Does anyone know how many “wits” points are required to add a clause to Seymours contract?
It appears my Lena is a little too dim for her own good
It appears my Lena is a little too dim for her own good
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I'm a little late to the 0.9 party here. Overall, very pleased with it, keeping in mind that there are at this point SO many paths to tie up (with red string) there needs to be some degree of consolidation to keep the story moving forward. I have no issue with Lena being locked into either subservience with Seymour or otherwise being a target for Seymour to destroy if she rejects his deal. He's the Big Bad, after all, and it makes sense he would drive a number of big decisions in the narrative. My theory/hope is that Wildcats is essentially a prostitution ring Seymour uses to advance his business deals and have fun with on the side.
If Eva is still operating under the plan she talked about a while ago, 0.10 might be the halfway point and where relationships get "solidified," which adds evidence for why the plot choices are starting to feel a little more restrictive now. Then if the time jump happens, there can be a soft restart in terms of choices.
Perhaps an unpopular opinion: mostly I feel bad for Cindy. She's a girl who has coasted this far in life on her looks, and has never really figured out what she actually wants, which parts of the dialogue make fairly clear if Ian doesn't come on to her but asks her hard questions about whether she wants to be with Wade. We know from other conversations that Wade used to be pretty smart and ambitious and has let himself go, caring almost exclusively about gaming. Cindy deserves better, but hasn't had to face these sorts of decisions before. So sure, Axel is charming and tells her she's a great model and she wants to believe that. And in future he could take advantage of her - the same way Ian can take advantage of her too, by flattery and assertive, spur of the moment lust. Sometimes pretty and "perfect" girls like Cindy can only respond impulsively, because they're scared of making any concrete decisions, having had no experience with it. And if Ian sleeps with her in 0.9 that does indeed seem to be the dynamic shaping up between them.
I missed Emma in this episode and appreciated the brief addition of her in the final version. If there's a female character I'm rooting for having much more play (of all kinds) in the story moving forward, it's absolutely Emma.
The guy who intrigues me most at this point is Mike. I'm not saying I want Lena to end up with him, but I think he walks a potentially interesting, complex line between being a potential actual friend to Lena instead of (or even in addition to) being a regular booty call for her. And I concur with various other folks here who have guessed at who his girlfriend probably is.
Having an official gallery now is great - big thanks to Eva and her team for making it happen.
Holly is growing on me, honestly any way the story looks to be developing. If she and Ian are together she's sweet and honest without being cloying in the way she could sometimes be in earlier chapters. If she and Lena are together I could see that developing into the most equal relationship in the entire game, and I'd cheer for that. And if Ivy corrupts her, I could enjoy seeing that sweetness slowly being replaced with a hot lust that I could also cheer... if it's done well. Ivy is often too much of a blunt instrument for my taste, so I feel less enthusiastic about that potential narrative as it currently stands. To my mind Holly is very much the sort of person who needs to be seduced into a deeper sexual life, not dominated into it.
ORS is still among the top three VNs I've encountered, and I'm pleased to be able to support Eva as she continues working on it. It's really fun seeing the various commenters here who get into story possibilities, motivations, potential avenues for future exploration, etc.
If Eva is still operating under the plan she talked about a while ago, 0.10 might be the halfway point and where relationships get "solidified," which adds evidence for why the plot choices are starting to feel a little more restrictive now. Then if the time jump happens, there can be a soft restart in terms of choices.
Perhaps an unpopular opinion: mostly I feel bad for Cindy. She's a girl who has coasted this far in life on her looks, and has never really figured out what she actually wants, which parts of the dialogue make fairly clear if Ian doesn't come on to her but asks her hard questions about whether she wants to be with Wade. We know from other conversations that Wade used to be pretty smart and ambitious and has let himself go, caring almost exclusively about gaming. Cindy deserves better, but hasn't had to face these sorts of decisions before. So sure, Axel is charming and tells her she's a great model and she wants to believe that. And in future he could take advantage of her - the same way Ian can take advantage of her too, by flattery and assertive, spur of the moment lust. Sometimes pretty and "perfect" girls like Cindy can only respond impulsively, because they're scared of making any concrete decisions, having had no experience with it. And if Ian sleeps with her in 0.9 that does indeed seem to be the dynamic shaping up between them.
I missed Emma in this episode and appreciated the brief addition of her in the final version. If there's a female character I'm rooting for having much more play (of all kinds) in the story moving forward, it's absolutely Emma.
