VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

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GokutheG

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Zara Scarlet said:
Seymour already has impeded Lena's modelling career, by persuading local photographers and the art gallery, not to employ her. But his threat to ban her from Peoplegram never materialised. How would he have done that anyway? If we assume that Peoplegram is just an alternative name for Instagram, how would someone like Seymour be able to get anyone banned from it? He may have quite a bit of power in Baluart, but does that extend internationally, as it would have to, in order to achieve that? It always seemed a pretty lame threat to me, that Lena would see through immediately. And the fact that she was later employed by a visiting photographer from another city, demonstrates pretty clearly that Seymour's influence doesn't extend far beyond the boundaries of Baluart.

Lena has a lot of potential options, that Seymour can't interfere with. She can carry on working at the cafe (which her efforts can make a lot more successful), she has her budding music career, she'll possibly be able to work as a bar tender or gogo dancer at Blazer, and of course as a model for out of town photographers, Billy and even Stan. And that doesn't include Stalkfap and whatever that might lead to in the future. So although Seymour can initially make things difficult for her, once she's weathered the storm, the prospects for her, are not as bleak as she might have believed

I think if Ian and Lena are together, the biggest threat from Seymour, is what he can do to Ian's asperations. He can seriously impede Ian's writing ambitions, because he's a major player in publishing. New authors need all the luck they can get, and making an enemy like Seymour, is the last thing an aspiring writer would want. So I reckon, Seymour will use that, as a last resort to persuade Lena to give in to his demands. No doubt he'll threaten to destroy Ian, if she doesn't. In that case, as you suggest, it will probably depend on what kind of relationship Ian has with Minerva and Victor. My guess is, Seymour believes that Minerva is in his pocket, but if Ian and her have previously had a relationship, she may not vote the way he expects. And if Ian has started writing a column in Victor's literary magazine, I assume that will lead to him helping Ian establishing himself as a writer.
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Good thing my Lena doesn't need to worry about Ian since they aren't dating. But on a serious note I was just talking about countering Seymour for players who either want to focus on Lena's modeling or for players who want to get off his route once on it.

The way I can see Seymour going after her online presence would be to try and hit her with something like false DMCA on the site or something like that. Like he can either buy the copyright from a professional photographer or lie and say he was the one who took the photos and try to bleed her with some bs like that.

Realisticly I just don't think the dev was ever going to actually make it so that Seymour would completely block a career path for either mc if they didn't follow his route. That only downplays his "villain" role in the story since there needs to be alternatives for player who have absolutely no interest in interacting with the character. The only way for him to be seen as the big imposing threat that he's supposed to be would have been to actually do that tho until he was able to be exposed but that wouldn't have been fun for the players.
 
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lucadiadis said:
My last comment made me think about sth so I have checked: ORS has been going on for five years. Twelve chapters. EK doesn't seem to do anything else.
For the same amount of time, Kafka, from 1915 to 1920, wrote and published his most famous novels, Die Verwandlung 1915, 1919 In der Strafkolonie, 1920 Ein Landarzt Kleine Erzählungen.
May I add that he was a full time insurance sales agent writing on his free time, and was employee of the month and top biller every single month.
Anyone still paying EK is either in love with her or next of kin.
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Please you dont you ever compare "MUH ALPHA COCK" Evakiss to Kafka ever again:HideThePain:
 
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ffive said:
I have seen the game script for both ORS and GGGB.

GGGB doesn't hold candle to what ORS script is like at this point, in terms of complexity. Two independent agents with freedom of choice make considerable difference.
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I do take into consideration the two-protagonist challenge - to my opinion it was a mistake, Lena would have been a meaningful character on its own - the problem is that it still does not compensate for the slow pace. Faaaar from it.
 
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varpep said:
If Eva is struggling with writer's block, she could always consult the Shakespeare of F95zone porn forum, mommysboiii
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Well Hamlet watching his mum getting fucked by both his personal bully and father's murderer, that's ultimate taboo cuckold isn't it.
 
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Birdnman993 said:
I think it's a matter of perspective that Lena cheating on Ian isn't that crazy, she's just a woman with a very high libido, the craziest thing in this story at the moment is Seymour who is a rich man with a sick obsession for Lena.

And I'm not denying that they do more depraved things especially because Lena will probably be involved in a porn movie because of Billy's contract, but nothing as ridiculously crazy and stupid as all those who masturbate thinking about Lena being sold to a sheik in dubai, because that would be shitting on a very good story just for the pleasure of a few.

In short, it's great that there is sex, hot stuff, tattoos, lewd clothes, that's why we like this game apart from telling the story, but all within limits that do not lose the verisimilitude.
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the only thing that was is in gggb that i don't think we will see in ors is incest. besides that, tho, i see ors being just as crazy as gggb and ors has suggested and shown it will do just that.
 
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lucadiadis said:
Hold on a sec, you are not seriously saying that it takes more time to write a porn game than a masterpiece of classic litterature right ?
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found this online

  • On the Road by Jack Kerouac: Three weeks.
  • The Boy in the Striped Pajamas by John Boyne: Two and a half days.
  • The Gambler by Fyodor Dostoyevsky: 26 days.
  • I, the Jury by Mickey Spillane: Nine days.
 
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Mravac Kid said:
Foundation by Isaac Asimov: 42 years. :)
(Okay, so that was for the *whole series* but hey. It's a good joke. :p )
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Just the second part of The Gods Themselves (not from the Foundation cycle, and my favorite piece of SF ever written), must have taken a longer time to write than the whole game.
 
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My favorite route to play in this game is the Ian Lena open couple route. With full on swinging. So it's a shame that it's so painfully neglected at this stage of the game. We had one threesome with Louise and it was great but are still yet to get a MFM threesome with Lena and Ian. Which characters do you guys think would make decent swinging candidates for the couple?(Both male and female). For me I think Nat would be a great candidate. I didn't play GGGB but I read somewhere in this forum that she had a boyfriend that she would have threesomes with. If she is still with him in ORS maybe she and her boyfriend could have a foursome with Ian and Lena. :unsure: But all that is just wishful thinking and pure speculation.
 
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varpep said:
My favorite route to play in this game is the Ian Lena open couple route. With full on swinging. So it's a shame that it's so painfully neglected at this stage of the game. We had one threesome with Louise and it was great but are still yet to get a MFM threesome with Lena and Ian. Which characters do you guys think would make decent swinging candidates for the couple?(Both male and female). For me I think Nat would be a great candidate. I didn't play GGGB but I read somewhere in this forum that she had a boyfriend that she would have threesomes with. If she is still with him in ORS maybe she and her boyfriend could have a foursome with Ian and Lena. :unsure: But all that is just wishful thinking and pure speculation.
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I can't wait for mfm threesome but I'm not sure with whom...
 
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