VN Ren'Py Abandoned Paola [Ch. 1] [stoperArt & Dantes]

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Zoey Raven

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By now is a novel: read and watch.
Yes I downloaded and looked at the script. Wondered if it would need a walkthrough, but that's a big fat NO! Looks really good visually though.
 
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Huldrafolk

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Can someone tell me if there is corruption/blackmail/groping? I only like NTR where the girl is innocent and dirty men are wolves. The opposite with the slut and beautiful gentlemen is for sure not for me
 

Johnysilver771

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i d like to see standart VN style than a book. or do smthing with font pls. too small. unconfortable for eyes.
 

Venoma

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Can someone tell me if there is corruption/blackmail/groping? I only like NTR where the girl is innocent and dirty men are wolves. The opposite with the slut and beautiful gentlemen is for sure not for me
Uhh...do those "innocent girl" games you like actually exist, at least in a non-cartoon'y and planned animated setting? Most just take the early sharp turn to full blown "drools at every cock she sees" slut pretty quick the moment the progression reaches the sex scenes stage.

(well, Monica is an exception I guess)

Model alone has me downloading this though.
 

neman

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man.. i don't know.. to me presentation is disaster ... ok so dev decided on half screen image.. but then put wall of text on top of it? ... why not put text on one side of screen and image on other...
 

baka

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Im looking forward for the "wide" edition. this smartphone style and text placement distracted my "imagination". to switch back and forth with the H key did not help either, just annoy me.
story is good and renders are hot, and I think with the "ren'py" edition, if we call it that, will make it even better.
I think some background music could improve it even more.
 

randomized

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First chapter is promising, i will wait before rating. Could have been a lot better if the text were displayed less intrusively.

Awesome model btw
 
3.30 star(s) 12 Votes