The guy who intrigues me most at this point is Mike. I'm not saying I want Lena to end up with him, but I think he walks a potentially interesting, complex line between being a potential actual friend to Lena instead of (or even in addition to) being a regular booty call for her. And I concur with various other folks here who have guessed at who his girlfriend probably is.
Having an official gallery now is great - big thanks to Eva and her team for making it happen.
Holly is growing on me, honestly any way the story looks to be developing. If she and Ian are together she's sweet and honest without being cloying in the way she could sometimes be in earlier chapters. If she and Lena are together I could see that developing into the most equal relationship in the entire game, and I'd cheer for that. And if Ivy corrupts her, I could enjoy seeing that sweetness slowly being replaced with a hot lust that I could also cheer... if it's done well. Ivy is often too much of a blunt instrument for my taste, so I feel less enthusiastic about that potential narrative as it currently stands. To my mind Holly is very much the sort of person who needs to be seduced into a deeper sexual life, not dominated into it.
ORS is still among the top three VNs I've encountered, and I'm pleased to be able to support Eva as she continues working on it. It's really fun seeing the various commenters here who get into story possibilities, motivations, potential avenues for future exploration, etc.
What I also liked a lot about the last updates was that we finally got the possibility to tattoo Lena as was hinted before,the designs were also very original and actually add to her character's overall design.
But what I would love is to continue the trend and say for example give us the choice to tattoo Lena's ass itself or returning to the piercing letting us add some extra to the ears and what would be really really hot piercing Lena's breasts letting offering as several options about the type of ring/complement we want to decorate them with.
Also some word tatoos not only drawings would also spice up the variety.
This kind of stuff finally on a NSFW game would really make my day,I know it would mean more alternative character models giving the developer more work on something they perphaps wouldn't appreciate but honestly some part of the fans of the game would react very well to these extra features.
But what I would love is to continue the trend and say for example give us the choice to tattoo Lena's ass itself or returning to the piercing letting us add some extra to the ears and what would be really really hot piercing Lena's breasts letting offering as several options about the type of ring/complement we want to decorate them with.
Also some word tatoos not only drawings would also spice up the variety.
This kind of stuff finally on a NSFW game would really make my day,I know it would mean more alternative character models giving the developer more work on something they perphaps wouldn't appreciate but honestly some part of the fans of the game would react very well to these extra features.
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- Nov 15, 2020
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Did they actually talk and agree to meet and discuss things? If so I think I missed that. Or do you mean more of a general assumption that it will be necessary for them, at least in certain scenarios, to have a talk soon?
I noticed however that the scene where they text in chapter 8 was slightly rewritten in the latest release. I can’t remember exactly how it was before, but I think it more clearly states that a) Jeremy promises Lena he won’t tell Ian about what’s happened between them (similarly to what he promised if they have sex later on), and b) Lena half-jokingly agrees that she’ll continue to send him pics in return.
It would make sense if it leads to some more texting between them in the next chapter. At least if Lena’s not in a relationship with Ian, but maybe also if she is.
Good points. If we include these more unspecific hints, I think the situation with Cherry is worthy of a mention as well—the way she suddenly acts more reserved the morning after. My guess is it’s only a case of Cherry realising she’s falling for someone when she didn’t plan to. But that’s purely speculation.
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She wrote on Patreon that she’ll adress the fact that he didn’t get a card after the chapter is released. Maybe she’ll make a post or two in the coming weeks, with some more insight into the creation of the chapter and/or her upcoming plans?
ERROR when Cindy asks to join 1st photoshoot. Was it resolved? I searched here and in jdmod but didn't really understand the situation. He says it was solved in 0.9Final but that's what I'm playing!
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Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 7, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 7, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 10, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 11, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 63, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 64, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 85, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 102, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 104, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 106, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 107, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 114, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 116, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 116, in keywords
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 119, in <module>
KeyError: u'wade_cindy_rel'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/story/chapter_4.rpyc", line 5710, in script
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File "renpy/ast.py", line 1642, in execute
choice = renpy.exports.menu(choices, self.set, args, kwargs, item_arguments)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1038, in menu
rv = renpy.store.menu(new_items)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1274, in display_menu
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='menu', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3101, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3512, in interact_core
root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 567, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 567, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 567, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 432, in visit_all
callback(self)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3512, in <lambda>
root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 443, in per_interact
self.update()
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 631, in update
self.screen.function(**self.scope)
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 7, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 7, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 10, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 11, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 63, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 64, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 85, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 102, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 104, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 106, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 107, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 114, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 116, in execute
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 116, in keywords
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/game/JD_keyboard.rpy", line 119, in <module>
KeyError: u'wade_cindy_rel'
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.4.1439
Our Red String v0.9
Mon Nov 15 22:43:49 2021
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No, they haven't talked or discussed things as such but soon after her chat with Louise regarding Jeremy, Lena states she needs to have talk with him, so considering how Eva alternates between different characters each update(Ian,Robert,Mike being exception) and how popular he is, It's no brainer Jeremy is bound to have scene in Chapter 10.
