VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch. 4 Up 4 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[TD1900]

I feel like people are overestimating both the audience and the participants of the contest a little when they expect truly extravagant feats of sexual inventiveness.

I partially chalk it up to different tastes and expectations, but it has been a source of reflection. In my mind, I believe exhibition #2 to be an escalation over #1 where it counts, but I can see it from another perspective. A bukkake, on the surface, is a lot more visceral than asking some questions and being mean. Rosalind's event probably could've used one extra twist or maybe I just simply found certain elements of the events more interesting than they actually are.

Whatever the case, I appreciate everyone's honest thoughts, and I just hope exhibition #2 will fit favorably in context of the third and fourth week.

I do think think Felicia's event has been the most physically sadistic so far though.

TD1900
Not sure if you can answer that at this point but I do wonder how you intend to deal with a possible problem that will arise after 3rd exhibition night, i.e. at this point one of the candidates/carnations might win the whole thing and 4th game won't be needed. From PC owners' POV that would be something undesirable and I would think they would try and rig the game so that they would continue for the 4th game (which means more bets and more money for the club). After all it was Kat (or rather the character you've written) who said

I'll just say Kat talks about this possibility and the malleability of the results earlier in the game.

What would you say is the best trait, history and perk choice at the start of the game?

So far strongman and voyeur will give you the most bang for your buck h-scene wise, but by and large it's mostly just meant to be a bit of RP flavor.

 

[Deleted member 4058859]

Without giving too much away, anger will ultimately contextualize her relationship with the club and how she processes her circumstances. I know that's vague, but it's meant to be. Consider if she should be angry about her father forcing her into this and if anger can ever be a positive thing - and hope the dunce writing the story came to the same conclusions.

I think anger can be a positive thing. If it causes her to burn the club to the ground with Kath still inside it then I think anger is a very positive thing and I will create a new playthrough just to max the stat as much as possible.

Kath is such a well written character by the way - I dont think I have hated a bad guy as much as her.

 

[omega_rugal]

not my fault if i prefer kathleen than others 4 ugly girls -_-

 

[NightToRepel]

I know joiplay been playing it on previous version of this game but this new update when I play it on joiplay always force close

Same issue just tried to play in Joiplay it really seem we need an Android port.

 

[ddaisy]

Not exactly a bug but one of the audio tracks is significantly quieter than the rest. Having to readjust music volume whenever the piano track (moonlight sonata?) starts or ends playing is a bit annoying.

I'm talking about the first track we can hear in week 1.

 

[labmouseblues]

In my mind, I believe exhibition #2 to be an escalation over #1 where it counts, but I can see it from another perspective. A bukkake, on the surface, is a lot more visceral than asking some questions and being mean.

Well, the first exhibition was very physical, and thus something the girls were - at least in theory - prepared for. Dredging up emotional trauma on top of physical humiliation definitely registered as an escalation to me.

There's only so many ways you can twist a nipple, but there are infinite ways to twist a mind.

Edit: Now that I think about it, the photo shoots were a foreshadowing of the second exhibition, especially Ver's and Fel's, as they both invaded their respective physical personal spaces, while the exhibition itself invaded their emotional personal spaces. Dunno if that was intentional, but it certainly feels like it.

 

[Kamado Tanjiro]

Please, upload to gofile too GIL3D

 

[Turret]

I do think think Felicia's event has been the most physically sadistic so far though.

So far strongman and voyeur will give you the most bang for your buck h-scene wise, but by and large it's mostly just meant to be a bit of RP flavor.

I agree with you that Feli had to suffer the most physical sadism so far. That is highlighted by the fact that both Hana and Chuck, who are very different how they tick, were impressed by her endurance.
Generally, I am "satisfied" with how the second exhibition went, there was a feelable excalation in (this case mental and partly physical) sadism. That is not my cup of tea, but it is simply a great porn story you make and I can enjoy that as more of a crime story.
Unlike some players I look at the exhibition events not as fab material (even if some scene renders are great erotic art by your co-author GIL, which I like outside the context of the story), but stuff part of the main storyline. As far as personal kinks go,you two can never cover everybody´s in the exhibitions. For some it will be too tame, for others right, for the rest too hard. For me, most of the sexual-erotic content will come from the events outside and around the exhibition shows.

As for the various traits, I find voyeur, tireless/inquisitive and Social Chameleon the most satisfying, covering a lot of what flavour events they produce.

