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FunFuntomes

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Kelly's character's such a big disappointment, I expected more from her. Judging by what we've seen so far, you'd think Brandi's the fun, slutty, outgoing sister, not her. She even shamelessly has sex with her sister, but is disgusted of seeing Brandi and Dylan fuck. PS dropped the ball real bad with this bitch.
she should've joined on the fun
 

xxldbxx

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Kelly's character's such a big disappointment, I expected more from her. Judging by what we've seen so far, you'd think Brandi's the fun, slutty, outgoing sister, not her. She even shamelessly has sex with her sister, but is disgusted of seeing Brandi and Dylan fuck. PS dropped the ball real bad with this bitch.
Its character development within 2-3 chapters she will be just as big of a nympho as Brandi
 

Small-pp-22

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Kelly's character's such a big disappointment, I expected more from her. Judging by what we've seen so far, you'd think Brandi's the fun, slutty, outgoing sister, not her. She even shamelessly has sex with her sister, but is disgusted of seeing Brandi and Dylan fuck. PS dropped the ball real bad with this bitch.
Lmao you know why, Pegasus can't milk the stuff if it's too easy, he has to turn her into Brandy 2.0 so he can do the exact same thing with 3 blonde characters

Its character development within 2-3 chapters she will be just as big of a nympho as Brandi
So the exact same thing as brandy herself, lmao
 

ramzey

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If you don't like it go find something you like or even make one yourself
i dont like and yes l can do it much better. i am on it. understand it depend on money yeah but somebody must show him how doin. i will try non-monetary system at my works. I have both money and time. so I will move forward with this mind.


What I don't understand is why, when I make a simple criticism, I am immediately criticized for looking at other things?
It is already common here that the stories are lengthened too much due to the desire to make money and greed.
If you are going to talk about issues such as labor theft and costs, look at anime comic artists. Despite so much labor theft, they do not make long boring series.
Anyway, you asked and I wrote, my purpose is not to argue. Just expressing my opinion freely is all.

Kelly's character's such a big disappointment, I expected more from her. Judging by what we've seen so far, you'd think Brandi's the fun, slutty, outgoing sister, not her. She even shamelessly has sex with her sister, but is disgusted of seeing Brandi and Dylan fuck. PS dropped the ball real bad with this bitch.
I partially agree. Kelly will eventually be like Brandi. If it happens immediately, the story will be short and PS will earn less.
:)

Lmao you know why, Pegasus can't milk the stuff if it's too easy, he has to turn her into Brandy 2.0 so he can do the exact same thing with 3 blonde characters
which is number 3 :)
 

xXwankerXx

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Kelly will eventually be like Brandi. If it happens immediately, the story will be short and PS will earn less.
Its character development within 2-3 chapters she will be just as big of a nympho as Brandi
I know and agree that build up, teasing and flirting are an important part of the process, but Kelly admits on more than one occasion that she's disgusted of seeing Dylan's dick and by the fact that Brandi fucks her own son, only to see her fucking Brandi a few pages later lol. Bitch is a hypocrite and a contradiction to what her character was initially supposed to be, an even bigger one than Brandi was, and it kinda triggers me cuz I'm pretty sure in the next 2/3 Chs max, we'll see her get fucked by other randos with no to lil build up. That's what kinda annoys me, not all the waiting for her sex scenes with Dylan.

Pegasus can't milk the stuff if it's too easy, he has to turn her into Brandy 2.0 so he can do the exact same thing with 3 blonde characters
Lol, so true, bro'. I bet in 2/3Chs max we'll see her get fucked by at least dickhead Rory, his dad, that old fart, or all three of them for 'the plot' with no to minimum build up required for it lol, but when Dylan wants a piece of her, he needs to wait and put up with her bitchiness and exaggerated prude façade.

i dont like and yes l can do it much better. i am on it.
What I don't understand is why, when I make a simple criticism, I am immediately criticized for looking at other things?
It is already common here that the stories are lengthened too much due to the desire to make money and greed.
you asked and I wrote, my purpose is not to argue. Just expressing my opinion freely is all.
Have to agree. This already-overused, ridiculous "don't like it, move on... we don't care about your opinion" bullshit made up by fanbois to defend the shit they like just bcz they like it and what other ppl say don't matter to them, not cuz it was something already great or well-written, needs to go. We all have our opinions, tastes and preferences on which we can of course agree or respectfully disagree, but it's one thing to agree or disagree with someone while discussing something and a completely different thing to tell them to shut up and go away bcz someone doesn't want to tolerate other ppl's feedback.

