VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [v1.0 Ch.1] [Lewtopia]

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LarsJogger

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Honestly, game is probably the best looking game out there right now. The art really is 10/10. Love all the characters in the family etc. That said with how slow the story moves this will take years to get content so I can't see myself supporting it.

I hope I'll remember the game by the time it happens because I don't want to miss it, really has the makings of a legendary game, but the time frame is just a bit wild.
 

yoyomistro

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Solid update, I know people are upset that it had no lewds, but it was twice as big as the first two updates. There were a good number of renders, even if it doesn't feel like the update was huge. I'd rather a dev get their point across quickly than pad the word count to make an update seem larger than it is.

That said, the quality of the renders is great, but I do see a world where the pace of releases hampers the game's ability to garner support. I don't think it would be an issue long term; EI took a couple years to garner a ton of support, and once the ball gets rolling with this game, I'm sure it will too--whether that's in six months or a year and a half.

Awesome work Lewtopia, looking forward to what comes next!
 

sunaboz

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Finally, a game that takes itself seriously (...)
lol
If this is your idea of a game that takes itself seriously then you should really start reading something else than smut. We have a chick here with a dick bigger than anatomically possible, a dick that can somehow be hidden behind a short skirt and no bulge is visible, lol (unless she has a boner). We have sisters and grandma who live with Luna and somehow know nothing about her condition which means they're either retarded or just pretend to not notice (although the latter option doesn't make any sense and would be utterly stupid, they would have no reason not to tell Luna that they know which would make her life a lot easier).

Same goes for her school friends, in PE classes they need to change to sportswear and go to showers so her condition would have been known a long time ago. Not to mention that if she gets a boner while seeing a single teat (recall the scene with sleeping mother) her bulge would be even more visible while she would see other girls changing. Also, Skye not connecting the dots when they were talking about futas made her a total idiot.

And in the first place, why would they even keep it a secret from her sisters and grandma? For kids that would be a normal thing (since that would become their reference point and they would assume some women have dicks) and her grandma would surely tolerate it. No sense at all, especially after we've learned this update that "femines" are rather common (we know of at least three so far and teacher Blair is most likely the fourth).

Since we've established that this is not a serious story (can't be given how unrealistic the premise is), WTF after almost a year of development we don't have even a single sex scene? This is supposedly a porn game but instead of sex scenes we get some illogical drama about characters we barely know. It's hard to sympathise with a 21 year old "adult" that only whines about her condition and has moods like a woman on a period and can't make her own decision without asking her parents first.
 

kenpachi666

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WTF?? Why is everyone acting like this is some kind of masterpiece with a lot of plots and many subplots?
It's a very simple and basic story that we've seen many times before.

And what about these developers who think they're some kind of mastermind writing something never seen before and of an exceptional level? Do they really believe it or is it just an excuse to do nothing and not add content?
 

Arius Zauber

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WTF?? Why is everyone acting like this is some kind of masterpiece with a lot of plots and many subplots?
It's a very simple and basic story that we've seen many times before.

And what about these developers who think they're some kind of mastermind writing something never seen before and of an exceptional level? Do they really believe it or is it just an excuse to do nothing and not add content?
I wrote about this before the update was released and predicted what update would end up like, but my comments were deleted although they did not in any way violate the rule given as the reason.
 

kenpachi666

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I wrote about this before the update was released and predicted what update would end up like, but my comments were deleted although they did not in any way violate the rule given as the reason.
I see it more and more. It's a piracy site where people are getting attacked for asking about updates. If someone criticizes even the slightest thing the mob jumps on him and mods are "fast as fuck boy" to delete any single sign of discontent or criticism.

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Arius Zauber

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I see it more and more. It's a piracy site where people are getting attacked for asking about updates. If someone criticizes even the slightest thing the mob jumps on him and mods are "fast as fuck boy" to delete any single sign of discontent or criticism.

These comments will be deleted shortly.
Unfortunately, this is the world we live in, even on a pirate site there is no freedom of speech.
Even if you don't incite hatred or insult anyone, but simply express your point of view, if the creator doesn't like it your message will be deleted.
 

Johan_0000

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MC in this game is not futa. Dev has very specifically stated that they are shemale. I will take the dev's word over yours.