 

[AmerHST]

Ok so I saw a lot of positive reviews for this but I'm hesitant to try it because it seems to themed around prostitutions of the LIs? if I'm not mistaken but I also see the romance tag so my question is how is the romance in this VN? Is it worth it to pick it up for that or is it just a small part and the rest is you see the LIs getting passed around?

Whoever answers thank you in advance

 

[McGreed]

Ok so I saw a lot of positive reviews for this but I'm hesitant to try it because it seems to themed around prostitutions of the LIs? if I'm not mistaken but I also see the romance tag so my question is how is the romance in this VN? Is it worth to pick it up for that or is it just a small part and the rest is you see the LIs getting passed around?

Whoever answers thank you in advance

Just try to play it and I practically guarantee that you won't regret the time spent. You may not like a small part of the scenes like it was with me, but otherwise this game is 10/10.

 

[TM | Twisted Games]

Ok so I saw a lot of positive reviews for this but I'm hesitant to try it because it seems to themed around prostitutions of the LIs? if I'm not mistaken but I also see the romance tag so my question is how is the romance in this VN? Is it worth to pick it up for that or is it just a small part and the rest is you see the LIs getting passed around?

Whoever answers thank you in advance

The main female cast members aren't passed around, but one of the central locations of the VN is a gentleman's club where a great deal of the activity occurs, and three of the female main characters are engaged in a competition there. If you need every girl your MC interacts with to be a virgin...I would say this may not be right for you, but if you can work with the premise, there is plenty of romantic content within (too much imho lol) I'd say give it a whirl, the game is very up front with it's concepts...you should know pretty quick if it is for you or not.

 

[Deleted member 4058859]

The main female cast members aren't passed around, but one of the central locations of the VN is a gentleman's club where a great deal of the activity occurs, and three of the female main characters are engaged in a competition there. If you need every girl your MC interacts with to be a virgin...I would say this may not be right for you, but if you can work with the premise, there is plenty of romantic content within (too much imho lol) I'd say give it a whirl, the game is very up front with it's concepts...you should know pretty quick if it is for you or not.

Since the carnations are basically prostituting themselves in a brothel I fully expect the carnations to be 'passed around' in week 3, 4. It would almost be strange if that did not happen given the subject matter of the game.

 

[TM | Twisted Games]

Since the carnations are basically prostituting themselves in a brothel I fully expect the carnations to be 'passed around' in week 3, 4. It would almost be strange if that did not happen given the subject matter of the game.

Well, perhaps so, but they have not been yet...so I can't speak to that.

 

[runner810]

Do you have an Android port for me yet?

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

I partially chalk it up to different tastes and expectations, but it has been a source of reflection. In my mind, I believe exhibition #2 to be an escalation over #1 where it counts, but I can see it from another perspective. A bukkake, on the surface, is a lot more visceral than asking some questions and being mean. Rosalind's event probably could've used one extra twist or maybe I just simply found certain elements of the events more interesting than they actually are.

Whatever the case, I appreciate everyone's honest thoughts, and I just hope exhibition #2 will fit favorably in context of the third and fourth week.

I do think think Felicia's event has been the most physically sadistic so far though.

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Do you have an Android port for me yet?
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Go here and request it: https://f95zone.to/threads/android-port-requests-renpy-only.48745/

 

[TD1900]

We have an android version, but like last time, no one bothered to leak it.

In the interest of maybe saving a few people some bandwidth, I will preemptively say that the public version coming out on the 18th will have an extra ending for the night.

 

[Erotica Biblion]

Did the part where the photoshoot winner was announced during the exhibition introduction happen twice with two different winners?

We hotfixed an issue related to a that maybe half an hour ago. I hope it's the same one.

I didn't see this because I'd been busy playing (I'm a Patron) but I had this exact issue and I was really confused that Veronica somehow won the contest as well, right after Felicia's win was announced.

I don't want to redownload the whole game for it though…

 

[TD1900]

I don't want to redownload the whole game for it though…

The fix is a stand-alone download attached to the patreon post at the bottom. Just take that script file and overwrite the one in the version you have downloaded

 

[Erotica Biblion]

The fix is a stand-alone download attached to the patreon post at the bottom. Just take that script file and overwrite the one in the version you have downloaded

Found and downloaded it! Thank you.

 

[Erotica Biblion]

Found and downloaded it! Thank you.

For any other patrons who used the hotfix, FYI you need to load a save from before the conversation about photo shoot winners, because if that conversation has happened, the flag is permanently broken. (You can't load a save from the end of the exhibition, in other words.)