The funny thing is, I bet if we were to ask some of the die-hard PS fans here defending him even when he makes mistakes what they liked so far about AN or any other PS story they read, they'd give us vague answers or tell us they liked the sex scenes the most... the sex scenes, not the 'story', in a porn comic like AN, for example, where PS himself promised his fans and subscribers on his SS and X pages a looot of quality storytelling, believable build up, romance and other shit like that.

It's an immature and unreasonable 'argument' to use in a 3d artist's porn game thread that contradicts the one and only purpose the forum has, which is for ppl to discuss, share content and review their favorite porn comics and porn games. Not only this, it also goes against the forum rules and the freedom of speech right in general, that's theoretically given to ALL ppl, so fuck logic, I guess.

Don't understand why some users can't just ignore comments they don't like, follow their own 'logic' and skip them, or simply report said comments to the mods if they consider them offensive, off-topic, or violating the forum rules instead.

which is number 3 :)
The Swedish bitchy mom who got 'accidentally' creampied by one of her two sons in the previous pages of this chapter.
 

xXwankerXx

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WTF ?? Kelly, the woman who, according to PS's initial description of her character, was supposed to be the more open-minded, free spirited, funny, outgoing sister, thinks her fucking Dylan is worse than fucking Brandi ?? Bruuuhh...:FacePalm:o_O

Can't wait to read which type of nonsense she'll pull out of her stuck-up ass to justify throwing her morals and principles down the toilet for after she gets caught by one of them becoming the island's cumdump in the next Chs.

I don't mind her being reluctant about joining in on the incestuous fun Brandi and Dylan are having, after all, we need to have a story too, but PS could come up with better excuses to justify why the fun, open-minded, outgoing, party girl sister acts like the annoyingly boring, prudish one instead of just Brandi being the Brandi we saw in the first few Chs of AN. :unsure:
 

Small-pp-22

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WTF ?? Kelly, the woman who, according to PS's initial description of her character, was supposed to be the more open-minded, free spirited, funny, outgoing sister, thinks her fucking Dylan is worse than fucking Brandi ?? Bruuuhh...:FacePalm:o_O

Can't wait to read which type of nonsense she'll pull out of her stuck-up ass to justify throwing her morals and principles down the toilet for after she gets caught by one of them becoming the island's cumdump in the next Chs.

I don't mind her being reluctant about joining in on the incestuous fun Brandi and Dylan are having, after all, we need to have a story too, but PS could come up with better excuses to justify why the fun, open-minded, outgoing, party girl sister acts like the annoyingly boring, prudish one instead of just Brandi being the Brandi we saw in the first few Chs of AN. :unsure:
No can do, she'll be just as reluctant so PS can milk a whole character arc out of her just like he did with Brandy, and then will do the same thing with another character, cause why not? Money printing
 

_OBLIVION_

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WTF ?? Kelly, the woman who, according to PS's initial description of her character, was supposed to be the more open-minded, free spirited, funny, outgoing sister, thinks her fucking Dylan is worse than fucking Brandi ?? Bruuuhh...:FacePalm:o_O

Can't wait to read which type of nonsense she'll pull out of her stuck-up ass to justify throwing her morals and principles down the toilet for after she gets caught by one of them becoming the island's cumdump in the next Chs.

I don't mind her being reluctant about joining in on the incestuous fun Brandi and Dylan are having, after all, we need to have a story too, but PS could come up with better excuses to justify why the fun, open-minded, outgoing, party girl sister acts like the annoyingly boring, prudish one instead of just Brandi being the Brandi we saw in the first few Chs of AN. :unsure:
She will definitely be the cumdump of the island no doubt about it, PS just taking her turning to the darkside very slowly, I think when she is completely indoctrinated to the island rules she will fuck most of the characters and Brandy will see that and desire to do the same thing and Kelly telling her how good it is to not be attached to anybody Brandi would snap and speak to Dylan about letting her to do the same, could be 2 scenarios: Dylan accepts and let her have fun with anyone or because of Kelly comments and indirect influence she would cuck Dylan AGAIN, theres a lot of characters I would love to see more often like Pete, Petes wife, Petes daughter, Tom, Tom daughter, Andre and her sister (Rory can show up and try to get close to Andre in order to fuck his sister since he never did it with a black girl before)
 

ramzey

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WTF ?? Kelly, the woman who, according to PS's initial description of her character, was supposed to be the more open-minded, free spirited, funny, outgoing sister, thinks her fucking Dylan is worse than fucking Brandi ?? Bruuuhh...:FacePalm:o_O

Can't wait to read which type of nonsense she'll pull out of her stuck-up ass to justify throwing her morals and principles down the toilet for after she gets caught by one of them becoming the island's cumdump in the next Chs.