FYI, Futanari have both male and female reproductive organs.
Mb I thought she was a futa didn't see the dev saying it. And well, I couldn't have guessed it since we didn't have any camera angle that let us confirm wether she has one or not. I just assumed the dev was going for it since the game is called package pefect lol.
And FYI, herma is short for hermaphrodite which is a being with both reproductive organ. SO yeah, I know what a futa is. I just thought this game had a futa not a shemale MC. What a disappointment..
A pity, I think I might drop this then.
Still thanks for the info mate.
This had a pretty good potential RIP.

GL to the dev
Lewtopia
could you confirm that claim? is your game about a futa or a shemale?
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Could you pls add a warning that this game features a shemale not a futa. Atleast according to the guy I quoted. I'm pretty sure many think this is a futa game like me. Let's prevent future dramas lol.





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Sneak Monkey

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That didn't happen in my testing except when I installed the mod wrong. Do you have a "game" folder inside your Package Perfect/game folder? Then delete that one then drag and drop the game folder from the mod where the folders game/renpy/lib and the package perfect.exe are.
It's weird how some systems are affected and some not, I installed in the correct way, using the mac version so it's quite possibly something to do with that. Might be the same for the other user who had the same issue as me.

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WzS

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We have a chick here with a dick bigger than anatomically possible
Sorry, you already lost me there.

What a lot of complainers fail to realize, is that Futa is a fetish deeply rooted in escapism and fantasy, which would make it pointless if it resembled average smut. In this case particularly, it's all set in an alternate reality where there's an extra gender, and the author gets to decide exactly how it works.

Your personal idea of "anatomically possible" is completely irrelevant, and that means anything goes. She could get wings and horns in the next chapter and that would still be perfectly fine if it would fit the plot. And her having a giant dick IS part of it.

This exact discussion has already happened at least 50 times in this thread, and probably in every Futa thread ever.

It's always the same. Futa authors have to go through a kind of baptism where they have to deal with a flood of clueless/pointless criticism until they learn to seamlessly filter it. And even then, it never fully goes away.
 
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It was initially known that there would be no lewd scenes in this update.
Although in a couple of moments some lewd wouldn't hurt and would add color to the scene, but more on that later!

More than half of the update is just everyday chatter, not aimed at anything, i’m not talking about the plot line with femine/futa termenology, although that could have been less drawn out!
In an argument with friends, i thought that Luna would suddenly get up angry and shout that i am fem-futa!
But No!
Then she found panties in the bathroom and there is an option to sniff them where i thought that here she would be caught red-handed - Missed Again!
One person already wrote above that at least another quick wank (the first lewd scene) could have been included here!

Luna comes home upset and her gorgeous grandmother notices this and i thought that she would at least tell her the truth - No!
Next up is the fetish option of foot massage, and here we could insert a second lewd scene! Where is the Luna during a long massage from a granny who keeps moaning and starting to get excited and the granny's foot touching something indefinite! Where Luna would have already retreated in panic and grandma would have at least noticed something!

Luna wants to talk to her parents about her problem and ask permission to tell the truth to her best friends, although we later learn that she has already made a decision and this is purely a matter of pharmacology and expectations of approval, at least from her father, but this scene looks quite cruel, especially in relation to mothers opinion on all this, despite all of Luna’s very logical arguments!
It's clear that Luna won't make peace with her mother anytime soon, and that's a big problem, because she's a gorgeous milf, and i'd really like to see a sex scene with her as soon as possible, but it's not meant to be!

Judging by the conversation between the parents, the father is sick—does he have cancer? Will he die and tell his family the truth, breaking Luna and pushing her to make peace with her mother?

The last scene in the forest is dramatic and well done, and Luna finally reveals the truth to her friends!
But damn, it's weird again that it's not to her sisters or grandmother, but to best friends! Well, i don't know, OK..!

The update could have been better if dev added a couple of lewd little things, and it would have been released a month and a half earlier. But half the update is just unnecessary, everyday chatter (though not bad in places), which, frankly, you could have done without!

Now all that remains is to wait until summer, hopefully not until fall, to see the sex scene promised by the dev!
 
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Scotsman1989

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First, the Scrappy's mod doesnae work for me, all I'm getting are the endless errors.

Second, I LOVE THIS GAMES POTENTIAL!!!
Carol and Fiona are my current faves.
Fiona is adorably shy but hopeful, personally I'm hoping she can finally get Luna's attention someday.
Carol is MATURE PERFECTION, plain and simple.
 

