VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.6 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[lustforsex]

i don't want the devs or people who like the other LIs to take it in the wrong way and or feel bad

i am prefacing this rn because i don't want to be trolled/flamed on like the guy who didn't like felica

and if you don't like anything i wrote don't take it the wrong way personally or accuse me of projecting negativity towards your favourite characters

I'm sure no one will "troll/flame" you for your choice of Veronica, it's not that kind of thread

With that guy who made hasty conclusions about Felicia after only playing half of the current content and clearly has no intention of changing them no matter what and also asking questions that only the writer can answer at the moment - it's a completely different situation

 

[UmbralKnight]

That ain't Veronica. That's Grace. Ian's mother.

She's willing for other people to use their clout to get her son on the right track. Good idea, terrible execution. Then it becomes a terrible idea.



Nonono... Kathy has ALWAYS been this way. She has a strong dark heart to dark heart with Edwin which points out that that she learned how to be manipulative and ensure her sadistic kink got fed while watching the results of said manipulation.

And her husband is a judge and pretty forgetful so she takes that all the way to the bank.

With regards to Felicia, remember the scene in the car. She's willing to be a sugar momma for Edwin because of their connection. She's used to someone wanting something out of an exchange for benefit to both parties. But you can change that around. In Felicia's world, she's used to closing off except with close friends like Mina so indulgences are not the factor here. Felicia knows what she wants and aims to get it so she's goal oriented while enjoying the scenery as she does so. The big thing is that she is willing to swerve and maneuver in order to get it.

Overall, not a bad write up. Just a few fixes and remembering the details of the characters and it's pretty good.

thank you for reading my entire rant
i yeah i agree you regarding grace but Veroncia does literally call the MC a cockroach in the early game

i think might need to replay the game again because i don't remember kathys backstory
i am however still unconvinced about felicia and her reason for being in the club something about her doesn't make sense or the narrative she is selling

I'm sure no one will "troll/flame" you for your choice of Veronica, it's not that kind of thread

With that guy who made hasty conclusions about Felicia after only playing half of the current content and clearly has no intention of changing them no matter what and also asking questions that only the writer can answer at the moment - it's a completely different situation

better safe than sry
i have seen how worked up people here get over minor character like sophie and i don't want to end up creating an online feud with people here or the devs

 

[ffive]

Not going to lie, comments like this ones make me wonder if some of y'all are playing the same game as me, in what universe can you imagine Victoria would end up in an exhibition? she just cried her heart out at the thought of having to tell her son that she was a porn actress.

It's the "i just wanna see Edwin's mom getting railed for real, man" universe. Who cares about justification, just make it happen.

 

[Ottoeight]

here is a controversial take
Veronica is like the middle aged straight man of the group who is going through a very BAD midlife crisis
her wife has divorced her and she is getting remarried soon, she has no kids or friends or even pets
she was once a very successful person who enjoyed professional success now she is struggling badly and she has no one to help ,no shoulder to cry
so all she can do is do is focus more and work hard on the failing business she put too much money and effort so much so that it cost her marriage
this is classic sunk cost fallacy
she could have quit long ago ,she could have filed for bankruptcy long ago but she won't because unlike the other girls in the club just like a middle aged man going to mid life crisis
she is currently struggling with the idea of her legacy , what kind of name she would leave behind
she would rather go down with the ship even if it costs everthing in her life than file bankruptcy and tarnish the professional name she has built so far
she is getting old and she is slowly realising that she might have been a successful olympian once who was famous enough to start her own buisness and even appear on TV
but now everything she worked so hard is going down and she is far too invested in it thats why she would rather go down with her buisness than call it quits and bail
this like those old boxers who used tobe unbeatbale world champions back in their days and who were peak in their time always try to make another comeback and fight against the current world champion who is far younger than them
these old boxers think maybe they still have a chance one last victory to leave behind in their professional carrier history even though everyone knows that the chance of them succeding is very low
sure there is always a monetary aspect to it after all the lesser the chance of success you have the better the payout is if YOU win but they mostly care about is LEGACY they still want the world to know they still got it
thats why she would NEVER quit or file for bankruptcy

Is this a poem? blank verses?

 

[Ottoeight]

It's the "i just wanna see Edwin's mom getting railed for real, man" universe. Who cares about justification, just make it happen.

