RPGM Abandoned Peck Orbit [v0.1.2] [Grimar Horns]

[baneini]

It's actually quite difficult to understand what you mean here - enkephalin07 didn't offer any opinion as to whether the game was good or not, they just noted that the game had a female protagonist and a male dev.

That comment itself is pretty bizarre, why would you negatively note that that dev is male?
The following discussion is obviously nonsense word salad. Is it some AI bot imitating a human? Idk.

 

[cavaemon]

now onto my eval since I played it for a couple of minutes and may play further into it.
faces in pose art seem ok. they transition a little smoothly when your MC is talking with best friend ( however it was kinda stale a tiny bit when face had same expression when allowing lewd actions play out). Options for body are nice would like to see this expand if they can where you can add color change or height to it. Hair colors are good too but more variety like red or dyes to put into it would make it feel like the theme would fit in. I haven't seen many punk future flicks like the fifth element but just saying little details go a long way once your close to completing the game. the story sounds interesting I got that the father would play a big part in this so as far the intro goes id see this going places. id rate overall a 5 out of 8... it needs more time to develop and whatever happens along the way id be happy to see play into this. art is great just hope the effort stays there for everything else dev
P.s This is what criticism would like if you pay attention and enjoy the game for a few minutes

It's actually quite difficult to understand what you mean here - enkephalin07 didn't offer any opinion as to whether the game was good or not, they just noted that the game had a female protagonist and a male dev.

Ah... ok...

You started whinging about "SJW"s. I have no further interest in anything you have to say. Have a nice life, sir.

wow... whining... at least I aced human communication or the "whining" would sound a lot more stupid. Just don't say I didn't paint a vivid picture of my opinion where as I at least acknowledge yours for not knowing todays and yesterdays issues in the world. but whateves im done being smart wher de booze.

P.S As Dr. bones from bones manor would say " ah, i see your a person of refined culture" I would reply " Yes my good doc I do love the beastie how does the vintage ever get better?"

 

[Kommios]

That comment itself is pretty bizarre, why would you negatively note that that dev is male?
The following discussion is obviously nonsense word salad. Is it some AI bot imitating a human? Idk.

As I noted in my initial post, some male devs really struggle to create believable female characters. I do think that enkephalin07 ought not to have made that comment without first playing the game, but there are very many adult games out there with female charcters who are immersion-breakingly unrealistic.

My issue was that cavaemon started objecting to people who think "women should be above everyone" - something which had literally nothing to do with the original post.

Anyway, way OT by this point

 

[cavaemon]

As I noted in my initial post, some male devs really struggle to create believable female characters. I do think that enkephalin07 ought not to have made that comment without first playing the game, but there are very many adult games out there with female charcters who are immersion-breakingly unrealistic.

My issue was that cavaemon started objecting to people who think "women should be above everyone" - something which had literally nothing to do with the original post.

Anyway, way OT by this point

it was an example the point is being missed apparently... sometimes it really goes over heads, point being, don't genderise, race bait, or whatever in the first part of an opening statement and you'll be fine. I just gave my reason to why I disliked that opinion and you still don't get it... the reason why you like the thing for it being a male or female created by the opposite of said protagonist is irrelevant to the effort given what the development was produced. the dev could use help understanding the opposite sex better or they don't is what I just thought was implied. I just don't think it should be a given. I care about how good it looks and play and if they can make it that way is all I'm saying. it just needs to be said in a way that didn't sound like what I quoted in a way ppl use to either bring things down or put things up( can be used as tool for those who like blaming things and riling ppl up for no good reasons) by singling out a persons gender gap. yeah don't judge ppl by their genitals just point it out if this was bad then ___ and ___ should be stated and given thoughtful insight as to what you like. if it was good great but I agree some people miss this and yes some devs will but I would have to say it in a manor which is example; I liked how female/male lead looked but they acted like ___, maybe you need assist on some outside perspective to emulate this. OR I hate how they look, but I like they way they act, maybe you need better artists or more options. just don't think its a given whatever male or female dev can do to make you like or hate something its clear just give a why and a insightful what this should be of and they may even try to improve on things they lack in a game. every person is different and will give different results REGARDLESS of origins, sex, race, wealth, or any background. common logic also dictates if its of same whatever it may OR may not be of better stock In which will look the same but be valued more than.

