VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[dolfe67]

It would also have to be written where consent is absolutely unquestionably given due to Patreon's beef with anything that could even be considered rape adjacent.

Doesn't GGGB has that kind of content? It's still on patreon

Seymour's popularity might have been disappointed to EK, but it was still ranked 3rd nonetheless

 

[Andrea9999]

Yeah this is why I think you're setting yourself up for disappointment. I find it highly unlikely that multiple chapters will be spent focusing on Seymour because not only did you say that she was disappointed in his popularity you must also factor in that it's possible that most people actually avoid his route especially if they are on the route where he tries to blackmail Lena. I just don't see the dev spending a bunch of time and resources over multiple chapters solely on a character who isn't as popular as she wanted.

The "dark" tone I feel isn't going to be non/dubcon/rape related by having Seymour lose control in Dubai but instead moral corruption. I really see a point coming in the future where Lena will have to make a choice between helping Seymour screw over the city in some way(mayor race/buisnesses) or expose him. The tension will come from whether she's willing to overlook his evil business ways which destroys lives for personal gain or not.

Again I can only see any possibility of Dubai darkness even happening would only be for a possible ending. It would also have to be written where consent is absolutely unquestionably given due to Patreon's beef with anything that could even be considered rape adjacent. I could be wrong but it sounds like that wouldn't be dark enough for your tastes.

Well as I have said before, this is why developers should not be allowed to live freely. They do their best work when kept imprisoned in darkened rooms, given a minimum amount of food, and kept on task by the appropriate masters.

 

[ffive]

I really see a point coming in the future where Lena will have to make a choice between helping Seymour screw over the city in some way(mayor race/buisnesses) or expose him. The tension will come from whether she's willing to overlook his evil business ways which destroys lives for personal gain or not.

I think there may also be a choice on a simpler level: drop the contract and distance from Seymour in order to have a "pure" (and also poor in terms of income) relationship with Ian, or give in to the posh callings and drop Ian in favor of gaining full-term position as Seymour's "muse"/sugar baby.

 

[Andrea9999]

I think there may also be a choice on a simpler level: drop the contract and distance from Seymour in order to have a "pure" (and also poor in terms of income) relationship with Ian, or give in to the posh callings and drop Ian in favor of gaining full-term position as Seymour's "muse"/sugar baby.

Since both Lena and Ian can both depend financially and vocationally on Seymour, I do not see why they cannot both be harnessed together into an erotic puppet show that Seymour can use to win friends and influence his uncle.

 

[ffive]

Since both Lena and Ian can both depend financially and vocationally on Seymour, I do not see why they cannot both be harnessed together into an erotic puppet show that Seymour can use to win friends and influence his uncle.

It's a possibility, but the player has control over both Lena and Ian and may choose to make a stand with the latter, if they feel that'd match the character they opted in given playthrough. Ian who learns that Lena has been doing erotic shows for Seymour doesn't necessarily have to just keel over; in fact, it creates a moral conundrum of his own.

 

[Andrea9999]

It's a possibility, but the player has control over both Lena and Ian and may choose to make a stand with the latter, if they feel that'd match the character they opted in given playthrough. Ian who learns that Lena has been doing erotic shows for Seymour doesn't necessarily have to just keel over; in fact, it creates a moral conundrum of his own.

Why, yes of course. I mean one version can be SO different from another. When I played a game where Lena was hostile to Stan from the outset....it was like playing a Frankenstein monster compared to others where she was very kind. It seems to me that the case in which Lena AND Ian depend on Seymour's good graces lends itself naturally to the sexual exploitation of both. Similar to the stock porn story scenarios in which a needy couple do photo shoots to tide over a time of unemployment and wind up being ensnared into increasingly depraved situations. I believe it is penthouse forum story 43.72b.

 

[GokutheG]

Doesn't GGGB has that kind of content? It's still on patreon

Seymour's popularity might have been disappointed to EK, but it was still ranked 3rd nonetheless

Good Girl was also written when Patreon was more relaxed with their rules. That's how there are multiple incest story lines in that game and a straight up rape scene which will never happen in this one since it doesn't fly in modern Patreon.

Honestly this is all hypothetical anyway since that game had no funding from Patreon/violated no rules at the time of production and the dev's current project contains absolutely no content which violates Patreon's rules in the first place.

Since both Lena and Ian can both depend financially and vocationally on Seymour, I do not see why they cannot both be harnessed together into an erotic puppet show that Seymour can use to win friends and influence his uncle.

Now this is a direction that I can see Seymour's story going for Lena/Ian. He can try to excert leverage on Lena by bringing up medical help for her parents and getting dirt on Perry's dad from Ian in exchange for winning the contest.

