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Hopefully it will stay true-ish to the original, cucking the husband by stealing the wife away instead of adding some other random kid that also gets shots at the wife/mom. If it ever comes to that then make it optional.
We know that the Perfect Bond will ultimately lead to the Perfect Bang. The question is how soon? The answer is naturally "not soon enough" but there lies the art and skills of the writer. As a storyteller, one has to thread the fine line between porn and poetry - and we know what we already have too much of. The inevitable physical bond is the climax of the novel. The journey there and how it influences and changes the main characters will make this story unique. Though this novel is mainly fantasy, the storytelling should not be too far-fetch either. Have a great day everyone.
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I genuinely hope this is the approach they're going for. I don't mind seeing new characters that adds something to the story, but leave potential new characters out of the thing Danny has going for him
There is tension in the air between Jessica and David. Quite naturally, David will see Danny as the source of the conflicts and blames him for everything. David's negative perception of and behavior towards Danny will further drive a wedge between Jessica and him. Jessica's maternal instincts and her bond with Danny will grow stronger. Her marital problems will increase and drive her further into the arms of Danny. At some point Jessica sees Danny less and less of an adopted son and more and more of a potential lover. All these events are not deviously plotted by any of the characters. Everything happens because one thing leads to another. Personally I find such development more plausible and interesting from a story-telling point of view than the more predictable "everyone with a penis hit everyone with a vagina" kind of approach." Thanks for your time and efforts.
Mr black i dont want to pressure you but how many precent do you think you are for the next update and is it going to be a long update( longer than the preview udpate?).
Yes longer ... Longer approach is better, by finding and measuring milestones, and taking time to really cook those renders. There will be lazy days? yes ... I don't want to burn out, with my work and game etc.
With longer approach what I mean (in regards to PB) is to combine multiple updates, and have Jessicas first physical interaction with Danny in a very tasty way and not changing Jessicas character suddenly. This way when audience play it, they can feel the escalation escalator really well, than cutting the updates to multiple patches I guess.
Not currently .. once I get the new GPU and start CG, I can give a rough estimate
Sounds good to me and dont push the interaction with jessica and danny to much because it will ruin the game. For example a lot of teasing between each others (such as her dressing up or not wearing a Bra o the mail man) and once in a while something more erotic (like when her checking up danny in the bath and her falling on his dick or danny getting a boner during the morning or a mini nipslip)
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During the lesson, their teacher Olivia (Liv) Taylor watches with admiration. It is an interesting coincidence that the woman looks like Arwen from Lord of The Rings. but Danny won't tell anyone about it.
After class, the trio run out of the classroom. When they reach the stairs of the main gate, they find Jessica waiting in the garden below. the other kids stop but Danny keeps running and Jessica opens her arms. The two hug tightly.
this is one of the moments Jessica has been waiting for years. She hugs Danny tightly, accompanied by the warm wind blowing with the laughter of the chirping children around them.
Jessica is happy and at peace. She is what she is looking for.
please wait a moment... is this it?
Suddenly, the expression of peace on Jessica's face gives way to bewilderment.
Bobby hugs him from his right, Pete from his left. Like Danny, both children have their faces innocently pressed against Jessica's breasts.
After a short pause, Jessica feels sorry for Bobby and Pete and hugs the three of them with her arms wide open to share her love with them.
thinking of himself as a woman who wishes for 1 child and has 3 children; It suddenly comes to mind that seeing him this way with preteen boys can be very misunderstood.
she pretends to clear her throat and walks away from the three of them to see if anyone is looking at them strangely.
Jessica - emm, how are you guys?
Intoxicated by Jessica's softness, warmth, and scent, the trio can't answer that question right away. Bobby is the first to recover
Bobby - hi maam,
Jessica (smiling) You can say Jessica
Danny - hi Jessica
Pete - Greets Jessica with a silly grin
Danny- how are you?
Jassica- I'm fine, I was waiting for you, if you don't have work, shall we go home?
Danny (turning to the boys) - Guys?
Pete and Bobby look at each other
Bobby - actually we're going to play a game tomorrow after school, can you come over if you want?
Pete (smirking) Please come Danny, maybe you can meet Liza?
Danny (turns to Jessica) can I go?
Jessica- (concerned) How are you going to get home?
Pete- our house is very close to here. I'll drop Danny here on the way back, I guess he can find the house from here?
Danny (eagerly)- yes I can.
Jessica (smiling) - so have fun already
The three of them meet in the morning, nothing important happens at school. but they leave school early before the last lesson. They tell Danny the reason for this on the way.
Liza likes sunbathing or swimming in the pool at noon. Bobby and sometimes Pete spy on Liza with him. But one day, idiot Bobby (Pete emphasizes this) gets caught by Liza during a "peeping operation" involving Pete.
Liza- (angrily to Bobby) Are you peeking at me?
Bobby (horrified) - no, no I'm uh, umm I'm looking for Pete!
Liza (even more angry) - No Pete here, Bobby! do not lie to me!!! you were peeking me!!!
Bobby (to save himself) - look there (pointing to the tree where Pete was hiding)
Liza -Auww perverted assholes
Pete - Liza you got it wrong, we were just playing hide and seek
Bobby (hopefully) - yes, yes hide and seek
Liza (to Pete) fuck off you liar brat, get the hell out of this house I won't see you here again!
Bobby (weakly) - Hey you can't kick my friend out of the house!
Liza (walking on Bobby) I'll even kick out you too
Liza continued to curse behind them as Bobby and Pete ran away.
Danny listening to the story (scared) - Guys, I guess it's best I don't come, Jessica will be worried about me.
