Ren'Py Abandoned Paradise Pool [Ch.2] [Alxndraa]

[Majindevil]

Dun bother me. I love harem games. But I'm not so feeble I expect every girl in the world to be waiting for me in breathless chastity, even tho they don't know I exist, jilling themselves endlessly keeping themselves wet for my unknown arrival date. It's almost as if ppl have lives before the MC stumbled into it and it's more then juvenile to expect them to NOT have lived their lives before you showed up.

Yep you are absolutely right, but do you also want to see or be told in detail what they have done? If yes then you like the 3 letter genre if not you (Like the people complaining) possible will not like the game.

 

[iikriana1]

Thank you very much, your game works very well.

 

[Deleted member 997153]

After knowing the two games you are working on it is not surprising that you defend this game.

Ha! It's a great game so far and it needs no defense, except from the hyperventilating tag scolds.

 

[Deleted member 997153]

Group sex...not with MC.
MC Harem, maybe in future...
Voyeurism ... with male NPCs. In male straight protagonist game.
That's why many tags are useless. And it's better to read the comments about each TAG... or the lack of unpopular TAGs.

Clearly the focus of the game is voyeurism / NTR / flashback of girls (old excuse to avoid NTR tag).
There are more porn content without the MC than with the MC. Does not fit with Overview.

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Nothing about needing to look at flashbacks / photos / from the girls away from the MC.

If it's your fetish, no problem.
But the DEV could make a clearer overview. If the focus will be on the girls past / present / future (without MC) , the target audience will be voyeurism player / NTR player / female players. Not male harem players. Harem, maybe in distant future... after looking at 30 flashbacks of the girls.

And it's no use trying to push NTR / voyeurism (with male NPC) content to those who don't like it. It's extremely boring for those who are not interested.

The DEV may make DEV notes to clarify game content. This would greatly reduce future complaints. But if the DEV's goal is to generate messages in the thread, he/she doesn't need to clarify anything.

Play the game before you comment on it because almost none of what you is wrote is correct and gross mischaracterization of the game.

 

[paust.alex]

It's almost as if ppl have lives before the MC stumbled into it and it's more then juvenile to expect them to NOT have lived their lives before you showed up.

In your mind, having a life before meeting the MC means having a promiscuous sex life and sleeping around? Thank God not all girls are such whores, there are girls who know their worth and wait for someone who is really special and worthy of them. And if you're more into filthy whores, my condolences, don't forget to see a venereologist.

Ha! It's a great game so far and it needs no defense, except from the hyperventilating tag scolds.

So far, it looks like one of two things. Either you've been paid to promote, or you think the author is a girl and you hope to get laid. If it's the latter, I am sorry, because as you know, there are no girls on the internet.

 

[DarkSithLord47]

In your mind, having a life before meeting the MC means having a promiscuous sex life and sleeping around? Thank God not all girls are such whores, there are girls who know their worth and wait for someone who is really special and worthy of them. And if you're more into filthy whores, my condolences, don't forget to see a venereologist.



So far, it looks like one of two things. Either you've been paid to promote, or you think the author is a girl and you hope to get laid.

Or 3 : he wants to look at his own picture when checking the dictionary for the ''White Knight'' word

 

[Deleted member 3208170]

Ok I have played the game because someone has aked for it.

Typical Sandbox game. Where you have to visit a location to get new elements of a Picture Story. With Point grind, which doesn't matter at this point, I guess.
The Main story is rudiment at best. It is nothing. It gets you from picture to picture.
The Main theme is cheating. End of Line.

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Conclusion.
Story is near to not existent. 1 out 5
Sandbox system without hints(not a problem now, but will definitely a problem in the future). 2 out 5
Player choices are there, but in reality not. Because without a hint system or walkthrough, you won't be able to pursue a Lady you want to hunt down. And the cheating/sharing/NTR stuff can not be fully avoided. 1 out of 5 (I expect in a sandbox game more control over my decisions)
Graphics are standard Honey Select. I don't care, but we have seen it a lot. 3 out of 5
Which makes it a 2 out of 5 in total.

To the NTR. Suzie and Hanna are both get jealous when they see you fucking around. So NTR is in the game.
What definitely is in the game are cheating and sharing. Without any discussion.

This is nothing we haven't seen before and well with that story not really a good game.
I am not into NTR, but I doubt NTR lovers have their fun here.

 

[hobobobb]

Ok I have played the game because someone has aked for it.

Typical Sandbox game. Where you have to visit a location to get new elements of a Picture Story. With Point grind, which doesn't matter at this point, I guess.
The Main story is rudiment at best. It is nothing. It gets you from picture to picture.
The Main theme is cheating. End of Line.

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Conclusion.
Story is near to not existent. 1 out 5
Sandbox system without hints(not a problem now, but will definitely a problem in the future). 2 out 5
Player choices are there, but in reality not. Because without a hint system or walkthrough, you won't be able to pursue a Lady you want to hunt down. And the cheating/sharing/NTR stuff can't be fully avoidable. 1 out of 5 (I expect in a sandbox game more control over my decisions)
Graphics are standard Honey Select. I don't care, but we have seen it a lot. 3 out of 5
Which makes it a 2 out of 5 in total.

To the NTR. Suzie and Hanna are both get jealous when they see you fucking around. So NTR is in the game.
What definitely is in the game are cheating and sharing. Without any discussion.