 

[GrimarHorns]

im guessing impreg/preg will be ingame soon or planned? also animations too?

Thanks for you comment buddy, I'm not sure the impregnation fetish will be something in my game. I do have several kinks I'd like to be added, but if it's not justified in the scenario I don't wanna put it in. Don't myself doing "Hey look ! Your character is being sodomized by a dragon !" just because people want to see that in. If I have dragon character in-game already with a lot of dialogues and bonding and it won't come out of nowhere, why not putting that kink in, even if it's not one of mine. Same rule that actually goes for my Sjökapten pledge on my Patreon. You can decide of a NPC in game and a scene with that character, but nothing too crazy, I want to keep control of what my game is and don't be a sellout to the public.

This has... potential. The art is instantly better than any 3D models (the artist just is a little weak when it comes to expressions but good in every other aspect), and I personally just don't see 3D models as appealing anymore. I'm also a sucker for character customization so I'm already bias towards the game LOL. I'll wait for more releases soon

LOL. I've played what's available and honestly not a bad game. I didn't notice any qualities which is alarming enough where I can see it's made by a man, but she's def eye-candy for dudes (why i say that is all the scenes ive played, she offered to suck off her friend but got nothing in return ).

Thanks a lot for your comment, I agree with you, I think there isn't 2 separate audience for 3D and drawn CGs, there is actually one audience and trending styles, at least that is how I see it. I know drawn CGs isn't trending at all and 3D arts gets much more success but I think there are too many of them, I like the drawn CGs better and I wouldn't like to go straight to 3D just to try to catch people as income... I did at first but I became tired of it, thought it looked good, it didn't. This way is better in my opinion.
Man don't spoil it... As said below, I gathered female point of views on my game, this is one of the main points yes.

I am going to give this game another version or two before I decide if I am going to become a supporter or not, I see that it has potential but was not overly impressed by this demo. Was not enough there to really do anything worth while.

Thank you for you comment mate, yes the game content is light for now, I totally understand being reticent at being a patron, please do not pledge if you don't like my work that much. If I can give you an advice, let my game be for 3-4 month and come when VER-[0.6] or VER-[0.7] will be public, if you like it then you're free to do what you want, for these 2 versions I aim a first 50min-60min of gameplay.
I wish I could add so much more content, but I simply can't when it's not my main activity, gotta pay bills, and bugfix and general upgrade of the existing game takes ages before I can put in simply more content, which is why I'm asking you to wait a few more versions.

this game updated after so long. I think art style changed

I'm not sure what you mean, but yes, went for 3D models to artist drawn CGs, if you were talking about the last release, I make an update each month.

this update is just the thing with the friend? it wont let me advance anymore everything end with the friend.

Yes, this version stops after you go see Jesse for the 3rd time.

wow, i remember old version, but this new art looks great. gonna try :3

Thanks a lot friend, hope you liked it !

Female Protagonist, beautiful Art and RPGM, i like it already! Also the father incest reminding me of the good old "katie's curroption" game. More content and some nice butt poking and its perfect!


Edit: So i just played through it and i gotta admit its even better than i expected! Such a beautiful nice slut. Cant wait to see more! So much potential!

Thank you a lot very much ! I'm glad you liked it, the dialogue will be reworked so MC doesn't from "Hihi I'm 19..." to "F%CK ME" in 17 seconds but yeah, this will be a thing for you to decide in-game.
Not sure about the incest kink in that, I know it sells VERY well, but I don't want to put that in just yet. Don't want to spoil any scenario but your not going to know your father very long... You might see him later tho'.
If it's justified in the scenario, I will put it in.

Its nice when a game thought abandoned gets a new lease on life.

Call me Jesus. <3

Any incest scenes in the game yet?

As I said above not yet no. I don't want it in my game unless it's okay for the scenario to have this. I might put some in, but maybe not with your father... Who knooooows *teasing* ...

Yeah I think they did a reboot but I am liking the new art style better than previous one

Thanks a lot ! Yup, HUGE reboot but it was on a long time ago. Hope you liked it !

you got some cool art there. Hope to see some footjob in the future

Thanks for you comment ! Footjob is definitely something that will be in, not particularly something I want in but it will fit with the character on the domination path. So yes. No clue when, but yes.



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A female protagonist written by a male. My apprehension about this was exacerbated by that ahegao face among the preview images.

