- Nov 12, 2019
- 23
- 30
Figured I'd ask.
The developer's first language wasn't English, right?
There's a lot of weird lines that do not read naturally to me.
And some obvious spelling and grammar issues as well.
An editor would really help to improve this game, in my opinion, since it's gotten to a point where I've given up on reading the game's story text.. And I'm basically just only going through the motions, checking the quest log just to see where I'm supposed to go next, without paying attention to the actual conversation details.
The developer's first language wasn't English, right?
There's a lot of weird lines that do not read naturally to me.
And some obvious spelling and grammar issues as well.
An editor would really help to improve this game, in my opinion, since it's gotten to a point where I've given up on reading the game's story text.. And I'm basically just only going through the motions, checking the quest log just to see where I'm supposed to go next, without paying attention to the actual conversation details.