VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.2 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

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Lord Bradley

Lord Bradley

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Yeah this was really weird update that felt more like a sex scene showcase. Hope the people who wanted more Lena POV are happy. The best part was slutty Holly adventures, but even that felt a little rushed and not living up to the buildup potential.

This game was built on connecting lives of our protagonists Ian and Lena, but last few updates make it seem they are falling further and further apart. Whatever POV is currently happening, life from other POV seems to not exist anymore or sit at standstill apart from few chosen moments. It used to be that every progress on either POV felt connected and in the same story and world that is alive constantly creeping in with even as little presence as a single text. Now there are a lot of holes, Lena's POV missing from the beach is best example of that.

I hope EK gets back to her former self and finds a way to connect this tangled mess into story that feels whole and with flow.
 
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I think all of my saves even the ones not on the corruption path got the gloryhole scene. Works fine if I start a new game though. IDK, might be just me.

New update kinda sucks. Those fade to black transitions are too jarring and some of the art are iffy. They already reused some art why not maintain the quality on the new ones. With how things are going, imho Ivy and Ian interaction is still dead in the water. Throuple/lesbo route getting some movement is kinda nice though.

EK needs to find a balance between sex and plot. :HideThePain:
 
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Geigi

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Holly is now ORS version of Ashley. Even other girls haven't gone that far it seems. It's always the shyest ones. :unsure: Well, I guess Holly hating will stop now.
 
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Geralt From Rivia

Geralt From Rivia

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duffman44 said:
If you actually subscribed to the patreon, you will see the reason why they have moved to smaller updates out at a far more regular pace. Her form is find, and the project is moving towards the end game.
Just count yourself lucky they aren't of the developers who keep doing remasters/reworks
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Eva Kiss return to form.
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fatpussy123

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Does Slut Holly always go to the glory hole? Some of the dialogue changes depending on the holly_guy stat, but I can't tell if it is 0 she doesn't go at all or not?
 
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BigOlP said:
Lousy update tbh.

Feels like all the sex scenes (except for Stan) just come out of nowhere, like we cut to black, then maybe get 2 sentences before Lena's fucking Jeremy, Robert or one of the other randoms. Holly at the glory hole feels like a step too far, or at least we got there way too fast - sucks that Lena isn't even there for it too.

Nothing more on the Lena MFM threesome / NTR route either, come on!!!!

Also, what's with the weird as fuck faces during some of the sex scenes? Lena and Holly look horrible here, like not even the same character.

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God Damn what's up with Lena's thick lower right leg ?? has she been using her toes to play with her coochie or something ??!!
 
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ffive

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Dirtytreenaturd said:
Am I wrong or do the faces look off? In some of the scenes, Holly's face looks just weird. Lena's too in some. Kinda takes you out of it when they look like a different person. EDIT: Didn't refresh the page before seeing that Geigi and BigOlP mentioned the faces too. I know Eva feels pressured to get updates out sooner, but god were they bad.
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Looking at the screenshots posted in the thread, it might be the result of having different colorist? Shading has big impact on how we perceive faces, it's why makeup is a thing that it is.
 
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Was wondering if anyone noticed a bug in the new update. In the first scene Lena has sex with Stan and he pays her for it. Then she invites Robert over for sex. Then she has a conversation with Holly. Afterwards she watches a movie with Stan and they have sex again (same exact sex scene as before) and she congratulates him for finally losing his virginity, as if the first scene didn't happen.
 
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