nemesisgr

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I might have a solution for the pregnancy fetish problem.

Since the family of the mc is the heir to the family lineage, and the city is pretty much their property, I think adding some Pregnancy Accelerating Drugs would be a fun touch. It could either be toggled on/off when you start, or you could just leave the option to buy the drug easily available.
personally i think i wont get any of my girls pregnant while i am fighting a mob war with rival gangs... pregnant women or children can turn put to be a liability in this kind of situation..
 

Vaars

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Is there any other way to take Angelica without marry?
currently not - but now you mention it, there definitely should be! maybe a late-game enslavement alternative, available when not marrying her?
I found it a little unsatisfying that chooing against angelica locks you out of completing the achievements Page - this makes it a clear right choice - wrong choice situation. being able to come back around to her later would be cool in more ways than one.
 

OranosDev

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Are you planning to expand/add more scene/story during our walk at some key place? Like walking around the university,beach downtown,etc..?
At some point, yes. One of the updates I want to do at some point will just be like a large content update to flesh out the world with more explorable freestanding content rather than new characters and stories. Regardless of the many paths already in the game I want there to basically be something to find around every corner in the finished product.
This update isn't something I prioritize right now though.
 

OranosDev

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currently not - but now you mention it, there definitely should be! maybe a late-game enslavement alternative, available when not marrying her?
I found it a little unsatisfying that chooing against angelica locks you out of completing the achievements Page - this makes it a clear right choice - wrong choice situation. being able to come back around to her later would be cool in more ways than one.
I want the game to have some choices of real consequence. That being said, the achievement screen will be revised in the future so it feels more satisfying and less confusing regardless of the choice you make.
 

Vaars

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I want the game to have some choices of real consequence. That being said, the achievement screen will be revised in the future so it feels more satisfying and less confusing regardless of the choice you make.
yeah, just adding an alternative Achievement in the Same Slot(s) would already clear that Issue. One of them can just be achieved by rejecting her, and then potentially adding a new Girl to the Fanclub?
 
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currently not - but now you mention it, there definitely should be! maybe a late-game enslavement alternative, available when not marrying her?
I found it a little unsatisfying that chooing against angelica locks you out of completing the achievements Page - this makes it a clear right choice - wrong choice situation. being able to come back around to her later would be cool in more ways than one.
Yeah, it would be really nice to have Angelica as a full-fledged slave instead of a slave wife.
 

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Typo in the intro
"You unshyly oggled her tight body as she begain explaining" should be began explaining.
"Crowle is an ideologue in line with your father though, he makes special deals both with slavers and unfortionate..." should be unfortunate
" They're ambitious, and ambitious people are always prone to rocking the boat, upset the status quoue. " status quoue should be status quo
"You take advantage, forcing your rock hard cocn in an out of the slave, again and again " rock hard cock in and out

"hint off labie" should be hint of labie when selecting Audrey and Marlene
"You shoved your rock hard cock in between their labia" -> labias

Being a teacher straight on day2 then calling lola :
"She shook her haid" should be head

calling bri in the office the first time
"Only good girls get leasure time" should be leisure
"complience" should be compliance

talking with luna
She rested her buttsheeks -> buttcheeks

Laura in the office
"Hey, next time I summon you I think you should wear a little les" -> missing the last s in less

When lexi meets you to sponsor her being in a club
"You pulled down your pants and your cock sprang free. The gave let slip a little gasp" Wrong subject in the sentence for let slip a little gasp?
"I'm sure a slut like you've sucked a bucnh..." should be bunch

Luna in your house when she is bored and when you take ella out to a beach date
She was stood I think it would be better if it was she was standing or she stood

same date with ella
"staring wide-eeyed at them she seemed to regain som confidence" should be wide-eyed and some confidence

Li jing at satin sluts
"What huge udderss for such a cute little cow "should be udders

First lola punishment
"wawer." should be waver

date with ella in the park
"You sat down in the shade, and welcomed the cool ground there, while she layed herself out in the sun and exhaling happily" welcome and lay are in past tense so I think exhale should also be exhaled
"It was an entertaining dance to parttake in" -> partake

Text when proposing to have a dinner date with mila
"3rd av" should be 3rd ave.

