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WTF ?? Kelly, the woman who, according to PS's initial description of her character, was supposed to be the more open-minded, free spirited, funny, outgoing sister, thinks her fucking Dylan is worse than fucking Brandi ?? Bruuuhh...:FacePalm:o_O

Can't wait to read which type of nonsense she'll pull out of her stuck-up ass to justify throwing her morals and principles down the toilet for after she gets caught by one of them becoming the island's cumdump in the next Chs.

I don't mind her being reluctant about joining in on the incestuous fun Brandi and Dylan are having, after all, we need to have a story too, but PS could come up with better excuses to justify why the fun, open-minded, outgoing, party girl sister acts like the annoyingly boring, prudish one instead of just Brandi being the Brandi we saw in the first few Chs of AN. :unsure:
 

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WTF ?? Kelly, the woman who, according to PS's initial description of her character, was supposed to be the more open-minded, free spirited, funny, outgoing sister, thinks her fucking Dylan is worse than fucking Brandi ?? Bruuuhh...:FacePalm:o_O

Can't wait to read which type of nonsense she'll pull out of her stuck-up ass to justify throwing her morals and principles down the toilet for after she gets caught by one of them becoming the island's cumdump in the next Chs.

I don't mind her being reluctant about joining in on the incestuous fun Brandi and Dylan are having, after all, we need to have a story too, but PS could come up with better excuses to justify why the fun, open-minded, outgoing, party girl sister acts like the annoyingly boring, prudish one instead of just Brandi being the Brandi we saw in the first few Chs of AN. :unsure:
No can do, she'll be just as reluctant so PS can milk a whole character arc out of her just like he did with Brandy, and then will do the same thing with another character, cause why not? Money printing
 

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WTF ?? Kelly, the woman who, according to PS's initial description of her character, was supposed to be the more open-minded, free spirited, funny, outgoing sister, thinks her fucking Dylan is worse than fucking Brandi ?? Bruuuhh...:FacePalm:o_O

Can't wait to read which type of nonsense she'll pull out of her stuck-up ass to justify throwing her morals and principles down the toilet for after she gets caught by one of them becoming the island's cumdump in the next Chs.

I don't mind her being reluctant about joining in on the incestuous fun Brandi and Dylan are having, after all, we need to have a story too, but PS could come up with better excuses to justify why the fun, open-minded, outgoing, party girl sister acts like the annoyingly boring, prudish one instead of just Brandi being the Brandi we saw in the first few Chs of AN. :unsure:
She will definitely be the cumdump of the island no doubt about it, PS just taking her turning to the darkside very slowly, I think when she is completely indoctrinated to the island rules she will fuck most of the characters and Brandy will see that and desire to do the same thing and Kelly telling her how good it is to not be attached to anybody Brandi would snap and speak to Dylan about letting her to do the same, could be 2 scenarios: Dylan accepts and let her have fun with anyone or because of Kelly comments and indirect influence she would cuck Dylan AGAIN, theres a lot of characters I would love to see more often like Pete, Petes wife, Petes daughter, Tom, Tom daughter, Andre and her sister (Rory can show up and try to get close to Andre in order to fuck his sister since he never did it with a black girl before)
 

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WTF ?? Kelly, the woman who, according to PS's initial description of her character, was supposed to be the more open-minded, free spirited, funny, outgoing sister, thinks her fucking Dylan is worse than fucking Brandi ?? Bruuuhh...:FacePalm:o_O

Can't wait to read which type of nonsense she'll pull out of her stuck-up ass to justify throwing her morals and principles down the toilet for after she gets caught by one of them becoming the island's cumdump in the next Chs.

I don't mind her being reluctant about joining in on the incestuous fun Brandi and Dylan are having, after all, we need to have a story too, but PS could come up with better excuses to justify why the fun, open-minded, outgoing, party girl sister acts like the annoyingly boring, prudish one instead of just Brandi being the Brandi we saw in the first few Chs of AN. :unsure:
I'm also very surprised about Kelly and you explained the situation very well. Sex with a sister is normal, but when it's a nephew, it's a sin. kellys excuse is funnier. His nephew was born into his hands, so? Kelly couldn't fuck her nephew. Isn't his mother the one who gave birth to him? Let's see how much nonsense we will read to extend the topic.

No can do, she'll be just as reluctant so PS can milk a whole character arc out of her just like he did with Brandy, and then will do the same thing with another character, cause why not? Money printing
If printing money means boring us, PS will lose many followers. Now other artists are aware of this and are making their script strategies shorter but of higher quality. Don't they make money? They definitely win. but they have the ability to continue their productivity under other stories. They don't keep a story going for 3 years.