This is nothing we haven't seen before and well with that story not really a good game.
I am not into NTR, but I doubt NTR lovers have their fun here.

Thanks for the excellent summary!

I don't like to share.

(Pushes 'Ignore' button)


Dev should maybe label their game properly, so they attract 'positive' attention from the players who will like your content, and not 'negative' attention from players (who reading the current tags) expect a completely different kind of game.

Best of luck Dev


*Edit: Also seems to be missing 'Gangbang' Tag.

 

[lordfridge9]

Thank fuk they ugly as shit or this could get messi.

Now just to grab the popcorn

 

[Deleted member 997153]

I love that several people here are salty that the thread lacks tags that don't exist or attribute ulterior motives to the dev when it was an uploader who posted the OP and there's no evidence that the dev is on F95 or even knows the game is posted here. God, this is funny shit!

 

[Lerd0]

.....was expecting more from this thread tho........

 

[michael1984]

Well decided to at least give this game a fair shot

But have to agree with the majority of people on this tread

You cant reject the girls caus even rejection gets u in a sex scene with them so thats already messed up

Then the scenes that i have to go trough were other guys fuck the girls yeah no thanks made me already pass up on several girls in the game as possible Li


So everything considered the fan base for this game probally will be people who into either NTR or Swinger lifestyle

Wish the dev all the best tho

But dont see many people enjoying this game

 

[BaasB]

I love that several people here are salty that the thread lacks tags that don't exist or attribute ulterior motives to the dev when it was an uploader who posted the OP and there's no evidence that the dev is on F95 or even knows the game is posted here. God, this is funny shit!

Just ignore them, and move on

 

[hakarlman]

I love, love, love NTR, but if you truly want to cater to the Harem crowd, you have to give Harem players 100% control to prevent any girl from being fucked by other guys. NTR can never be forced on a Harem player in anyway.

It's a good general rule to never force any sexual scene on the player, ever. Always give a choice. Yes, that requires a *GULP*, CONDITIONAL IF STATEMENT, oh the humanity!

 

[Deleted member 997153]

I love all the netori that's being set up in this game. Suzie's husband is already cheating on her so it's only a matter of time until she breaks. It would be fantastic if we can steal the husband's sidepiece from him too. Niki is a little firecracker and I hope we can steal her away from Ichiro. He's funny and I'd love to see his reaction to Niki turning him down because she's banging the MC now. Didn't see much of El, but she seems to have a dominant personality. I bet she ends up being the femdom option. She seems a bit out of place with the other characters so far though.

The animations need some work. It looks they weren't looped properly during editing so there are some janky resets every few seconds.

 

[Sukebe_S]

This is a promising start with some (generally) hot artwork! Good work, dev.

One story suggestion: keep the narrative in the MC's head. Whenever we pop into other characters' heads, it kind of takes me out of the story. (Maybe that's just a me-thing.)

Keep up the good work!

 

[arimfan]

I love that several people here are salty that the thread lacks tags that don't exist or attribute ulterior motives to the dev when it was an uploader who posted the OP and there's no evidence that the dev is on F95 or even knows the game is posted here. God, this is funny shit!

get ready for 100+ pages of awesomeness

 

[Larry2000]

the MC is the dude in the last preview pic. and yes your right. the blonde girl will give a BJ to one guy in the locker room and then we see some other dude get laid.
and here's stuff like this... be warned

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so yup too many dicks for me to care about this game.

from what i can gather from the image folders this is mostly a everyone fucks everyone kinda game. also needs an NTR tag since some things you can only see if you choose being ok with NTR such as the above picture.

then there's the sandbox management type stuff which is bad in general but eh i was willing to overlook that. everything else not so much either way not for me.

Is the guy on the bottom my boy Zack from Dead or Alive? Holy shit! That's what he's been doing between fighting and DJing. Good for him I guess.

NTR be damned, at least he's having fun.

On a serious note, oof. I can't see making a house wife out of her anytime soon :/

 

[BTLD]

Is the guy on the bottom my boy Zack from Dead or Alive? Holy shit! That's what he's been doing between fighting and DJing. Good for him I guess.

NTR be damned, at least he's having fun.

On a serious note, oof. I can't see making a house wife out of her anytime soon :/

you mean anytime.

 

[Larry2000]

Dun bother me. I love harem games. But I'm not so feeble I expect every girl in the world to be waiting for me in breathless chastity, even tho they don't know I exist, jilling themselves endlessly keeping themselves wet for my unknown arrival date. It's almost as if ppl have lives before the MC stumbled into it and it's more then juvenile to expect them to NOT have lived their lives before you showed up.

I think you're misconstruing and projecting things that aren't there. Any girl you've ever dated probably had someone before you at one point or another. History is that, history. It's cool. However, it stays in the past because you are current. In a game revolving around a character that seeks Harem, at least in my opinion, should be seeing things through his point of view. Just like when we date someone, we don't have flashbacks in our heads about who she was banging before you. I don't ask her to show me all the porno's she makes. That's just me though. In VN's that is the least of my thoughts to know what she did in the past. That's why other Mainstream games handle it so well. Most popular games have female characters with histories that don't start talking about dicking them down at every moment let alone seeing them. So, I don't think it's insecurity if we prefer not to see a chick we're soon gonna be with getting railed out in front of me. Just saying.

On the note of them "keeping themselves wet" for you: No one asks this, but a girl you're about to date isn't about to tell you how often or even the last time she got laid. Just saying again.