dinner date with mila
"sure noone" -> no one

Having pussi and cunti give you a double bj in your harem
"They shifted uncomfortably, but made no move ot obey" -> to obey
You began shooring ropes of cum -> shooting

proposal with douglas
" loud of rubbish. " -> load of rubbish

Night club sluts
"The other girl opened her mouth and let a mouthful of drool ooze down into her buttcrack and act as lube. She rubbed it in with her tongue, reading it for you" readying instead of reading
"Greedily slobbering her saliva all over your length and making sure you were slick enough to enter her friend's anal again" I think anus would read better than anal

Luna bath sopending time event
"Luna didn't seem to mind your intrusion. She giggled ans splashed water on you." She giggled as she splashed

blonde girl in the gym "tute my own horn" should be toot my own horn
"Unshyly you reached out and grabbed a hanful" handful
"completely shovering" should be showering

Finch was talking to someone in city hall
"He was stood in the hall talking to one of the most beautiful women you had ever seen." standing instead of stood

Pitchers bar visit text
"Rock musik was blaring out of the speakers" should be music

Meeting "Barbie" at Pitchers
I sober person could probably get free relatively easy

Training Barbie at your place
"onslought" should be onslaught

First interaction with Ruby
" Then gavea weak shrug " gave a

Date with Finch's daughter Angelica
You tried your best not to "goggle" overtly should be oggle

Aletta hangout
"but you thought she had fitted the short skirt extra high upp" high up

Lisa at the beach
"Got a drink and a bit of shadow? Before I faint-", you added with a laugh. I think it should be before I faint.

In the night club when dancing with girls no image shown/broken image


You dance with a hot little slut. She's got the big tits, slim waist and tight ass of a high quality whore, and her dancing on you is making you hard. She doesn't seem to mind, and you begin to grope her tits shamelessly. She pulls away a bit. "I have a boyfriend!" she yells over the music.

Spending time with sophie in the city hall office
"but mr. Finch is always telling me someone as clumpsy as I should be thankful for the opportunity to work here "
clumpsy should be clumbsy. they mean different things

at the gentleman's club gettin a lapdance from yumi
"You watched in disbelief as Yumi oiled up her outrageously voluptuously..." should be voluptuous

When in the club enjoying the atmosphere
"jyrating" should be gyrating

At the college after dating the principal for the first time
"Now that date was quite the treat, I didn't have a the opportunity to thank you properly."
I didn't have the opportunity

going to the college after the date with the principal
"sec-crazed" should be sex crazed

Visiting the principal again after the event above
"She moved purposefully seductively back to her desk" I think it would be better if it was Purposefully seductive back to her desk
"You know, lot's of prude bitches" lots

Confronting the principal's daughter in the sorority
"She had no choice but let herself be dragged along" but to let herself
"She whined from the pain as you held her face upright againl" should be again

Sorority of submission event
"Sorority culture was all about ritual" rituals
"but it seemed they had fashioned some version of it for themselves for this occassion," occasion
"surroung" surrounding
" parttake " should be partake

Meeting the principal after the above event
"“Why?” should be "Why?"
"Farses son indeed" Farses' son

Meeting with Suki at her house after buying her clothes in the mall
" You heard a litle " heard a little
" sansation " -> sensation

in Satin sluts fucking the cherub
" The cherub hade angelic, glistening olive skin " hade-> had
"You pulle out came like a canon all over her erotic ass," pulled out and

Tie Aiko up in your house
" you could alsways" -> always
you could alsways

Talking with Candice at night after making the sorority yours
" Candace came out of the water glistening like a nayad " should be niad
playing with her for the first time in the shower
"Ride me!", you demanded with gravely voice -> demanded with a gravely voice
" embolded " emboldened

Meeting amber in the sorority after making it yours and the submission festival
"You nodned " -> nodded

Talking to amber after making it yours and the submission festival
" When she saw you aproach" -> approach
" The confident mean girl model student that you had knewn " -> knew

Third time talking to her
"You were almost chocked when she smiled at you" shocked

After enslaving Amber asking her to blow you
"A practiced dicksucker by now, Amber already knew to present her outstretched toung for you" tongue
on the second page the first two second gif has the frames from moving the time marker while playing the video in it

Lounging in the sorority
"When they saw you in the doorway the kissed even deeper" they kissed even deeper

Entering Servus adult goods in the mall
"purpase of humiliation" purpose

Talking to Oreana at Jones and sons after getting rid of tarrifs
"Yes, I'm certainly not above spending money when the are gains are" there are gains

Going to bri's house with Candice
"and nimble little toung"" tongue

Meeting her after that
""Wait...... should be "Wait......"