Stfu... it could have been written by a female and have a male protagonist so please... if you seriously meant this as a insult check yourself out i wont reply to you after this: i hate it when ppl get stuffed up and think "women should be above every one" guess what this world is pretty much what has been since the fucking stone age get over it everyone pulls their own weight and works as hard (or not) as everyone else and if you knew that let this reply be a reminder of why ppl should be quiet about topics that are irelevent or have nothing to do with what this game is. Constructive Criticism not criticism. also i dont give a shit about race, sex, or whatever you are ( animal or some weird space burger idc) you are graded by effort with me and as i have yet to eval this game i wont ever EVER evaluate by the cover... only by time and work put into it so yeah ..L
P.S if you meant it as joke thats fine just be creative about it that was kinda sexist .

No-one said that. What appeared to be implied was that male writers are less likely to produce believable female characters. I don't have a problem with that opinion. Speaking as a (checks manpartz) dude, I do think that a significant number of female characters in games written by male devs are not believable. Being a man doesn't mean that you can't write a good female character, but there are quite a few male devs out there who don't seem to be able to.



You are wrong in just about every way it is possible to be wrong

I need to see and hear since we already got dumbass ppl going at it ex. borderlands 3, magic the gathering, and some others...) I find it

I... I swear I just said this read it again: I DONT CARE IF YOUR MALE, FEMALE OR RESURECTED GHANDI JUST DONT PUT IT AS AN EXUSE FOR EFFORT! I get tired of this " because ___ Not good game." just play it and if you put time into saying what you don't like or like good JUST expect me to say i don't agree or like how this was said and if he/she/it wanted to say " i meant it as a joke" or "i didn't mean it in a negative way i think he just needs a female perspective." GREAT but as it looked I take that statement as was written and said my piece. i don't think a sentence like that was appropriate or needed to be in this thread i just hope ( for at least a day) something like that wouldn't have come up and it pains me to think some are here that may ( or not) might start going SJW which would tickle me ( i mean its porn games for FS!) if it wasn't already happening in main stream games ( not porn games for those not sure lol). if it wasn't clear enough read the post first couple of words again and youll see why i take offense hint: its because female by male... could have been dog by cat IDC its not needed.

It's actually quite difficult to understand what you mean here - enkephalin07 didn't offer any opinion as to whether the game was good or not, they just noted that the game had a female protagonist and a male dev.

Ah... ok...

You started whinging about "SJW"s. I have no further interest in anything you have to say. Have a nice life, sir.

Okay I'm not going to take part of this, as you can guess. I don't want to be the source of any argument.
If that can reassure I started lately gathering female POVs and feedbacks for my character. This is something I will do from time to time, along with that a lot of dialogues will be reworked as Jesse's scene are a bit too fast in the "slutification".

As you all played the VER-[0.3] let me warn you : This was just the demo. Starting on VER-[0.5] the real game begins, space-travelling, open world, after you leave earth there will be in due time several planets you can go to in which order you want. I have SO much planned for this game you really can't imagine. And this is why I need your feedbacks guys and take such time to answer you all.
I really need to know what you like and what you dislike about this game. I'm glad I didn't see any technical comment yet, apparently my game (FINALLY) doesn't crash for anyone ? Please let me know if it's the case for you.

Thanks again you all for your precious input, if you didn't play latest release yet :

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- Grimar out.

 

[impresso]

I'm glad I didn't see any technical comment yet, apparently my game (FINALLY) doesn't crash for anyone ?

Hmmm... I can't even start the game because of some dishes. It does not clickable

 

[BitterFrost]

Every time this title pops up in the latest updates list, I cringe at the name of this game.

 

[voidzone247]

Overview:
You are a young Woman living with her father in a small village. But someday all changed.​

So... we're now an old man living with our mother in a large city? I'm confused.

 

[Xpl0it]

- Grimar out.

First of all: Holy shit man, you are really committed to answering those comments. Thats really nice. I hope you put the same effort into your work. Also i dont think you have to take everyone that serious ^^
(Those female or male work comments are just trolls or bullshit imho, sex or gender absolutely doesnt matter at all)

Its really nice to hear that you plan on releasing more content in the not so far future! Im really looking forward to it.

If there isnt going to be any incest for now, its fine for me. I also know that patreon does have a problem with that.
I have to say the spanking thing alone was really nice and got me going. Im a Fan of that. Hopefully there is going to be some Art involved for it too.