There would also need to be a counter for this for people who reject Seymour's influence. For Ian this could be Victor/Minerva helping him if he wins the book contest honestly. For Lena I can see Seymour's route will impact her modeling side so I can see either Billy's route(with the right stats for a positive outcome) or if she sent her parents money then it turns out that her brother used it to hit the jackpot/lotto which results in enough money for her parents treatments.

 

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if she sent her parents money then it turns out that her brother used it to hit the jackpot/lotto which results in enough money for her parents treatments.

"I've spent it all on hookers and blow, and it was so much blow one of the hookers laid a golden egg."

 

[lucadiadis]

- EK's Promise: "I've been trying to focus on progressing the writing....to tackle some important scenes....had collected different ideas and even had some lines written from weeks and months ago....progress on these final scenes....wracking my brain over the puzzle that is these final scenes...."
- Real update: "Would you like to see me getting fucked ? mmmmmh ?"

 

[DeemLeem12]

Doesn't GGGB has that kind of content? It's still on patreon

Seymour's popularity might have been disappointed to EK, but it was still ranked 3rd nonetheless

GGGB also has incest but it's still there. Patreon staff just really loves jacking off to Ashley.

 

[Xupuzulla]

- EK's Promise: "I've been trying to focus on progressing the writing....to tackle some important scenes....had collected different ideas and even had some lines written from weeks and months ago....progress on these final scenes....wracking my brain over the puzzle that is these final scenes...."
- Real update: "Would you like to see me getting fucked ? mmmmmh ?"

Lena thinking about Jack the last update "THAT ALPHA COCK YUM!"
Struggling with writing BTW
The puzzle of making the scenes BTW

 

[Asmodean2]

Lena thinking about Jack the last update "THAT ALPHA COCK YUM!"
Struggling with writing BTW
The puzzle of making the scenes BTW

that "alpha" stuff was really cringeworthy and felt out of place

 

[GokutheG]

that "alpha" stuff was really cringeworthy and felt out of place

Well that's what happens when Eva doesn't spend enough time on her writing process.

 

[Blurpee69]

"I've spent it all on hookers and blow, and it was so much blow one of the hookers laid a golden egg."

Normal Tuesday night for Shia LaBeouf

 

[Xupuzulla]

Well that's what happens when Eva doesn't spend enough time on her writing process.

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that "alpha" stuff was really cringeworthy and felt out of place

Jack appeared what,a year ago for the first time?
A whole year of "struggling with the writing" to write this TRASH btw

 

[chinesewarrior]

Including Ashley is complicated, because she had so many different endings, there are a lot of different versions of her to choose from. So whichever one you choose, it's guaranteed to be the wrong one for a lot of people. That's why, I think it's highly unlikely she'd turn up in the game, the same way Jessica has. Maybe a cameo appearance towards the end?

They can do it like Jessica. One route with porn star or casual one.

 

[Cervixpunch]

Doesn't GGGB has that kind of content? It's still on patreon

Patreon seems to mainly rely on people reporting to them. If stuff stays up it's because no patrons or pirates are reporting the dev rather than Patreon been remotely cool with it. Eva would have to be stupid to put any content Patreon doesn't allow in this game when it's on there and increase the risk of some dickwomble reporting her because he's mad Axel caved Molly's cobwebby pussy in before Ian did so he'll show the dev.

Worst part is it's only patrons or pirates that can be reporting devs. Which means people are stupid enough to sabotage AVNs out of pettiness while been players of AVNs.

 

[lucadiadis]

Well that's what happens when Eva doesn't spend enough time on her writing process.

Enough time ? By the time EK took to write almost twelve chapters of a porn game, Tolstoi had written both War and Peace and Anna Karenin. True story.

 

[lucadiadis]

My last comment made me think about sth so I have checked: ORS has been going on for five years. Twelve chapters. EK doesn't seem to do anything else.
For the same amount of time, Kafka, from 1915 to 1920, wrote and published his most famous novels, Die Verwandlung 1915, 1919 In der Strafkolonie, 1920 Ein Landarzt Kleine Erzählungen.
May I add that he was a full time insurance sales agent writing on his free time, and was employee of the month and top biller every single month.
Anyone still paying EK is either in love with her or next of kin.

 

[ffive]

For the same amount of time, Kafka, from 1915 to 1920, wrote and published his most famous novels, Die Verwandlung 1915, 1919 In der Strafkolonie, 1920 Ein Landarzt Kleine Erzählungen.

Pfft, but how many porn visual novels did Kafka publish in that time? I'll tell you: a big, fat, zero.

Thus we can conclude EK is a more prolific creator than Kafka, qed.