I don't mind her being reluctant about joining in on the incestuous fun Brandi and Dylan are having, after all, we need to have a story too, but PS could come up with better excuses to justify why the fun, open-minded, outgoing, party girl sister acts like the annoyingly boring, prudish one instead of just Brandi being the Brandi we saw in the first few Chs of AN. :unsure:
I'm also very surprised about Kelly and you explained the situation very well. Sex with a sister is normal, but when it's a nephew, it's a sin. kellys excuse is funnier. His nephew was born into his hands, so? Kelly couldn't fuck her nephew. Isn't his mother the one who gave birth to him? Let's see how much nonsense we will read to extend the topic.

No can do, she'll be just as reluctant so PS can milk a whole character arc out of her just like he did with Brandy, and then will do the same thing with another character, cause why not? Money printing
If printing money means boring us, PS will lose many followers. Now other artists are aware of this and are making their script strategies shorter but of higher quality. Don't they make money? They definitely win. but they have the ability to continue their productivity under other stories. They don't keep a story going for 3 years.

The twins' mom
The PS we know adds this third blonde to the subject as the unknown brother of Brandy and Kelly. We read that story in 4 chapters. :)

She will definitely be the cumdump of the island no doubt about it, PS just taking her turning to the darkside very slowly, I think when she is completely indoctrinated to the island rules she will fuck most of the characters and Brandy will see that and desire to do the same thing and Kelly telling her how good it is to not be attached to anybody Brandi would snap and speak to Dylan about letting her to do the same, could be 2 scenarios: Dylan accepts and let her have fun with anyone or because of Kelly comments and indirect influence she would cuck Dylan AGAIN, theres a lot of characters I would love to see more often like Pete, Petes wife, Petes daughter, Tom, Tom daughter, Andre and her sister (Rory can show up and try to get close to Andre in order to fuck his sister since he never did it with a black girl before)
Good guesses about possible scenarios, my friend. But the idea of cucold dylan does not appeal to me. There may be a more effective Dylan character instead. For example, Dylan can create a relationship between the sweedish mother and her sons. brandi seduces sweedish bitch. This would be a more logical plot line than her son's dick accidentally entering her pussy. what do you say :)
 

_OBLIVION_

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Good guesses about possible scenarios, my friend. But the idea of cucold dylan does not appeal to me. There may be a more effective Dylan character instead. For example, Dylan can create a relationship between the sweedish mother and her sons. brandi seduces sweedish bitch. This would be a more logical plot line than her son's dick accidentally entering her pussy. what do you say :)
Dude I despise chapter 10 because of the cuckold situation, that moment could have been the perfect scenario for Dylan to let Brandi fuck anybody (after Gina convinced him of course) and afterwards Brandi Dylan Rory and Gina would have a passionate foursome all night long but no PS took the lame lazy ntr route and now look at brandi still insecure af IN FUCKING CHAPTER 20, until Dylan set Brandi free this comic will still have a slow pace with lesbian action or PS would repeat the ntr tactic again (I dont want that again, it must be mutual agreement) I like the Swedish mom scenario but is unlikely to happen at this point, is funny that in the first chapters Brandi admitted wanting to fuck some guys in the island and now shes chained only to Dylan and lesbian situations lol because of chapter 10, the ntr shit fucked up this comic big time and is really sad to see it... And yes the unintentional rape of Lucas to the swedish mom was retarded af just like chapter 10 ntr shit.
 
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I still believe that Kelly will gradually separate Brandi from Dylan. Let's remember that the author has often failed to build his characters. You can't trust anything he proposes in this story because everything has contradictions from start to finish. Kelly will probably stay with Dylan because she has already shown an interest in him and she is jealous of her sister, but she could also be jealous of her. That's why Brandi will gradually interact with the Swedes and the rest of the islanders. Because they are sisters and want each other's convenience, it is certain that they will both become prostitutes very quickly. One will complement the other.
 

sasans

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I still believe that Kelly will gradually separate Brandi from Dylan. Let's remember that the author has often failed to build his characters. You can't trust anything he proposes in this story because everything has contradictions from start to finish. Kelly will probably stay with Dylan because she has already shown an interest in him and she is jealous of her sister, but she could also be jealous of her. That's why Brandi will gradually interact with the Swedes and the rest of the islanders. Because they are sisters and want each other's convenience, it is certain that they will both become prostitutes very quickly. One will complement the other.
This forum really needs dislike button
 
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This is called Business. Same theme is repeating itself again and again. It seem like a beautiful comic is turned into a boring comic. Actually, AN becomes PS's note printing system. Sorry to say it so rough. But, being fan, it hurts me a lot. There are many makers who are waiting to attract the fans. But, PS is just making fun of its fans. Specially, AN fans. Where TSB is on track but AN derailed. Brandy took 5 chapters, Kelly takes also too many chapters.
 
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