- Feb 2, 2019
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You should proofread better, this is terribly inconsistent. Stick to present tense, never switch back and forth like this.
Also seconding the earlier comment that sex scenes in dreams suck ass and should be avoided. I play VNs because I want to be invested in the characters before they fuck. If I just want to see teens banging I can go elsewhere.
Edit 2 mnutes later: damn, that's it? This shows potential but I think you revealed it several months too early. You'll have to work very hard with frequent updates to keep the attention, while games that have more to show on first release can live much longer on pure hype.
I hope the game gets finished but I don't think I'll download another release until next year at the earliest.
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