-made.
So I'll just leave it in spoilers, if anyone does WANT to see it,they can.