1. Plot spoiler for next update:
2. See the previous point, also I'm not sure if it was clear but Aaliyah is a bitch and probably fucking with you. You do look for her but give up and get drunk instead.
3. I think I mentioned it was the room of the short girls sister. Also, I thought it was implied by the presence of professional security that the girls would be safe.
Just to point out that I'm not trying to complain, just giving some feedback and these points are generally fairly minor and I'm enjoying your story so far otherwise.
1. Fair enough, then its to be expected.
2. I had guessed it wasn't true, but since the reader doesn't yet have the info from the spoiler in 1, the behavior of Kaley earlier in the day and the way Liv reacted to her step-sister being dominated earlier in the timeline I'm sure you can see why it might seem strange that Liv doesn't seem to spend any effort just to make sure her friend is ok and not otherwise being exploited.
3. Again I had guessed that it was intended for them to be fine, but based on what I've seen IRL just having some security and being in the house/room of someone you know doesn't mean much in terms of safety when we know there are "creepy dudes" also in the house and the girls are passed out.
The number of VNs around here that involve people sneaking into girl's bedrooms and doing creepy shit while they sleep should tell us something too I guess.
Anyway as I said, just some feedback, its totally possible I'm just 'reading too much between the lines', so to speak, and being pedantic.
