VN Ren'Py Abandoned Paola [Ch. 1] [stoperArt & Dantes]

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xXwankerXx

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Hysni said:
Woman Looks Georgeus Wery Hot but wish it could Be no NTR :( i would gladly play
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Yeah, I feel you ... but Paola is drop-dead sexy and her husband is a piece of shit, he even cheats on her, that was to be expected. I usually don't mind if a fem prot game has NTR, I find it a massive turn off when the "corruption" is too easy or the fmc is too stupid. There's many examples of that.

Hope Paola will find herself a gentleman that really loves her after the revenge is over... no cumbucket finisher stoper please man. Or at least a good girl ending and a slut ending.:unsure:

As usual the renders are top-notch, hopefully it'll have some "educational" animations cause we have a new Sexiest woman in porn gaming candidate.
 
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xXwankerXx said:
Yeah, I feel you ... but Paola is drop-dead sexy and her husband is a piece of shit, he even cheats on her, that was to be expected. I usually don't mind if a fem prot game has NTR, I find it a massive turn off when the "corruption" is too easy or the fmc is too stupid. There's many examples of that.

Hope Paola will find herself a gentleman that really loves her after the revenge is over... no cumbucket finisher stoper please man. Or at least a good girl ending and a slut ending.:unsure:

As usual the renders are top-notch, hopefully it'll have some "educational" animations cause we have a new Sexiest woman in porn gaming candidate.
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I assume that the story is already written by Dantes and there is basically not much that stoper can do about it. Someone correct me if I'm wrong.
 
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slackster said:
A critique
Put the text on the empty space on the right of the screen instead of over the renders
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I think the text over renders suits well and place more emphasis to the novel approach as in a ebook or digital magazine.
 
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Νice start nice iconsthe, text would be either right or left not hiding the icons.it would be nice if the text were smaller, we wouldn't read a text, an image would say a thousand words. (sorry my english)
 
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xXwankerXx said:
Hope Paola will find herself a gentleman that really loves her after the revenge is over... no cumbucket finisher stoper please man. Or at least a good girl ending and a slut ending.:unsure:

As usual the renders are top-notch, hopefully it'll have some "educational" animations cause we have a new Sexiest woman in porn gaming candidate.
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I have no idea, it all depends on Dantes, it's his story. He has the first 7 chapters written, but there's plenty more to go. And I haven't asked for any details from the future plans, because I don't want to spoil the story for myself.

I will make animations for the future chapters. And I'll make a more standard VN format for the PrenPy versions, with individual image display, instead of this comic page format. Although the accent will remain on the writing, with the images only as an addition.
 
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I have no idea, it all depends on Dantes, it's his story. He has the first 7 chapters written, but there's plenty more to go. And I haven't asked for any details from the future plans, because I don't want to spoil the story for myself.

I will make animations for the future chapters. And I'll make a more standard VN format for the PrenPy versions, with individual image display, instead of this comic page format. Although the accent will remain on the writing, with the images only as an addition.
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Good work, man. How often will chapters come out?
 
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