Unfinished at this point. Probably another 2 or 3 chapters left before wrapping it up.
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I scanned the archive and the folder after unzipping with kaspersky internet security, there are no threats. Deathstrike2 you are doing a very good job, I look forward to the next chapters. good luck.
Hello. the archive is clean. I scanned with kaspersky internet security and it found no threats. if you allow me a suggestion, in chapter 3, the two prisoners could have easily defeated a person of his stature. I think that the use of handcuffs would be much more credible in the continuation of the story. if the two policewomen will be incarcerated by the author, they must be kept handcuffed all the time, their job being to fight criminals. I think that a little "color" of the story would be: high heels, stockings, collar, humiliation, etc. because for the main character, this is not business, it is personal.
Thank you! I just use PNG files because that's the default format I render to from DAZ. Why do you ask? The file size?well done
how comes that you use .png
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yes not that i mind
but i always convert pics into pdf
and now have a file on 880mb
if it had been jpg it would probably be around 250mb
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Yes, I have about half of part 4 done. Taking longer due to work schedule, but I'm still working on it.
Still plugging away. Here's a sample of Chapter 4. Still have to finish up about 20 or 30 more renders and add the dialogue boxes.
These games and comics with titles from movies, shows and more lol
This is what my mind thought of after reading the title.
This is what my mind thought of after reading the title.
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no deaths or anything like that right? also havent readed it but I wish that at the end they are all in his basement pregnant edit after reading ch1 I hope once ms stone is broken she
ch2, 3 and 4 were awesome Im glad he
I hope he success and gets to keep his harem of loyal playthings I also think this could make a great game but maybe in the future
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Finally finishing up work on Chapter 5 -- Jack finally pays a visit to his stepmom. His payback is nearly complete.
Added Chapter 5. Comic is now complete. Hope you enjoy it! It's been both a learning experience and a labor of love for me.