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This is an illustrated depiction of an erotic story. It will be interesting to see how the developer transitions to a standard Ren'Py display format, with the enormous quantity of text. But it must be done. Having so much text covering up the renders is a definite turn-off.
I assume that this will be a kinetic novel throughout, without any choices. It seems like there will be one revenge per chapter, until Paola reaches her goal of ten. If that is the case, to give a choice to opt out of one of the NPCs would render a chapter null.
I assume that this will be a kinetic novel throughout, without any choices. It seems like there will be one revenge per chapter, until Paola reaches her goal of ten. If that is the case, to give a choice to opt out of one of the NPCs would render a chapter null.
TO STOPER ART
I really like this narration,but i also want to see some not story distrubing choices like for example Dress choice which does not affect the story,because it will make us get into the story little more than reading it
I really like this narration,but i also want to see some not story distrubing choices like for example Dress choice which does not affect the story,because it will make us get into the story little more than reading it
- May 4, 2017
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vjmaddox it's a static story, there will be no choices. Maybe one day we can adapt it as a game/visual novel, but not anytime soon.
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I understand ,hope to see paola ch.2 in future
keep it up with your good work,waiting to see more of your work in future
- May 6, 2017
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Ooh a revenge VN with a female protagonist, SHINYYY!!! I WANT PLAYYYY WITH SHINYYY!!!
*ahem* I mean, this is new. I just hope this doesn't translate to the mc plying her wares to every old, fat, ugly, stinky guy she found. And here's what I found in the 1st chapter.
Notable male characters beside the husband in this chapter:
Old pervert shopkeeper check,
Fat neighbor check,
Ugly husband's rival check,
Stinky gardener with mental deficiency (at least I think so
) check.
I hope this is not a precursor for what's about to happen in the future chapters. I also hope all four of them is not included in the revenge plan. I get it with the rival. If I am the husband I would be furious, jealous, and humiliated if I see my wife cheat with him which is perfect. Cause even though the story is viewed through the wife's perspective, this is (gonna be?) a NTR story.
But the others? Oh I would shed tears I'm sure, but that is because I'd be laughing my ass off at her
EDIT: Wouldn't that make the revenge a fail? I was compelled to play because of the revenge angle, but if this going to be another generic depraved slut simulator (which the possibility it's going to be is high) I'm gonna be disappointed.
And for me as the player, it will just be an instant boner killer. *sigh* Why is in almost every corruption or fem protag games the ugliest and the grossest are the main selling points?
If the role is reversed and the husband is the mc, I am sure all the women involved will all be having supermodel proportions with angelic or seducing faces. And when the wife caught cheating it's gonna be with the ugliest guy in the whole VN and the gardener will be replaced with a sexy maid or another supermodel colleague, etc,.
*ahem* I mean, this is new. I just hope this doesn't translate to the mc plying her wares to every old, fat, ugly, stinky guy she found. And here's what I found in the 1st chapter.
Notable male characters beside the husband in this chapter:
Old pervert shopkeeper check,
Fat neighbor check,
Ugly husband's rival check,
Stinky gardener with mental deficiency (at least I think so
) check.I hope this is not a precursor for what's about to happen in the future chapters. I also hope all four of them is not included in the revenge plan. I get it with the rival. If I am the husband I would be furious, jealous, and humiliated if I see my wife cheat with him which is perfect. Cause even though the story is viewed through the wife's perspective, this is (gonna be?) a NTR story.
But the others? Oh I would shed tears I'm sure, but that is because I'd be laughing my ass off at her
EDIT: Wouldn't that make the revenge a fail? I was compelled to play because of the revenge angle, but if this going to be another generic depraved slut simulator (which the possibility it's going to be is high) I'm gonna be disappointed.
And for me as the player, it will just be an instant boner killer. *sigh* Why is in almost every corruption or fem protag games the ugliest and the grossest are the main selling points?
If the role is reversed and the husband is the mc, I am sure all the women involved will all be having supermodel proportions with angelic or seducing faces. And when the wife caught cheating it's gonna be with the ugliest guy in the whole VN
and the gardener will be replaced with a sexy maid or another supermodel colleague, etc,.
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Yeah, like what the hell. I had to re-read that so many times I thought my eyes were failing me
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because people like to see a hot girl degraded as much as possible. and old,ugly farts banging hot chicks is in that categoryOoh a revenge VN with a female protagonist, SHINYYY!!! I WANT PLAYYYY WITH SHINYYY!!!
*ahem* I mean, this is new. I just hope this doesn't translate to the mc plying her wares to every old, fat, ugly, stinky guy she found. And here's what I found in the 1st chapter.
Notable male characters beside the husband in this chapter:
Old pervert shopkeeper check,
Fat neighbor check,
Ugly husband's rival check,
Stinky gardener with mental deficiency (at least I think so
I hope this is not a precursor for what's about to happen in the future chapters. I also hope all four of them is not included in the revenge plan. I get it with the rival. If I am the husband I would be furious, jealous, and humiliated if I see my wife cheat with him which is perfect. Cause even though the story is viewed through the wife's perspective, this is (gonna be?) a NTR story.
But the others? Oh I would shed tears I'm sure, but that is because I'd be laughing my ass off at her
And for me as the player, it will just be a instant boner killer. *sigh* Why is in almost every corruption or fem protag games the ugliest and the grossest are the main selling points?
If the role is reversed and the husband is the mc, I am sure all the women involved will all be having supermodel proportions with angelic or seducing faces. And when the wife caught cheating it's gonna be with the ugliest guy in the whole VN
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I know, I just can't understand it. I'm pretty much open minded and always try things first before talking about it. I have no problem discussing about ntr even though I don't like it, cause I can look past the humiliation and enjoy the sex. Like, most ntr sex scenes are hot but I never put myself as the person being cucked (though I still avoid ntr focused games like a plague).
I just can't with this one. I still can bear (a little) the fat, old and ugly part but I don't know how can people get aroused seeing someone having sex with the smelliest and grossest person and sometimes in the most unhygienic places. I know that all of this is just a fantasy and 99% wont happen in real life but still...
EDIT: Also wouldn't the revenge be a failure in this case, like I said if I was the husband I would gladly left the wife instead of fighting for her or worse enjoy being the cuck or something. I was compelled to play because of the revenge angle, but if this going to be another depraved slut simulator (which the possibility it's going to be is high) I'm gonna be disappointed.
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- Dec 27, 2017
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The developer has addressed this. It's a factor of a person in a lighted room not being able to see someone standing outside in the dark.Yeah, like what the hell. I had to re-read that so many times I thought my eyes were failing me
Nothing wrong with what you said. Its just one of many fetish that some people get off by. Where shame *may* increases by X amount if the stealer is old, bald, fat or ugly.
Its the same with some people don't understand why some ppl can fap with incest. Like doing it with your mum or worse still your daughter. That * sick * idea itself grosses some ppl out.
Just a fantasy.
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Yeah, guess it's just too extreme for me. But not as extreme as the one with the bugs or insects. No offence to the ones who love it, but I tried one (japanese) VN with that fetish years ago. Instead of wanting to ejaculate sperm I felt nauseous and almost vomited
. I had nightmares about it for 2 weeks I think.
- Jun 8, 2017
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stoper You did a great job as usual.The kissing scene was the best.I think kissing is very important in ntr style games.By the way Kissing scene of Parker and Jessica in the game was very nice but very short.I am waiting longer kissing scenes, especially with Parker, Mayor, Birch or school principal.Thank you man, you're great.