VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 FULL] [Eva Kiss]

[RobertKing]

what's with this Ian hate ?? Dude can be an mma fighter, a writer or bum as of now. And maybe even options in the future

Ian sucks as a main character. EK could have let the players embody someone fantastically more interesting, an aspiring dj, an aspiring club promoter, an aspiring photographer, someone starting a modeling agency... but no. He's just some office nobody working on sci fi novel.

I have never played a video game where the main character is more boring than real life.

I'm being harsh I supposed also because... this game is awesome and its upsetting there is such an eye sore of game play which is Ian. EK created this amazing game where characters can choose good or bad and have their future in the game reflect those choices.

That dichotomy of decision making completely could have existed as a Dj, or photographer, or modeling agency founder with hard moral decisions and erotic paths.

 

[Ray_D]

Ian sucks as a main character. EK could have let the players embody someone fantastically more interesting, an aspiring dj, an aspiring club promoter, an aspiring photographer, someone starting a modeling agency... but no. He's just some office nobody working on sci fi novel.

I have never played a video game where the main character is more boring than real life.

I'm being harsh I supposed also because... this game is awesome and its upsetting there is such an eye sore of game play which is Ian. EK created this amazing game where characters can choose good or bad and have their future in the game reflect those choices.

That dichotomy of decision making completely could have existed as a Dj, or photographer, or modeling agency founder with hard moral decisions and erotic paths.

These positions have already been taken. Mike is already the dj, billy or as I call him the race shifter is the wannabe promoter of a high caliber hooker club and the photographer is axel and the others I can't remember.

 

[mommysboiii]

It is better to become a chad than to be born one.

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Ian is T bagging..

 

[mommysboiii]

Don't worry when the axel fight happens I will be the first to share the screenshot of your boy getting knocked out.
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Nah axel better I will be first send you screenshot of him stealing his gf nerf holly,alison, cindy....

And ian crying with terrible book ....

 

[mommysboiii]

I don't know about needing Jeremy to act tough, Chad Ian doesn't stand for Axel's nonsense either way.

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My ian never says something like that

 

[Ray_D]

Nah axel better I will be first send you screenshot of him stealing his gf nerf holly,alison, cindy....

And ian crying with terrible book ....

We'll see about that, Mr. Cuck. Although to be honest we'll have to wait 2 years for that haha.

 

[ffive]

My ian never says something like that

That's probably because Ian's lines can differ depending on how high is his chad variable, which increases when taking aggressive and/or dominant options. I feel no one is surprised your Ian avoids those.

 

[GokutheG]

Ian sucks as a main character. EK could have let the players embody someone fantastically more interesting, an aspiring dj, an aspiring club promoter, an aspiring photographer, someone starting a modeling agency... but no. He's just some office nobody working on sci fi novel.

I have never played a video game where the main character is more boring than real life.

I'm being harsh I supposed also because... this game is awesome and its upsetting there is such an eye sore of game play which is Ian. EK created this amazing game where characters can choose good or bad and have their future in the game reflect those choices.

That dichotomy of decision making completely could have existed as a Dj, or photographer, or modeling agency founder with hard moral decisions and erotic paths.

Lena feels like the main character Eva finds more interested in writing. Ian seems more like an experiment into writing a guy mc. I expect her to go back to having one girl mc for her next game.

 

[Ray_D]

My ian never says something like that

You're too weak to go down that road, boi.

 

[dobzzz]

Ian sucks as a main character. EK could have let the players embody someone fantastically more interesting, an aspiring dj, an aspiring club promoter, an aspiring photographer, someone starting a modeling agency... but no. He's just some office nobody working on sci fi novel.

I have never played a video game where the main character is more boring than real life.

I'm being harsh I supposed also because... this game is awesome and its upsetting there is such an eye sore of game play which is Ian. EK created this amazing game where characters can choose good or bad and have their future in the game reflect those choices.

That dichotomy of decision making completely could have existed as a Dj, or photographer, or modeling agency founder with hard moral decisions and erotic paths.

All those are like very porn game MC ever

 

[gregers]

someone fantastically more interesting, an aspiring dj, an aspiring club promoter, an aspiring photographer, someone starting a modeling agency...

Yeah, those have been done to death. (So has the struggling author to be fair, but at least it's not the tropiest porn trope that ever troped.)

 

[TheCandyman]

I know that the corruption oriented content is not like GGGB, but I have some questions:

- is accepting Seymour offer the only way for Lena of going in a sort of perverted/corrupted direction? I really hate the well dressed-well shaved-well in shape-old rich man stereotype and i can't force myself to accept his offer (like in GGGB with your mother's new man)

- are there other chapters or contents planned?

- No Ed story? Really? Can't you see how sad he is for not having a child? Isn't there perchance a some kind of way to help him?

- If I remember well in the first scenes there is the appearance of a strange hobo. Does he ever appear again?

Thanks!

 

[Xupuzulla]

Nah axel better I will be first send you screenshot of him stealing his gf nerf holly,alison, cindy....

And ian crying with terrible book ....

Hes already stealing Cindy from him,lil bro Ian cant catch a break

 

[Prince of Depression]

someone fantastically more interesting, an aspiring dj, an aspiring club promoter, an aspiring photographer, someone starting a modeling agency.

How this is “fantastically more interesting”? It's just your shitty normie cliche from cheap erotica, bruh.
Hurr Hurr WhY DoN'T We PlaY As PrEsiDenT oR Pimp or MiLliOnAiRe.
Ian is a perfect MC. You just have absolutely no taste, and your primitive kitsch is what really boring as hell.

 

[dobzzz]

Hes already stealing Cindy from him,lil bro Ian cant catch a break

Shut up!! u hater. No one stealing Cindy from Love path Ian and chad Ian doesn't care

 

[dobzzz]

Poor guy haven't been properly raised on exclusive diet of roids, human fetuses and bull testicles, like Axel and Jack, so, as a result, he doesn't resemble a Genetically Perfect Pig. So it naturally makes some people inclined to point out the error of his ways.

Only thing Ian lacking is a bit of height, even then he is considered average in most part of the world. Dude has a decent physique, is smart and witty, can fight and if you are playing the dbag/chad path dude's basically goal driven, manipulative and self centered.

 

[Geigi]

Only thing Ian lacking is a bit of height, even then he is considered average in most part of the world. Dude has a decent physique, is smart and witty, can fight and if you are playing the dbag/chad path dude's basically goal driven, manipulative and self centered.

Bruce Lee is shorter than Ian. Yet, he's a legend.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Shut up!! u hater. No one stealing Cindy from Love path Ian and chad Ian doesn't care

Cindy belongs to Axel,im sorry

 

[Marley300]

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Quick status report:

I finally got the images from the colorist, and I've started editing and finishing them up. Once I have them all finished, I'll ensamble all the pieces of the update, playtest it and release it, hopefully at the end of next week!

While I was waiting, I've started writing the follow up scenes for Lena in chapter 13, and I also did some progress in the artwork. I'm still figuring out which scenes to include in the chapter, since I want to try and move the story forward without wasting too much time. If you guys are interested, I can make a post commenting about the results of the

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we did, which I'm considering when coming up and planning the scenes to include.

Other than that, I'll keep focusing on pushing the next update out!

 

[Jplays512]

Only thing Ian lacking is a bit of height, even then he is considered average in most part of the world. Dude has a decent physique, is smart and witty, can fight and if you are playing the dbag/chad path dude's basically goal driven, manipulative and self centered.

Ian is actually taller than average if you go by the world as a whole. He is average for America and would only be short in Scandinavian countries and a few other select countries.