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Never really understood this specific type of futa game... where is the appeal in a world that hates futas and they live in fear? Like, the whole psychosexual dynamic of a futa is dominance and sexual prowess, how can any of that shine through with a woman who lives in fear and is rejected by society? The obvious answer is in overcoming those binds and carving out their own patch of space to be themselves in, but they still live in that futa-hating society... where is the narrative opportunity for fun with this gloomy truth constantly hovering over everything... i'd 100% get it in a trans game but if we factor that angle in it feels like a cowardly attempt to side-step the tag whilst still playing at the metaphor... commit or get off the pot... a futa trapped in a world against futa isn't really a futa game or futa story... you could swap out the dick for so many other things and still tell the same story so what is the dick even bringing to the table? I don't want every futa game to be a netori fuckfest harem builder but i guess i'm just not interested in submissive futa-MC's, nor stories about them... it's jarring to have such clashing concepts.
 

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Mb I thought she was a futa didn't see the dev saying it. And well, I couldn't have guessed it since we didn't have any camera angle that let us confirm wether she has one or not. I just assumed the dev was going for it since the game is called package pefect lol.
And FYI, herma is short for hermaphrodite which is a being with both reproductive organ. SO yeah, I know what a futa is. I just thought this game had a futa not a shemale MC. What a disappointment..
A pity, I think I might drop this then.
Still thanks for the info mate.
This had a pretty good potential RIP.

GL to the dev
Lewtopia
could you confirm that claim? is your game about a futa or a shemale?
7767

Could you pls add a warning that this game features a shemale not a futa. Atleast according to the guy I quoted. I'm pretty sure many think this is a futa game like me. Let's prevent future dramas lol.





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MC in this game is not futa. Dev has very specifically stated that they are shemale. I will take the dev's word over yours.

FYI, Futanari have both male and female reproductive organs.
I never stated that Luna is a shemale, so I'm not sure where you got that from.

Luna isn't a shemale. She's a "Femine," a third gender in this game's world. Born female in every way except she has a penis and testicles instead of a vagina. Not surgically transitioned, not intersex. Just how Femines are born in this universe.
 

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Never really understood this specific type of futa game... where is the appeal in a world that hates futas and they live in fear? Like, the whole psychosexual dynamic of a futa is dominance and sexual prowess, how can any of that shine through with a woman who lives in fear and is rejected by society? The obvious answer is in overcoming those binds and carving out their own patch of space to be themselves in, but they still live in that futa-hating society... where is the narrative opportunity for fun with this gloomy truth constantly hovering over everything... i'd 100% get it in a trans game but if we factor that angle in it feels like a cowardly attempt to side-step the tag whilst still playing at the metaphor... commit or get off the pot... a futa trapped in a world against futa isn't really a futa game or futa story... you could swap out the dick for so many other things and still tell the same story so what is the dick even bringing to the table? I don't want every futa game to be a netori fuckfest harem builder but i guess i'm just not interested in submissive futa-MC's, nor stories about them... it's jarring to have such clashing concepts.
You never watched like any Shonen anime haven't you? You don't start your protagonist in a position of power. You make them grow over time. She's (I guess, i'm not the dev) going to take her place in society by fucking one pussy at a time. She's going to become the Hoe-kage. BELIEVE IT!
 
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Briiu--1

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I never stated that Luna is a shemale, so I'm not sure where you got that from.

Luna isn't a shemale. She's a "Femine," a third gender in this game's world. Born female in every way except she has a penis and testicles instead of a vagina. Not surgically transitioned, not intersex. Just how Femines are born in this universe.
Someone said that Fiona might be a femine. Is that true?
 

Bingoogus

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You never watched like any Shonen anime haven't you? You don't start your protagonist in a position of power. You make them grow over time. She's (I guess, i'm not the dev) going to take her place in society by fucking one pussy at a time. She's going to become the Hoe-kage. BELIEVE IT!
No i get that concept, that's what i meant about her carving out her own patch in the world, but no matter how much she does that, the story still has this gloomy atmosphere draped over it, outside the confines of her safe space, she'll always be reviled in society... that dynamic stands in contradiction of what futa generally stands for as a kink/fetish... i'm not saying you can't have that, there's space for this story in our world, i just don't personally get it... i would like to understand it, but unless someone can explain it in a way that couldn't exist by either replacing the dick-shame or the oppressive society, i'm not going to understand why it wouldn't be better to just go with those alternatives... to me, futa stories are about confident women who prefer to be on top during sex, pursue people directly when they catch their eye, and don't give a flying fuck if this or that person is perturbed by them having something extra between their legs... that's the persona of futa to me, it's the entire point of the fetish, take it away and it's a totally different thing... but again, i want to understand...
 
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