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Started slow, but that end part, i cannot stop laughing, i hope it gets better. Good start of an interesting story, it depends, expected to see something more sexual in the last part, but i can wait
A bit of a nitpick, but personally I like when there's a zoomed out version of the image at the end of a pan, that way you don't miss anything if you skip part-way through, and it kind of ties it together. That's just my very specific cinematographic preference for VNs though =P. Honestly when devs do enough long pans, I shorten them and add the zoom-out of the image myself if it's missing, but I get kinda picky with the "visual" part of VNs like that... They did look good though, I understand wanting to show off all that hard work =P.
Jamieee
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It somewhat depends on the type of scenery that you are trying to create. If it is just a change in environment or setting that you want to show, only using the transform animation should be enough. Since it is not really that important to show the entire image, because that is not the focus of the scene.
But if you for instance want to use a panning transformation to show the details of a character (from head to toes), than it would be appropriate to show the full image afterwards. That character is then the main focus point that you want to show.
Yea, for sure I agree artistically. I just like seeing the full scene afterwards. I can always do that on my own though.
I'm worried about her, not me. I want to see a cute tiny cocklet swingling when I ram mine into her anus, cracking it open.
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It's funny that you didn't refute any of my arguments, but only confirmed them, and added completely unnecessary comments based on your personal subjective judgments.
I could continue arguing with you, but I don't see the point because arguing with you is like talking about art with a blind person, I'd rather spend my time on something more useful than wasting it on you.
Jamieee
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It is commendable that you are so passionate about this, but don't you think that you are overanalysing it? It is okay to give recommendations on how this VN can improve, but they are mostly subjective and based on personal preferences. I'm not trying to be an ass, but if you have so many remarks on how the things should be in this VN, maybe - just maybe - start your own project to develop a VN with your vision.
But hey, I'll bite.
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GokutheG
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Are you using the most up to date version from Patreon? It works for me.
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I can at least say mine's up to date and not going. Has an error traceback thing (plus in the log) in the folder, saying can't draw this one Luna nightmare scene in chapter 1
If it's not poking out of their mouth it's too small.
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Anyway, damn that was hella long lol. had a great time chatting with you. I hope I made my ideas clear this time, wish y'all the best
Oh and if by any chance dev did read all my coms. I hope you didn't see me as too harsh even in my subjective remarks, I always try to include constructive criticism, GL.
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1.20.611 is the most up to date version on their
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Damn, this first chapter was pretty good. Nice to see that this chapter fixed the gripes I had when I commented/reviewed the intro awhile back having unnecessary on the nose writing and a little too much doom and gloom. Very happy and satisfied here.
All the characters are enjoyable and man, the renders are definitely up there as some of the best I've ever seen from a VN, maybe even the best in all honesty. Can't really think on any negatives I had from playing this first chapter except for overall length, but I read hella fast and I was done with this whole chapter in about twenty-thirty minutes. All I can give are my thoughts like how I'm gonna be really sad when the father gets cucked here soon lmao cause he's actually a caring dad and it's a shame it's going the ED route with him, but it's a necessary evil to have with a story like this. I also appreciate giving us the ability to not do anything sexual with the grandma cause that's the last thing I want lol.
As the game goes forward, I'm really hoping to see more fun and wacky situations our MC will find herself in with her "package". Game really has the opportunity to do some really funny and wacky stuff. The humor in this game is great and would for sure like to see more of it. Really looking forward to more.
All the characters are enjoyable and man, the renders are definitely up there as some of the best I've ever seen from a VN, maybe even the best in all honesty. Can't really think on any negatives I had from playing this first chapter except for overall length, but I read hella fast and I was done with this whole chapter in about twenty-thirty minutes. All I can give are my thoughts like how I'm gonna be really sad when the father gets cucked here soon lmao cause he's actually a caring dad and it's a shame it's going the ED route with him, but it's a necessary evil to have with a story like this. I also appreciate giving us the ability to not do anything sexual with the grandma cause that's the last thing I want lol.
As the game goes forward, I'm really hoping to see more fun and wacky situations our MC will find herself in with her "package". Game really has the opportunity to do some really funny and wacky stuff. The humor in this game is great and would for sure like to see more of it. Really looking forward to more.
Hey m8, I just want to say thank you, you have made the basis for what I find to be the perfect futa/trans game, in the end this is just fantasy, so non-realistic proportions are ok, for my own sake I truly hope you wont get discouraged by people in this forum from making the game you have started, the MC is really damn pretty, I love the other characters also, and I REALLY look forward to see what you have cooking in 2.0 and etc!
If I may make 1 request, that poor girl that felt overlooked when she tried to reach out and greet the MC, please give her some more love <3
This is incredible, can't wait to see it progress.
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I fully expect the FMC to dick her down at some point. Or dick each other down. They made it a one liner that each school probably has two femine's. Im gonna make a hypothesis, that the shy girl is also one. If im right you heard it here first haha. That scene with her was purposeful, im sure she'll be back.