VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[yuvce]

Doesn't Ivy also say that to Lena if she sleeps with Holly? Just seems to me that Ivy is just surprised that Lena may be more open to woman than she initially thought. I think Ivy is amused if you're Louise's mistress tho.

I wouldn't know since I haven't done a Lena/Holly playthrough. But it wouldn't surprise me since she's always insisting that Lena fuck as many guys as possible.

 

[Chartog]

Super disappointed to find out it's only Ian's side but the couple of sex scene we got are pretty hot. Also, I was under the impression we are getting the vacation thingy in this update, no?

It's only the epilogue for the chapter. EK plans to do smaller quicker updates. Just skip until the full chapter drops

 

[Sethmsf]

So this update has some updates

Ian can now be dominant with Cherry, arguably more so then any other girl except Lena. Maybe once again showing how similiar they are?

Cindy seems to be developing a cumshot/bukkake fetish. She acts all prim and proper but deep down clearly enjoys being dirtied and cummed on. I think its no coincidence that previously when Ian eats her ass she says it dirty and now she asks for him to do it again, same with him cumming on her, says its gross but clearly enjoys it.

Alison scene is hard to get because of the Cindy glitch and it not being in the gallery. Seems like more of the same boobjob/filming/asking for creampie/asking for anal content. There is a dialogue option marked with the same sad face as the cuck route. Maybe a tease for Jeremy/Alison cuck content?

Minerva scene was pretty basic, especially compared to her last scene. It is an option now to have her help with the book contest. I wonder if you blew her off she will interfere with the results?

Jess got some content, though she doesnt seem thrilled with it. If you didnt sleep with her Ian can be quite friendly with her in the morning. Seems like there will be two minor routes with her, one where she is used by Ian as sextoy and one similiar to good Jess route in GGGB.

Ian can express his concerns over Axel and Cindy. If he is too aggressive or direct she will fly off tthe handle and he can tank his relantionship with her. I wonder what the better option here is: say you trust her (heart option) or saying she needs to figure her shit out (witts option). Obviously the former keeps Cindy happy, but the latter seems to make her actually reflect. Either option still lets Ian give her the necklet, but the latter it is a little awkward.

Ian can also hear about Lena's cheating. I'm not sure if it depends on who or how many people she cheated with, but on my "Lena cheats with everyone route", Ian monologues to himself saying he knows its true. So theres that drama right as Ian and Lena are going to the same beach.

In my loyal route, Ian wonders in his internal monologue and I quote: was the story repeating itself?, was I being cheated on once more...?

Coming out of nowhere and without Jeremy saying anything other than that it's a good catch and Lena hasn't cheated on anyone, the line seems a little out of place.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I wouldn't know since I haven't done a Lena/Holly playthrough. But it wouldn't surprise me since she's always insisting that Lena fuck as many guys as possible.

Ivy wants Lena to be a turbo slut,im 100% sure shes the one who tells Marcel about Lena BBC fetish.

 

[nevt2050ptr]

Sadly, i fear Perry would be all like, "Joke is on you buddy, i'm into this shit."

Have you heard a tale of Pissmaster Perry and KinkDom of the Golden Shower ?

 

[fatpussy123]

In my loyal route, Ian wonders in his internal monologue and I quote: was the story repeating itself?, was I being cheated on once more...?

Coming out of nowhere and without Jeremy saying anything other than that it's a good catch and Lena hasn't cheated on anyone, the line seems a little out of place.

Saw it on my playthrough as well, I think this is probably unintentional dialogue

 

[Andrea9999]

How it was toned down?
I watched it and the only thing i noticed is that Lena now squirts on the mirror

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If you have read my posts, you know this is the only story arc that really interests me in the game, so I know I may be unrealistically demanding. In my current (and only second) playing, I am keeping everything with Lena pretty tame (except for an affectionate affair with Holly) so as to accentuate the contrast between her relationship with Seymour and the rest of her everyday life.
BTW: I liked your previous avatar, but I LOVE this one! From where did you get it?