Looking forward for the real game in 0.5!

Also i didnt have any technical issue once so ever with the game, everything worked out fine!

One minor improvement i would suggest is: Normally in RPGM Games the things to interact with are marked with those "sparkles" "star things", (sorry my english isnt the best). It sometimes took me a while of try and error to figure out what to interact with.

All in all: Im a Fan of this Game so far. The Art is fantastic, liking the Girl a lot!

As of content i wish to see, basically all the "normal" dirty porn stuff: Anal, A2M, DP, Group Sex, Older Guys, Spanking, Bondage, Deepthroat, Prostitution etc. pp. also im a bit on the non-con/dub-con side

Edit: I forgot NTR and cheating!
Usually im not the biggest fan of normal boyfriend/girlfriend stuff, thats a bit plane and boring, but for the start its fine.

As a general orientation i can highly recommend "GoodGirlGoneBad" - ofc the BadGirl-Route.

 

[aigimilan]

I aced human communication

Look man, that could not be further from the truth. You have very long winded posts that start off with telling people to shut the fuck up, and the entire point of it all is that you should not judge a game by it's cover.

You started off with insults, mention Gandhi a few times, and ramble about SJWs at one point and the only thing you're trying to say is not to judge the game by it's cover; just because it's a female character and a male author does not make it innately bad.

In which, I agree with you. Who the author is doesn't matter, the quality of the work does.

 

[4Finger]

I got this when i continue game....

And where are the save for "F.U.C.K. - Four Unknown Cosmos Kisses"?????

 

[Camaleonte]

version 0.5 output today for a fee we wait a few days for the release.

 

[cavaemon]

Look man, that could not be further from the truth. You have very long winded posts that start off with telling people to shut the fuck up, and the entire point of it all is that you should not judge a game by it's cover.

You started off with insults, mention Gandhi a few times, and ramble about SJWs at one point and the only thing you're trying to say is not to judge the game by it's cover; just because it's a female character and a male author does not make it innately bad.

In which, I agree with you. Who the author is doesn't matter, the quality of the work does.

yeah man its already past me I only gave my take in what I could im not known for little context lol but if i know something id share it. its not my job to tell ppl what to say I just want them to know if its got

Look man, that could not be further from the truth. You have very long winded posts that start off with telling people to shut the fuck up, and the entire point of it all is that you should not judge a game by it's cover.

You started off with insults, mention Gandhi a few times, and ramble about SJWs at one point and the only thing you're trying to say is not to judge the game by it's cover; just because it's a female character and a male author does not make it innately bad.

In which, I agree with you. Who the author is doesn't matter, the quality of the work does.

what insult? I only said I could care less about the use of genderizing effort and not giving a better review, but if that is what you didn't take from it wow ill just say that I only meant the context in a hypothetical in which if it was meant as a backhanded compliment I am not a mind reader but would you agree sir/mam that if i told you that i like the male protag because it was made by a female AND not give a better description than this statement in a alt light? this would make it look like i wouldn't give the same credit to a male dev and then id be critiqued so yeah its not about sex get it? i care for effort not gender gapping and what i read was just a bad review point. other than that yeah i stick with my later posts i don't like narrow thinking and yes this was long winded I'm just like that. i get tired of small explanations.

 

[dr_maricon]

Tried to play the 0.3 version, all the keys work except the movement keys :/...

 

[Sangoku25]

lol 0.3 is broken

no idea but something I would not support under any circumstances if the start is directly defective XD

 

[88Michele88]

This game is fucking totally slow: Animation, text, speed and sped, animation, walk. I'm gone grazy in one night to waiting other seuens, animatin ..... I'm sleep in the whole week for and game.

 

[andy6915]

Trying to save or load says placeholder image not found, and the game is forced closed. Makes the game unplayable.

 

[Kommios]

Who the author is doesn't matter, the quality of the work does.

I think we all agree on this, thankfully.

cavaemon and I hugged it out - emotional times. I was touched (appropriately).

 

[Xpl0it]

(...)

Just a quick reminder: Please restrain from discussing any gender related topics and creating book sized comments about it under a game post.
Move to the general discussion or pm the guy. Thanks.

 

[impresso]

How many scenes will be in the game without art of action like this?