Meeting Christine again after her crying and confronting about her daughter? choose seduce then blowjob
"You know, Christine - i feel really tense." I feel
" pleasure hitherto thought unimaginable" pleasure previously thought to be unimaginable.

Meeting her then choosing seduce her then fuck her
" she commented with sarcastic tone " she commented with a sarcastic tone
" like a predator redying" readying

At the resto at night after clicking the hottie alone at a table and winning the fight against her date
"Doesn't matter, any place with some privacy is good enough fuck a slut like you" enough to fuck a slut like you
"She blushed fiercly" fiercely
"Greddily you began" Greedily
"realising your girthy meat from the embrace of her thick lips" releasing
" You leaped after her like a wolf on it's pray " prey

Seducing Yuki at her home
"But it feels good to make yo feel good, teacher.." you feel good
"even though she hadn't fully mastered deepthroat yet" deepthroating

Seducing yuki again at her house
" SHe licked " She licked
" You thrusted into her, meeting her hips with your for each bounce " yours with each bounce
"pushing yourself deep into her at a dizying speed" dizzying speed

In the brighttown club and dancing with girls and choosing look for others until you have no more energy
"You're too to do anything here" You're too tired todo anything here

Inviting Angelica to a dinner date
"i’m" I'm
"I'm a degenerate, i admit it " I admit it

Ella picnic date then going to the hotel
"You produced you rock hard cock" you produced your rock hard cock
"Now and again popping it out of her the wet embrace of her mouth and slobbering on your balls" popping it out of the wet embrace of her mouth and...
"She sensed it and insteda began" instead
" Ever louder, to the point wher " where

Aletta hangout where in she seduces you when you see her
"She had nothing but a par of tight panties on" pair of tight panties on

Aletta hanging out on the balcony
"having you for audience when she put sunscreen on her tits" you for an audience
"THe next moment" The next moment
you should find and replace momment across all files and probabbly with probably

Choosing fuck her as the interaction with Aletta
"readying here for your use" her for your use

Luna wants something (aka meeting the twins after conquering Aletta)
"Have something happened" Has something happened?
"sweet sister have been " has been
"tinyest of grins" tiniest

Anal with ruby
"were pleased to found " pleased to find

Anal with Ella
"Spred" spread

Anal with Laura
"with aLL" all

Choosing fuck her with ella as your gf
"Her pelwis" pelvis
" faster into her punk wet cunt " pink wet cunt

After doing the silk road with orleana
"well kempt" well kept
"You gave her tits a hard slap that made her vail" wail

Got to suki and choose fuck her for the second time I think overall
" ass to yuo" you
"foricng your length" forcing your length

Date with ella to a hotel for a photoshoot
"the incresed" increased
" She moaned in ecstasy as your cum streamed in once by ounce " ounce by ounce

Plan Wedding and Ana is here can have no spacing and is next to each other inline as in the screenshot

Training Bri in her house
"Uppety" Uppity

Call lola into your office at college
"apointment"-> appointment

With Sophie at the gym
"maneauver" maneuver

Calling sohpie in your office at city hall after the above
"You goggled" You oggled

From russia with love
"when you fealt" felt

Meeting Marquis
"somehere" somewhere
"in front of a handful men and women on dark leather sofas and chairs" in front of a handful of men and women
" Unfortionatly " Unfortunately
" What if i bought " I bought

Going to lola's house after settling her fathers debt
" immediete " immediate

Going to her house again after the above
" bit aroudn " around

going to the office again and calling sophie after she is told to not wear a top
"clumpsy" clumbsy

Visit Lola again after she smiles and you tell her abt the debt
"Why do I have a feeling yo have opinions about this" you have
" efficiant " efficient
"volouptuous" voluptuous . might need to find all and replace this across all files

visting lola again but she calls you baby before you click seduce her
" righ tnow " right now
" as she washed the. " washed them.

Hanging out then audrey comes to rim you
"
You grab her neck in a chokehold, push her down onto the floor and shoot rope after rope of thick babyjuice all over her gasping face.
You.
"
Remove the You.

Last city hall expansion of public spaces for concerts
" hithter and thither " hither and thither

Lola house hangout going to the park as she exercises
" jirate " gyrate
' trully " truly
" butying " burying

watching ragdollz concert with Aletta
" Probbably E you decided " is it supposed to be Ecstasy?

