VN Ren'Py Paracosmic Reality [v1.12.1 Main] [Jiggly Stone Studios]

[Tux_]

Anyone else download the Android APK and it's just version 1.0.1 or is it just me?

 

[Vhelly]

This game is actually cute, can't wait to see more.

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

Anyone else download the Android APK and it's just version 1.0.1 or is it just me?

Yeah, that one's my bad lol. Basically I have enough knowledge to get an android port working, but there were so many things I didn't understand when setting it up, that I just set it all and chose not to touch it out of fear I'd break something. It's probably not as bad as I make it out to be, but I'd just rather not poke it too much and have stable working android builds, even if it's at the detriment of having the same android version number.

 

[twicethefunn]

Loved it so far, just a shame I found it so early on in development. The renders are nice, the setting is interesting, and the characters are varied. The characters feel like they could be actually real, which isn't always easy to achieve, so kudos there.

Also, I don't know how much proof reading you do but I did notice a few grammatical errors and typos here and there. If you'd like, I could comb back through it and list them for you.

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

Loved it so far, just a shame I found it so early on in development. The renders are nice, the setting is interesting, and the characters are varied. The characters feel like they could be actually real, which isn't always easy to achieve, so kudos there.

Also, I don't know how much proof reading you do but I did notice a few grammatical errors and typos here and there. If you'd like, I could comb back through it and list them for you.

Thanks for the appreciation~ I spend quite a bit of time with a few buds trying to ensure that a lot of characters feel natural and fun takes a fair bit of effort thinking for some 10+ characters with the 3 braincells I got xD.

As for grammar issues, I always appreciate getting grammatical feedback. Do note that a couple of them are intentional/colloquial, but feel free to report any that you see and I'll fix any that are unintentional.

 

[Tux_]

Yeah, that one's my bad lol. Basically I have enough knowledge to get an android port working, but there were so many things I didn't understand when setting it up, that I just set it all and chose not to touch it out of fear I'd break something. It's probably not as bad as I make it out to be, but I'd just rather not poke it too much and have stable working android builds, even if it's at the detriment of having the same android version number.

Totally get that Android builds definitely sound tricky. That said, I’d really love to see the latest version on Android if possible. Even if it’s just a basic update without all the bells and whistles, having the newest content would be awesome. Appreciate all the work you’ve already put in

 

[twicethefunn]

Thanks for the appreciation~ I spend quite a bit of time with a few buds trying to ensure that a lot of characters feel natural and fun takes a fair bit of effort thinking for some 10+ characters with the 3 braincells I got xD.

As for grammar issues, I always appreciate getting grammatical feedback. Do note that a couple of them are intentional/colloquial, but feel free to report any that you see and I'll fix any that are unintentional.

Alrighty, here's the things I found. For each instance, I'll put the original text first, my feedback second with the correction in bold, and reasoning third:

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Anything I haven't mentioned is just very minor punctuation issues, stuff that wouldn't impact the reading experience for anyone and it'd just be extremely pedantic and nit-picky. I hope I haven't come across as rude... I don't have the best tact sometimes.

On a side note, why does Jade suddenly start calling Shizu 'Guy'? It seems to come out of nowhere. Also, I really like that you 'animate' Sylvie's tail and other little things, like Jade interacting with the cereal, bowl and milk while making breakfast. You could easily just leave them as static images or have a single image for Jade preparing breakfast and cut down on rendering times, but it's a very nice attention to detail that helps the characters feel more alive.

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

Totally get that Android builds definitely sound tricky. That said, I’d really love to see the latest version on Android if possible. Even if it’s just a basic update without all the bells and whistles, having the newest content would be awesome. Appreciate all the work you’ve already put in

Oh, you're getting all the newest content. It's literally just the version number is the same across all builds xD

The v1.11.0m ends out with the group leaving the clothing store after buying Sylvie some shoes and talking to the goth girl.

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

Alrighty, here's the things I found. For each instance, I'll put the original text first, my feedback second with the correction in bold, and reasoning third:























Anything I haven't mentioned is just very minor punctuation issues, stuff that wouldn't impact the reading experience for anyone and it'd just be extremely pedantic and nit-picky. I hope I haven't come across as rude... I don't have the best tact sometimes.

On a side note, why does Jade suddenly start calling Shizu 'Guy'? It seems to come out of nowhere. Also, I really like that you 'animate' Sylvie's tail and other little things, like Jade interacting with the cereal, bowl and milk while making breakfast. You could easily just leave them as static images or have a single image for Jade preparing breakfast and cut down on rendering times, but it's a very nice attention to detail that helps the characters feel more alive.

Thank you for the list! I'll jot down which one's need fixing and gettem sorted out. Also, it might not hurt to edit your post and hide all that in a spoiler xD quite the wall of text ya got goin on there.

Typo's sorted! Thank you a ton for pointing all those out! Pretty much every single one of em were actual issues that have now been rectified.

Also, cause I missed your question before, Jade calling MC "guy" is a colloquialism. I picked it up a while back from a youtuber that I watch (Skapegote) xD he and his friend Books, who he has on the channel occasionally, will just go at each other back n forth with it.

Also, glad that you appreciate the attention to detail! It is quite a bit of work but I agree, it makes them feel more alive.

 

[twicethefunn]

Good thinking, I've edited it all into a spoiler. I'm happy to have helped!

 

[Tux_]

Oh, you're getting all the newest content. It's literally just the version number is the same across all builds xD

The v1.11.0m ends out with the group leaving the clothing store after buying Sylvie some shoes and talking to the goth girl.

Ah gotcha Thanks for clearing that up good to know the content is up to date I was worried I was missing out on new stuff but it sounds like it was an issue with the build number appreciate the explanation (⁠^⁠^⁠)

 

[single_guy_from_au]

I can't wait for the next episode of this amazing game.

Thank you for your hard work - JigglyStone - Fero Seele

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

Thread reported for update. Hold onto your butts!

Also, to those that missed it.. I sincerely apologize for how long this update took. I talk about it in more detail here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/paracosmic-reality-v1-11-0-main-jiggly-stone-studios.147538/post-16646480

Needless to say, the past few months have been quite the ringer for me, so please be gentle and adhere to the recent mod post in the thread:
https://f95zone.to/threads/paracosmic-reality-v1-12-1-main-jiggly-stone-studios.147538/post-16279054

I'll be here responding to comments as usual, but I work IRL the next couple of days, so replies might be delayed.

 

[xroads315]

Is there any actual sex yet?

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Nice update as always, even felt a bit longer than the usual ones. Such an enjoyable chill game. Goth girl, hubba hubba. She's got that BTGG thing going on. And we still didn't get her name yet. But Dara looks cool.

Looking forward to the next one. Thanks.

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

Nice update as always, even felt a bit longer than the usual ones. Such an enjoyable chill game. Goth girl, hubba hubba. She's got that BTGG thing going on. And we still didn't get her name yet. But Dara looks cool.

Looking forward to the next one. Thanks.

Thanks for the love!

The not knowing her name thing is actually intentional don't worry, it's not a mistake xD it'll come in time.

 

[Adhdclassic]

I got my new screen saver Big Titty Goth Girl... Dayum.

 

[HiHaHo]

you'd think that goth girl would have ripped back muscle's but no she just learned gravity magic.

 

[single_guy_from_au]

Tonight is THE night!

Thank you for your amazing game - JigglyStone - Fero Seele

 

[tmu500]

Thanks for the love!

The not knowing her name thing is actually intentional don't worry, it's not a mistake xD it'll come in time.

Thank you for the great work.