RPGM Abandoned Paradise Beach [v0.4.6.2] [El Tanque]

[Calistilaigh]

Are you ESL? I've only made my way through the prologue, but a lot of it seems as though it were written by someone who isn't a native English speaker (if that's not the case I apologize, not trying to offend). Not to say it's bad or anything, but it just takes me out of it a bit when I have to try to decipher what a sentence is trying to say.

Have you looked into getting an editor by any chance? The sentence structure and plot is coherent, it's just the word choices and spelling a lot of the time are questionable. The character dialogue comes off a bit stiff because of it.

 

[El Tanque]

Are you ESL? I've only made my way through the prologue, but a lot of it seems as though it were written by someone who isn't a native English speaker (if that's not the case I apologize, not trying to offend). Not to say it's bad or anything, but it just takes me out of it a bit when I have to try to decipher what a sentence is trying to say.

Have you looked into getting an editor by any chance? The sentence structure and plot is coherent, it's just the word choices and spelling a lot of the time are questionable. The character dialogue comes off a bit stiff because of it.

Hello, no, I am not a native English speaker, the game is what it is, it is free, no sponsors, no Patreon, if anyone is interested in helping with the dialogues for free, he/she is welcome.

 

[El Tanque]

Guys, please replace this image, the in-game version has an editing box, which I forgot to delete. Just drop it in the (Paradise Beach/img/pictures) folder and replace.
Rename it without the quotes: "TwinsSex_animated_2_20"

 

[Calistilaigh]

Hello, no, I am not a native English speaker, the game is what it is, it is free, no sponsors, no Patreon, if anyone is interested in helping with the dialogues for free, he/she is welcome.

Yeah that's fine, I figured that was the case. As for how to fix it, that's a tricky one. I don't really have the mindset for editing (it's a big commitment, and also you don't get to enjoy the games as much yourself if you're working on all the scripts), but I wouldn't really know how to go about finding one either.

I suppose it's not a super big deal, but it is a bit immersion breaking when the character's dialogues are a bit stilted because of how they're written. They come across as a bit monotone at times, or their emotions are written a bit weird, and it's just somewhat jarring on those occasions.

 

[El Tanque]

Yeah that's fine, I figured that was the case. As for how to fix it, that's a tricky one. I don't really have the mindset for editing (it's a big commitment, and also you don't get to enjoy the games as much yourself if you're working on all the scripts), but I wouldn't really know how to go about finding one either.

I suppose it's not a super big deal, but it is a bit immersion breaking when the character's dialogues are a bit stilted because of how they're written. They come across as a bit monotone at times, or their emotions are written a bit weird, and it's just somewhat jarring on those occasions.

It's okay, I really know that no one would take the time, it was just to show you that there's not much I can do about it. If you can't enjoy the game as it is, then what can we do? You can play another game, or endure my bad English hahaha.
I hope you have a very happy holiday season with your family and friends and stay healthy.

 

[trane87]

Hi, I don't know if it would be compatible, (the game has a mechanism in combat missions that makes you point and shoot with the mouse, therefore the movement of the character by mouse click is disabled).
I can do it, but I can't test it, would you like to be a tester for the game?

Edit: Hahaha That's what I thought.

I would love to test this masterpiece on android if you are willing to try
Just say the word

 

[trane87]

Are you willing to make a legit walkthrough or hint list? I would love that!! PRETTY PLEASE

 

[El Tanque]

I would love to test this masterpiece on android if you are willing to try
Just say the word

Ok, I'll convert it and send you the link, thanks.

Walktrough? maybe, but after the holidays, for the time being, I have work piled up.

 

[El Tanque]

I would love to test this masterpiece on android if you are willing to try
Just say the word

You must be registered to see the links

Wow, this page tells you what you need to do, to create the app, I think we better keep it simple.

 

[yrban7477]

-New content with Veronica. how to open ? I don't understand

 

[El Tanque]

-New content with Veronica. how to open ? I don't understand

Visit her in the morning.

Spoiler: Veronica

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[TELEFANT]

Christmas Update Online? HELL YEAH!

 

[Samhill]

For some reason this no longer works for me. I could play the last version, but now it doesn't work.

 

[El Tanque]

For some reason this no longer works for me. I could play the last version, but now it doesn't work.

Hi, I think you have to be a little more specific my friend, you can't continue your last play, or the game just won't open?

-Do you use Windows or Mac?
-If the game does not open/start, it may be due to an error during download. Try another download link.
-To continue with your saved game, you have to export your save file, to the new game.

 

[Samhill]

The game won't work. I have an old ass Mac (10.9.5) and I use to play through Wine. The Mac app won't launch and the Wine-launched .exe gives me a title bar that disappears and a RPG Maker icon in the Dock (as it usually does).

 

[PuroBogotà]

The game won't work. I have an old ass Mac (10.9.5) and I use to play through Wine. The Mac app won't launch and the Wine-launched .exe gives me a title bar that disappears and a RPG Maker icon in the Dock (as it usually does).

Did you try running the mac app using this?

 

[Samhill]

Does nothing.

 

[Lamoucheronn]

Stuck in throne room, no sign of the vampire and can't interact with mirror

 

[El Tanque]

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Stuck in throne room, no sign of the vampire and can't interact with mirror

Hi, did you look all over the castle? sometimes he goes quickly down, towards the entrance, he's a coward.
I'm going to check anyway.

 

[Samhill]

I got it working. I had to run it under XP in Wine.

EDIT: And I spoke too soon. It will run under the older versions of Windows, but I can't do anything. From my last save I see the blondes having dinner and I get an overlay telling me it's evening. I can bring up the menu and use that, but nothing else. My other save is the off-island combat mission. I can move and use the menu, but not shoot and I die from the enemies.