- Dec 4, 2017
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You're using JDMOD, that's why. Has nothing to do with the game.
oh thanks! the mod is full of errors atm I think. for anyone wondering
- Nov 15, 2020
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Ah! Thanks, I missed that. As Jeremy is incapable of saying no to any attractive women, I’ll consider that as the same as the two of them actually agreeing to meet.
(Or at least text/talk on the phone, but that would probably be a bit underwhelming at this point.)And if I remember correctly, that talk is a consequence of Louise acting strange since Ivy’s afterparty? Meaning that Lena states that she needs to talk to him independently of whether she had sex with him in chapter 8?
If so, I guess that could indicate his route isn’t closed even if Lena didn’t join him in Louise’s bedroom. Which in turn could indicate (several layers of speculation here, I know) that they also could end up meeting if Lena in the meantime has entered a relationship with Ian?
- Nov 16, 2021
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There is. You have to go with her on vacation or get all the pictures from Jeremy with her to get it.
hello to all, i'am getting this error message right before lena and axel photoshoot ( the one he takes pictures of her), does anyone know how to fix this? thanks.
and i saw a screen where ivy was kissing holy, is this in game? and if so, how can i make it happen? thanks again.
and i saw a screen where ivy was kissing holy, is this in game? and if so, how can i make it happen? thanks again.
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
Exception: Switch could not choose a displayable.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "scripts/story/chapter9_axel.rpyc", line 528, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 715, in execute
renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1393, in say
who(what, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/character.py", line 1205, in __call__
self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)
File "renpy/character.py", line 871, in do_display
**display_args)
File "renpy/character.py", line 621, in display_say
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3101, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3611, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2441, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 777, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 777, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 777, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transform.py", line 933, in render
return transform_render(self, width, height, st, at)
File "accelerator.pyx", line 116, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 501, in render
return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 307, in wrap_render
rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 777, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 339, in render
surf = render(self.child, width, height, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 339, in render
surf = render(self.child, width, height, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1358, in render
self.update(st, at)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1336, in update
child, redraw = self.function(st, at, *self.args, **self.kwargs)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1416, in condition_switch_show
return condition_switch_pick(switch), None
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1412, in condition_switch_pick
raise Exception("Switch could not choose a displayable.")
Exception: Switch could not choose a displayable.
Windows-10-10.0.18362
Ren'Py 7.4.4.1439
Our Red String v0.9
Tue Nov 16 01:00:05 2021- Apr 9, 2018
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No, only if she had sex with him.
I have no doubt about it, I mean we already got second chance with certain characters if missed first time I.e Alison, Robert,Louise and since the game is no shy of cheating and backstabbing, Lena is sure to hook up with Jeremy down the line regardless of her relationship with Ian.
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How do I continue my file if I have the v0.8 version also installed? The v0.9 will let me select the save file but it ends and says it will be continued.
start from scratch, the game is one where you always find something new
i just click ignore or proceed at the bottom, the second option from the left. a warning came up that said things may not work properly but it was fine for me.
- Nov 15, 2020
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Thanks! Got it. And sorry about the never ending string of follow up questions. It’s getting hard to keep track of all the smaller variations—and to have saves available for testing on every path.
The fact that it takes a will point for Lena to not wake up Jeremy makes it feel more like a breaking point; but on the other hand no one rejected anyone—like on some of the other paths. Jeremy’s not aware that Lena even considered sneaking into Louise’s bedroom, and for him the last thing that happened between them was their texting a day or two earlier. It wouldn’t be realistic if Jeremy stopped pursuing Lena after being led on like that. So yeah, I agree that another chance to re-enter that path seems likely.
- Aug 24, 2018
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There is a scene, either with Ian or with Jeremy and Billy.
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Over-ride it?
Yes, they tend to be. While I do appreciate the mod, I find that they're not really worth it. Especially if you want to do a few different playthroughs.
I mean, the guy comes in like 15 seconds, so I'm sure he doesn't want her to think he's premature...
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