One genuine criticism I have for ORS and GGGB is that the dialogues can be pretty stiff and bland at times. There are moments when I play them and keep thinking "EK could've paraphrase this," "Character X wouldn't talk like that," "Word X would've fitted this situation better than Word F," etc.
I like my porn to be on the high-brow side, too, dude, but it's too early to make the judgements you're making. I imagine if your in-game choices put Ian and Lena together on a "pure love" path and then have Lena fuck Jeremy and others, there will be "punishment," or what I prefer to call consequences. Same for Ian and Cindy, etc. But if those consequences come too early in the story, their effects are weakened.
You might be missing the point here my friend.
Agree that. Dialouge could be better in spots, among other things naturally. But apparently criticing that is frowned on a porn thread, so I've learned from certain simpletons here. Funny that.
I'm sorry but that's literally that jjj you serious meme.
What can I say, I like well written stories in porn games that interest me and have some actual sense of a story.
Sure, i think everyone prefers good than bad, when given choice. But if you truly feel one of better executed porn games is "average or below average" compared to its competitors, then i can only envy you, because it seems you've only experienced the cream of the crop, or managed to successfully block memories of anything that wasn't.
I would say I'm picky. Half the games here, while visually stunning, or have content I am interested, I don't play because either the story uninterests me or the characters are poorly crafted, or their is a literal fuckton of typos... -shivers-.
Or, and I'm just throwing a wild thought here, people just disagree with your criticism, or at the very least find it overblown because of your harsh choice of words.
This sums it up well (and congrats to your butt on the Poohlitzer). It's good enough, which in itself sets it apart from almost every other similar game. The same applies for the other skills needed to make a game like this: create some kind of art; have the ability to also write scenes that are sexy; some basic coding; more administrative tasks like delegating smaller jobs, setting up platforms to distribute the game, communicating with the followers. It's a weird mix of skills, and most people are probably shit at one or more of them (I definitely am), but I'd say Eva is somewhere between decent and good at most or all. Some characters are a bit one dimensional, some illustrations look less good than others, some paths are less well structured than others. But overall the result is still good (and compared to the average of other porn games, I'd say exceptional).
An option would be nice. Though I can also understand if she cuts certain corners for the route and forces us into something once we've already decided on the cuck route just for the sake of time and making less work for herself. Though ig an easier way would be for only one or 2 scenes having the option to do something a little more extreme or not do it. At least you don't have to worry about any sissification or gay stuff in that route bc I doubt Eva would go there
I feel like I've played a different game if these are peoples complaints. I have a route where Jeremy is a total bro. Not mean at all. And Seymour and Axel, despite obviously being villains, are interesting enough for me. Especially in the (sadly deleted) scene where Axel and Ian were quite friendly at the bar. Also, in most games like this Seymour would've been totally different. You all know the type of character trope I'm talking about. But he's not. All things considered you wouldn't even know he was a bad guy at first glance
A game could have the hottest characters and fetishes in existence but nothing kills my boner faster than having to decipher what's being said
I was mostly responding to the suggestions Hawkes had made.
I don't think Jeremy even sees anything that potentially happens as a mistake -- getting freed of a psycho "girlfriend" is probably a blessing for him, if anything.
A girlfriend who put out and was more than willing to put out no less. Just wanted time spent with her. Too much to ask? Not really.
Let's not suddenly pretend Louise isn't overly possessive, jealous and driven by wild mood swings just so we can dunk on Jeremy some more. We can get a very good sample of what being in relationship with her is like with Lena.