City hall Sophie
" voloptuous " voluptuous

Going to lola's and clicking fuck her
" by neon lights, accentuated the roundness of her tits and ass " and accentuating the roundness
" true sliut " true slut

At the park concert then choosing see a rave chick
" hre " her
" tiny smily " smile

Seeing a goth in the concert
" secodns " seconds
" fetisch gear " fetish gear

date mila after becoming your gf
" shor time " short time

VIP section at satin sluts scarlet and sienna
" parttook " partook

saffron at the bar from the ragdollz concert
" svill " swill?

Saffron date at her place
"apreciative" appreciative

Anal with gf mila
" half massed " half mast

Talking to Angelica for wedding preparations broken second image below the following line
Your cock woke to life as you saw her large breasts and cute pussy bared.

There are also two return buttons instead of the one for this scene

After marrying Angelica and wanting to spend time with her in the morning the second image is broken
spending time with angela then the random event of her in the shower has a broken image the one with the below line
" You surprised her in the shower. She seemed more than eager to learn that you wanted to join her. "

Honeymoon with Angelica
Broken image after this line at the beach
A true paradise island lies before you. You see girls in tight and practically scandalous swimsuits everywhere.

Angela's curvy surprise
" slowle " slowly
“Come here, you commanded.” should be "Come here", you commanded.
"juice wet labia" should be juicy wet labia
" The shone " They shone
" volupteaous " voluptuous

Day trip on honeymoon with angela
" slowpoke, we're loosing " losing
" She poaked " poked
" had flewn " flown
" cock was harder than rack " harder than rock
" we've return the car " returned the car

Meeting emily on the beach for the second time
"aproached my with" approached me with

Talk to someone on main street
" Come her, slave " Come here, slave

Drinking with emily on the beach
"beautyful" beautiful

Calling Emily to hang with Angela
"Loose the clothes" Lose
" yuthful " youthful
" you got you thought " you got what you thought

Leaving the island honeymoon
" plain " plane

Meeting Carmen the realtor
" beautiful blonde hair, and a pair of lips " the picture of her isnt blonde
also 100.000 should be 100,000 same for 1.000.000 to 1,000,000

Calling mary into your office as far as giving you an hj while stripping
" and et my cum " eat my cum

Scarlet and sienna third time seeing them
" siad " said

Enslaving Mary
" pussy jucies " juices

getting a bj when spending time with Angela after marrying her till route completion
" stiffned up " stiffened
" rigour " vigour

first time meeting reilly in your office
" appearantly " apparently
" smothed " smooth
" yo walk " to walk
" of a anger " of anger

Second time tutoring Reilly
" BUt " But

punishing Reilly
"attitudy" attitude
" relly necessary " really
" Hushh, girl, " Hush

Third time tutoring Reilly (she does an ahegao face)
"assertained" ascertained
" now make a stupid face. "
Now make
" SHe " She
 
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Continuation (Holy shit never knew this site had a character limit let alone reaching it myself)

Fourth time tutoring Reilly
" She was used to be able " She was used to being able to

Fifth time tutoring Reilley
" daddY " daddy

date with Lisa into town
"I know what'" I know what

I can spam repeat the text someone option with Mary make her less independent unlike all the other girls even though her route is finished

fucking wanda the wedding gift
" playting " plaything

Choosing anal with wanda
" An... excellent choice, cunt. " this is a line she says and its weird she calls you a cunt without him being mad about it so it was probably supposed to be master instead of cunt

Visiting Diana at the Earl's cafe
" accidantly " accidentally

Scarlet and Sienna helping you with visual aid cum into a fluffer's mouth
" on of them " one of them

Scarlet and Sienna achievement come play with us danny I dunno if it should be daddy instead?