The twins' mom
The PS we know adds this third blonde to the subject as the unknown brother of Brandy and Kelly. We read that story in 4 chapters. :)

She will definitely be the cumdump of the island no doubt about it, PS just taking her turning to the darkside very slowly, I think when she is completely indoctrinated to the island rules she will fuck most of the characters and Brandy will see that and desire to do the same thing and Kelly telling her how good it is to not be attached to anybody Brandi would snap and speak to Dylan about letting her to do the same, could be 2 scenarios: Dylan accepts and let her have fun with anyone or because of Kelly comments and indirect influence she would cuck Dylan AGAIN, theres a lot of characters I would love to see more often like Pete, Petes wife, Petes daughter, Tom, Tom daughter, Andre and her sister (Rory can show up and try to get close to Andre in order to fuck his sister since he never did it with a black girl before)
Good guesses about possible scenarios, my friend. But the idea of cucold dylan does not appeal to me. There may be a more effective Dylan character instead. For example, Dylan can create a relationship between the sweedish mother and her sons. brandi seduces sweedish bitch. This would be a more logical plot line than her son's dick accidentally entering her pussy. what do you say :)
 

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Good guesses about possible scenarios, my friend. But the idea of cucold dylan does not appeal to me. There may be a more effective Dylan character instead. For example, Dylan can create a relationship between the sweedish mother and her sons. brandi seduces sweedish bitch. This would be a more logical plot line than her son's dick accidentally entering her pussy. what do you say :)
Dude I despise chapter 10 because of the cuckold situation, that moment could have been the perfect scenario for Dylan to let Brandi fuck anybody (after Gina convinced him of course) and afterwards Brandi Dylan Rory and Gina would have a passionate foursome all night long but no PS took the lame lazy ntr route and now look at brandi still insecure af IN FUCKING CHAPTER 20, until Dylan set Brandi free this comic will still have a slow pace with lesbian action or PS would repeat the ntr tactic again (I dont want that again, it must be mutual agreement) I like the Swedish mom scenario but is unlikely to happen at this point, is funny that in the first chapters Brandi admitted wanting to fuck some guys in the island and now shes chained only to Dylan and lesbian situations lol because of chapter 10, the ntr shit fucked up this comic big time and is really sad to see it... And yes the unintentional rape of Lucas to the swedish mom was retarded af just like chapter 10 ntr shit.
 
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I still believe that Kelly will gradually separate Brandi from Dylan. Let's remember that the author has often failed to build his characters. You can't trust anything he proposes in this story because everything has contradictions from start to finish. Kelly will probably stay with Dylan because she has already shown an interest in him and she is jealous of her sister, but she could also be jealous of her. That's why Brandi will gradually interact with the Swedes and the rest of the islanders. Because they are sisters and want each other's convenience, it is certain that they will both become prostitutes very quickly. One will complement the other.
 

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I still believe that Kelly will gradually separate Brandi from Dylan. Let's remember that the author has often failed to build his characters. You can't trust anything he proposes in this story because everything has contradictions from start to finish. Kelly will probably stay with Dylan because she has already shown an interest in him and she is jealous of her sister, but she could also be jealous of her. That's why Brandi will gradually interact with the Swedes and the rest of the islanders. Because they are sisters and want each other's convenience, it is certain that they will both become prostitutes very quickly. One will complement the other.
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This is called Business. Same theme is repeating itself again and again. It seem like a beautiful comic is turned into a boring comic. Actually, AN becomes PS's note printing system. Sorry to say it so rough. But, being fan, it hurts me a lot. There are many makers who are waiting to attract the fans. But, PS is just making fun of its fans. Specially, AN fans. Where TSB is on track but AN derailed. Brandy took 5 chapters, Kelly takes also too many chapters.
 
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I still believe that Kelly will gradually separate Brandi from Dylan. Let's remember that the author has often failed to build his characters. You can't trust anything he proposes in this story because everything has contradictions from start to finish. Kelly will probably stay with Dylan because she has already shown an interest in him and she is jealous of her sister, but she could also be jealous of her. That's why Brandi will gradually interact with the Swedes and the rest of the islanders. Because they are sisters and want each other's convenience, it is certain that they will both become prostitutes very quickly. One will complement the other.
I think Brandi needs a push to fully succumb to the perverted nature of the island and Kelly is the key of that, maybe fucking Tom or the monster in front of her just to show that could be easily be her and legit open her mind about why Dylan can fuck anybody but she cant, stick the doubt on her soul and make her go to talk to Dylan about her feelings instead of cuck him again, hope to see a similar scenario.

Im pretty intrigued about the swedish mom and her sons situation like wtf lol...
 
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This is called Business. Same theme is repeating itself again and again. It seem like a beautiful comic is turned into a boring comic. Actually, AN becomes PS's note printing system. Sorry to say it so rough. But, being fan, it hurts me a lot. There are many makers who are waiting to attract the fans. But, PS is just making fun of its fans. Specially, AN fans. Where TSB is on track but AN derailed. Brandy took 5 chapters, Kelly takes also too many chapters.
no it just getting more fun and you are wrong :) characters need time to develop ... but you just want kelly to fuck everyone asap when she gets to island and finish it in 1 chapter ... wondering what could you say if it was free ... and u couldn't acuse it as business
 
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no it just getting more fun and you are wrong :) characters need time to develop ... but you just want kelly to fuck everyone asap when she gets to island and finish it in 1 chapter ... wondering what could you say if it was free ... and u couldn't acuse it as business

If it were free, then it will be okay. But, it is paid, and it costs high, then he should think of it seriously. Many of his subscribers just left him for his slow movement. I previously was a subscriber. But, now I unsubscribe him for his slow story building. He takes much time to build a character. Though good, but Timing matters.

I even also agree with you that it is getting more fun and characters need time to develop, but Kelly took 6 & more chapter to properly build. It is slow paced development.
 

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This story name should be changed cause isn't a story of sexual explore or embrace sexual desire it is now become Dylan harem that little brat want to fuck everyone but don't want his mom have fun such a hypocrite he can fuck Rory's mom but Rory can't his wow
 
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