Just like the I-wanna-see-Mina-become-a-club-girl-let-her-know-the-truth-about-the-club dudes... Jeeeez

 

[TD1900]

It's the "i just wanna see Edwin's mom getting railed for real, man" universe.

Wait. Wait. Hold up.
Now that you've put it that way...

 

[Vicromx]

TD1900 Could you hint/tease us about what's gonna happen in the upcoming exhibition pls ?

 

[TD1900]

TD1900 Could you hint/tease us about what's gonna happen in the upcoming exhibition pls ?

Sex.

 

[labmouseblues]

Sex.

 

[mirc]

and if you don't like anything i wrote don't take it the wrong way personally or accuse me of projecting negativity towards your favourite characters

...but please, can you implement at least a period (.) in your text. Thank you for understanding.

 

[CaptJS]

Sex.

Hey Dev, thank you for your awesome game. But after the latest update, game crashes. I tried changing rendering modes, closing all my programs, deleting persistent file. I have 32GB RAM so memory capacity shouldn't be an issue. This is my first time experiencing a game crash among all the RenPy games I have played. Here's the traceback:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
MemoryError:
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
  File "D:\IDM Temp\DwnlData\PaleCarnations-Ch4Up5Public-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 316, in bootstrap
    renpy.main.main()
  File "D:\IDM Temp\DwnlData\PaleCarnations-Ch4Up5Public-pc\renpy\main.py", line 581, in main
    renpy.persistent.update(True)
  File "D:\IDM Temp\DwnlData\PaleCarnations-Ch4Up5Public-pc\renpy\persistent.py", line 364, in update
    need_save = find_changes()
  File "D:\IDM Temp\DwnlData\PaleCarnations-Ch4Up5Public-pc\renpy\persistent.py", line 175, in find_changes
    backup[f] = safe_deepcopy(new)
  File "D:\IDM Temp\DwnlData\PaleCarnations-Ch4Up5Public-pc\renpy\persistent.py", line 128, in safe_deepcopy
    rv = copy.deepcopy(o)
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/copy.py", line 163, in deepcopy
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/copy.py", line 257, in deepcopydict
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/copy.py", line 163, in deepcopy
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/copy.py", line 249, in deepcopytuple
MemoryError:

 

[CrazyRabbit]

Sex.

Oh well... at least it's not handholding, you unapologetic pervert

 

[DD-MegaDoDo]

can someone tell me how to change MC's name via console?
when i simply do mc = "NEW NAME" it changes for dialog indication, but other characters still use the old name during convos. Then it ends up totally reverting back to the old name after some time

 

[14emp0]

is there any gallery unlocker for this game?

 

[dolfe67]

can someone tell me how to change MC's name via console?
when i simply do mc = "NEW NAME" it changes for dialog indication, but other characters still use the old name during convos. Then it ends up totally reverting back to the old name after some time

I think it's mcf for first name and mcl for last name

 

[Raoddik]

Enjoyed the update even if somehow it felt short, really Loved whole Rose scene.

 

[joebob77474]

What do they mean by the folder for installing the cheat mod? Where do I put the mod and what part of the mod do I need to put there?

 

[Turret]

can someone tell me how to change MC's name via console?
when i simply do mc = "NEW NAME" it changes for dialog indication, but other characters still use the old name during convos. Then it ends up totally reverting back to the old name after some time

Why do want to change the MC name via console? You can change the name easily at game start, when you are asked what name the MC should have.

 

[DominarRygel]

I fucked up and ended up in an supposedly exclusive relationship with Hana, while I've been working on Mina the whole time. I didn't thet the Mina/Hana scene at the concert, and Hana just told Mina I was her boyfriend. What do I need to edit in my save file to make it so I can date them both?

 

[The Senior Perv]

I fucked up and ended up in an supposedly exclusive relationship with Hana, while I've been working on Mina the whole time. I didn't thet the Mina/Hana scene at the concert, and Hana just told Mina I was her boyfriend. What do I need to edit in my save file to make it so I can date them both?

You shouldn't be Hana's boyfriend because neither she and Mina will be okay with you fooling around with both of them.

Check the autosaves or some other files you have and look for a save file where that's close to the moment Hana asks you to be a couple and choose to stay as fuck buddies.