 

[mommysboiii]

I only played Jess from the gallery, which doesn't have the non-sex option. It's good there's an option. It means the sex scene was handled very well from a narrative standpoint. This jaded version of Jess is used to sex as a commodity, where good will from men doesn't exist, trading pussy-crumbs cynically for each favor bestowed upon her since that's all they ever want in the end. The sex scene was hot of course, but it shows that all very well from a dramatic standpoint too. Pretty well done. I'm sure not sleeping with her could lead to future development with a less jaded "bad jess" who sees some good in the world. Where the other route just reconfirms her low self-esteem and bad life experience ...plus maybe a few strange new warts on Ian's dick.

100% good take from a narrative standpoint the scene is amazing and I kinda feel bad sleeping with her but yeah if you want a relationship with jess its prob better to just let her sleep in your room and build on that in the future

if you fuck her she will prob fuck you up in the future or never speaks to you again or maybe some mean/asshole ian future content where ian turns into seymore in the future

 

[mommysboiii]

Ivy wants Lena to be a turbo slut,im 100% sure shes the one who tells Marcel about Lena BBC fetish.

ivy is a dealer/pimp confrimedcindy is prob next on her list after she turns lena into her pet

 

[Sethmsf]

I can't speak for anyone that went Striker, but if you went Grapple here is how you win ezpz.

First Round:
Guard > Provoke > Grapple on the counterattack > Trip or Throw > Secure the Position > Go for a Choke > Squeeze > Tie Him Up. This results in taking one minor hit in the last 30 secs before the round ends.

Second Round:
You get clobbered in the opening no matter what you pick, I usually pick block because it looks like you take the least damage. Attack > Grapple > Trip Him > Pin Him Down > Pin Him Down (again) > Go For a Choke > Keep Squeezing > Keep Squeezing! (again)

And that's how you win taking minimal hits as a Jiu-Jitsu specialist. You can do it all with only Athletics

You dominate round 1 without taking damage and without getting tired, in round 2 you finish it in the first 30s:

Round 1: Attack - grapple - Attack and shoot - Throw him - Secure the position - Tie him up -> Provoke - Grapple - Throw him - Submit him.

Round 2: Dodge -> Guard up - Block - Take him down - Pin him down - Submit him - Go to submission

 

[mommysboiii]

but in this update I kinda hate that eva is always doing this Love relationships or on a hate route thing for example with cindy I can either be the one that is like ohh I trust you and be on this vanilla cindy route with no axel content I guess???100% vanilla route???would be my guess if she is on the trip

or be on the well ian fucks COMPLETLYY up and cindy is super mad and hate him and 100% does something with axel but with zero drama because they are not even in a relationship there is always no playroom for something inbetween

like holly get corrupted IN A RELATIONSHIP or alision ALWAYS prefers ian in a relationship or cindy does something with axel in a RELATIONSHIP WITH IAN its always this clear cuts which give 0 rp possibilities, 0 drama it seems a bit boring in my opinion hope this change in later chapters because I love drama (optional ofc dont get mad vanilla players)

 

[SerHawkes]

Not sure if Ivy considers Louise worthy enough of her attention to pull this sort of thing. And right now, if the game variables are anything to go by, it's far more likely there's going to be Lena/Ivy/Jeremy threesome on some people's paths.

SerHawkes is going to be thrilled, am sure.

 

[GokutheG]

Ivy is mad jealous tho, even more so with Louise. She has a huge crush on her bestie since her teens. Lena was also her haven when Ivy was going through bad times as a teen. Quite cliche, but realistic nonetheless.
I also bet that Ivy doesn't sleep around at all and her dick count is really low. She seems more inclined to pussy. She is all about that strong female image. It could go both ways in that aspect tho.

I started to think Ivy may have feelings for Lena following her birthday party. I don't think we've ever seen why Ivy and Louise dislike each other but I really don't think she's jealous of her more like disdain. The only time I've seen her get even a bit jealous is when you block Holly from joining in at the gym shower. I think the only guys Ivy has slept with in the story so far have all been because she thinks she can get something from them.

My ideal ending would be Holly/Lena/Ivy in a romance with Louise as their pet. Emma could also be a fwb.

 

[BloodyMares]

For anyone curious, the walkthrough has been updated to Ch 10 Beta. It's available on my Boosty (will release on Patreon in a week):

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The Alpha version (without Ch 10 variable list) is now available to all tiers and can be bought with discount (both on Boosty and Patreon).