Scarlet and Sienna Click seduce again
" Com 'ere " Com'ere

Next step of the plan for training Reilley abt her regressing and being tempted and influenced by her friends
" vigilence " vigilance

Talking to the principal about Reilly's class
" But i think " But I think

Planning Riley's class extracurricular
"She got tits like a cow, that one." She's got
" Apparantly " Apparently
"Lastly", said Laura - pushing up her glasses and composing herself. ", there is Nicole.. "Lastly," said Laura-pushing up her glasses and composing herself. "... there is Nicole."
Lastly, said Laure- pushing up her glasses and composing herself."
" i mean, er " I mean, er ,probably should find all match exact case and replace this across files
" necesarily " necessarily

Third extracurricular session
" apparant " apparent
" display your last session " in your last session

Fifth extracurricular session basically the one after nicole is drunk
" jelousy " jealousy
" nudifty " nudity
" unfortionatly " unfortunately

Extracurricular after you ask the girls to compliment each other aka the one with you giving your credit card
" emphasise " emphasize
" emphasise " disappoint

Choosing emma with your card
" begtan " began
" howevber " however

Choosing Kayla with your card
" cuite " quite
" gaddamn " goddamn

Extracurric after they got drunk on your dime
" curvatious " curvaceous
" devine " divine

Extracurric after the above. answer right get to leave
" simole " simple
" Because a woman on her out " woman on her own
"tangeable" tangible
" is to make him feel like special, like he's all that matters " feel special
" her lika " like a

Extracurric talent show
" next. girl. " could be a cool stylization like Next. Girl. or for the normal spelling next girl.

Extracurric after the talent show
" I thought we were passed this " past this
Kayla detension after the above and being understanding or kind
" emphasised " emphasized
"yes" Yes
" He don't know what he's missing " He doesn't know
"spurr" spur

Extracurricular about accepting their master's deviousness
" He migt " might
" awefully " awfully

Extracurricular meet your college harem
"scantaly" scantily
" heir half-exposed " her half-exposed
" yes, Christine is one of my loyal fuckdolls too " Yes
" fulle " fully
" thuroughly " thoroughly
" descreetly " discreetly

Graduation extracurric
" But i know " But I know

Finishing Reilly's tutoring in the office after graduation
" you're to special to " you're too special to

Visiting Diana at Earl's again
" the thought struck you that should paid " the thought struck you to pay
" You’re such an ass: " ass!

Fllirting with the twins
" need to perve " perv
" curvatious " curvaceous

dating erilly
" noowhere " nowhere or noooowhere for emphasis
" Come, slut - I you " I want you is what you wanted to say?

Rue at the beach for the third? second? time
" hand straid close " stayed close

Rue at nude beach
" neraid " nereid

BDSM date with Reilly
"fassets" facets
"whailed" wailed

Flirting with the twins after Julia blew you in your sleep
" You're not so different from your sisters, are you know " you now

Fucking your twin sisters
" ALl " All
" Share it with you're sister " your sister

Hearing moans from the shower (from your twin sisters"
"squeled" squeeled
" You joined your voices to theirs " voices with theirs

Looking for one of the twins Diana
" slake your lusts " sate your lusts
" oesophagus " esophagous
" lolypop " lollipop
In the gif above this line" The twins' pussies were like crack, " I expected it to be the white girl on the left being railed because its basically the gif above it unless you dont have it.

Sampling the mechandise random event at St. James warehouse gag ring
"she only twitch" twiches

Moving into your new house and talking with luna
lilith should be Lilith
" Jacob, a-ha " Jacob huh?

Third time talking to Lilith
" You on the other hand is just a guest " You on the other hand are just a guest

Twins order stuff online at your new million dollar mansion
" werent " weren't
" You're shipping in" chipping in

In the bedroom of your million mansion
" Angelica are having " Angelica is having

You can still talking about getting Amber to Audrey even though you already did

Inviting Lilith out to the park with Luna
" ment it " meant it
" litle whiles " little whiles
" Avocado sallad " Avocado salad
" she tilted her slightly " she tilted her head slightly
" chock " shock

Flirting with Lilith after the above
" friendlyness " friendliness

Fucking lilith
" whailed " wailed
"the multiple orgasm" the multiple orgasms

Also IDK why it was decided that Lola can go visit you at your place in the evenings while Sophie cant.
Having lola under girlfriends isn't exactly correct to define their relationship and I have no idea why she can be visited from your house.
 
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Alright done with my playthrough. I didn't take note of typos on the honeymoon trip and didn't go through the actual cartel mafia stuff
 

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how to make candace boss of Ypsilon Kappa Sorority
Normally you have to progress with candace to the point where you can talk to her in the sorority. From there, you got the option talk to Audrey (a smokey hot blonde who should be one of your slave.) U will discuss of a plan with her which need u to go talk with the mayor...i think. Finally, go see the principal and amber
 
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jande21

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OranosDev idk if you plan to add more girls or take model recs but two I would love is, Mikaela Fuente and Lindsay Capuano.
 
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