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[CassidyPRO]

is there no way to fuck alison without a condom in that new scene?

 

[Slick Bean]

You want a female dev - Eva Kiss - not to use a condom?

without a condom in that new scene

Do you know her that well to seriously suggest that?

 

[Xupuzulla]

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If you have read my posts, you know this is the only story arc that really interests me in the game, so I know I may be unrealistically demanding. In my current (and only second) playing, I am keeping everything with Lena pretty tame (except for an affectionate affair with Holly) so as to accentuate the contrast between her relationship with Seymour and the rest of her everyday life.
BTW: I liked your previous avatar, but I LOVE this one! From where did you get it?

Makes sense i guess, the black vibrator really changes the scene
My avatar is DJ Charlotte de Witte btw.

 

[camube]

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If you have read my posts, you know this is the only story arc that really interests me in the game, so I know I may be unrealistically demanding. In my current (and only second) playing, I am keeping everything with Lena pretty tame (except for an affectionate affair with Holly) so as to accentuate the contrast between her relationship with Seymour and the rest of her everyday life.
BTW: I liked your previous avatar, but I LOVE this one! From where did you get it?

yeah the previous Seymour scene was more "psychological". It was not only hotter but also actually more interesting too story-wise.
The newly updated one is too sexually direct. Cuz now the control is in Lena's hand and not on Seymour's anymore.

 

[noturiah]

Minerva scene was pretty basic, especially compared to her last scene. It is an option now to have her help with the book contest. I wonder if you blew her off she will interfere with the results?

Jess got some content, though she doesnt seem thrilled with it. If you didnt sleep with her Ian can be quite friendly with her in the morning. Seems like there will be two minor routes with her, one where she is used by Ian as sextoy and one similiar to good Jess route in GGGB.

Ian can express his concerns over Axel and Cindy. If he is too aggressive or direct she will fly off tthe handle and he can tank his relantionship with her. I wonder what the better option here is: say you trust her (heart option) or saying she needs to figure her shit out (witts option). Obviously the former keeps Cindy happy, but the latter seems to make her actually reflect. Either option still lets Ian give her the necklet, but the latter it is a little awkward.

I did notice that some (not all) of Minerva's scene used recycled images, which is not good. I'm frankly just glad we got a scene with her at all, because I think she's one of the more interesting women in Ian's storyline. And I agree: if Minerva just hates Ian without the sex, will she throw her vote against him automatically in the book contest?

I was torn about the Bad Jess content. Being nice to her does lead to some good dialogue in the morning - and if I'm seeing it right, I think her hairstyle at that point is the Good Jess hairstyle? I don't know that there will be more sexytimes for Ian with her if he sleeps with her this time, though. She seems to be putting up with the sex rather than enjoying it, which would be entirely in her character as it stands from the end of GGGB if she doesn't end up with Ashley or Dave. And I wouldn't be surprised if, when she disappears before Ian wakes up in the morning, that's the last he sees or hears from her if he fucked her.

I was glad to see those options for Ian expressing concern to Cindy about Axel. Lena could try at Blazer in ch11, but realistically there's no way Cindy could be expected to take her warning seriously. Ian might get through to her - or maybe not, depending on how forcefully a player's Ian expresses his misgivings. EK knows her characters well; of course Cindy will overreact to any critical viewpoint someone else has about her, even Ian. It was very telling to me that, in the worst overreaction, she accuses him of treating her like Wade does, which is obviously false. And I think EK has set up some really good options for herself with the story moving forward. If Ian trusts Cindy and doesn't say much of anything, she could possibly be faithful, or cheat and break his heart. If he expresses mild suspicion, she's still left where she's been for two chapters now: unsure of what she wants long-term, not wanting to deal with it, and an increasingly frustrated Ian debating to himself whether to jump ship. And if they get into an argument, she basically kicks him out, the door is wide open for her to pursue Axel (or allow him to pursue her), and Ian pretty much indicates he may be done with her anyway. Even though Cindy is far from my favorite character, I do think the way Eva's been telling her story has been quite strong over the last few chapters.

 

[Slick Bean]

Is this not gift enough for your tastes?

Is trying to buy a gift for Cindy broken?