Bobby (grabbing Danny by the arm) - you're so scared
Pete - Liza is very nice dude
Bobby - this event happened long ago and is forgotten. Now she doesn't sunbathe when I'm at home.
Pete - we are too, so we'll be home when we shouldn't be home (grins)
Danny - is that why we left school early?
Bobby- smart people create their own opportunity (smirk) and you will see that now we are carrying out the operation with a new tactical understanding.
Pete (laughing) you'll see dude, you'll see it up close
When they got home, they grabbed their shoes and went quietly to Bobby's room. Bobby took 2 simple binoculars from the drawer, while Pete took another from his bag.
Bobby handed one of his binoculars to Danny and pointed to the window. Through the triple wide window, they saw Liza sunbathing through the 10 cm gap under the curtain.
The tan girl in a white bikini from 12-13 meters away was really beautiful. her breasts were incomparable to Jessica's, but they were erect and enough to carry Danny's hands. The girl had no lubrication in her abdomen and waist area. she had an athletic body, but not muscular. It was a very feminine body. On the other hand, with the same beautiful face, Liza was a very pretty girl. Danny realized he could do anything to fuck her. Watching in admiration, Bobby shrugged and pointed to the binoculars.
Danny immediately began to look through the binoculars, and all the details of the girl flashed before his eyes. now the beauty of her face is more obvious, her nipples are visible from the top of the bikini, she can choose the pubis crest under the bikini.
At that time, Bobby handed Danny and Pete napkins. When Danny didn't know what to do, Pete untied his pants without letting go of his binoculars and started masturbating while watching Liza.
Surprised and horrified, Danny turned to Bobby to find that Bobby had done the same.
Danny had never masturbated in front of anyone else before. when she is embarrassed and confused and doesn't know what to do...
Pete - oh so beautifull
Bobby - come on Liza, show us that!
Pete- come on please Liza
Danny again puts the binoculars up close and watches Liza close up as she rubs a sunscreen over her legs. At that moment, he decides to let the event flow, immediately undoes his pants and joins the masturbation party.
Danny- your sister is really beautiful
Bobby- wait, you'll meet her ass soon
Pete (hysterically) she'll make us "finish him"
Bobby - come on sister, turn your ass
Pete- your ass needs sun too Liza, come on
meanwhile, Liza lies face down, with her hands gathering the bottom of her bikini between her ass.
three at the same time -woahh
Liza has almost all of her bikini bottom tucked into her ass crack, and now her bubble ass is in full view. Liza applies the sunscreen she pours into her hands by massaging her ass. The sequence, which lasts about 20 seconds, is satisfying for Danny.
Danny - I think I'm going to cum
Bobby - on the napkin! on the napkin! or you clean it yourself
Pete - I'm done (he'll cum)
Danny - fuck! (he'll cum)
Bobby- ohh sis someday I'm gonna fuck your ass (he'll cum)
Liza sunbathes for about 20 more minutes and then goes to her room. Meanwhile, they continue to watch him, then play a few games of LOL and Pete and Danny break up.
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this game is way better than I've expected! Good job!
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This man knows how to write and has a vision for the thing.!
Have you considered creating your version of scenes just like onurcamel!
They would definitely be valuable here on the thread!
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On the way they joke and talk about football and basketball. They arrive at school in a short time and say goodbye to each other. Danny walks a little and looks back after Pete. The cheerful boy is singing an obnoxious song as he hops home.
Danny continues walking home, wondering what Jessica is wearing.
Pete's house:
Pete arrives home shortly after breaking up with Danny. On his way to his room to change, he sees his sister washing fruit in the kitchen.
Pete (macho) - Yo sis! what are you preparing for me?
Emily (18 yo) has problems with socialization, is interested in far eastern culture (especially Japanese), game freak, internet maniac, loves fresh fruit, sushi and sake.
Emily (reckless) earthworm?
Pete (angry) - don't call me that
Emily - don't taunt me
Pete - I'm the man of the house when my dad's not home. I do what I want.
Emily drops the berries and casts a nasty glance at her annoying brad.
Pete (fainting) - ok, I was joking (softly approaching his older sister and hugging her waist) anything I can help you dear sister?
Emily - leave me alone please, I'm hungry. (pushs Pete's hands off him)
Unsuccessful in hugging, Pete sneaks a quick glance at his older sister's ass.
Pete- what are you doing?
Emily- fruit salad
Pete - are you ready for me too?
Emily (exasperated) ok I'll get you ready too
Pete - thanks!
Pete hurried out of the kitchen to change, but quieted his steps. He walked through the door of his own room with quick and silent steps and stopped in front of Emily's room, which was ajar. He glanced towards the kitchen one last time, saw that Emily had not come, and entered his sister's room.
Emily spent most of her life in this room; Pete dreamed of his older sister masturbating all the time in the room, which was usually locked. There must be proofs of this around, he looked for something like vibrator, dildo, but couldn't find it. According to Pete, the room was filled with a lot of nonsense manga and doujin. The girl was a real fan of manga. She was about to leave the room empty-handed when she saw a printout next to the monitor. She was writing things that she couldn't decipher.
Voices of A Distant Star
Tamako Love Story
I Want to Eat Your Pancreas
Whisper of the Heart Read
Your Name
Golden Time
Clannad
Weathering with You
Castle in the Sky
The Cat Returns ...
Pete couldn't make any sense of what was written on the paper. some had a heart sign next to them, but there was nothing else. He looked at the paper again. it didn't make any sense again then his mind worked and took a picture of him and went to his own room, changed his clothes, ate his dinner, his mother came, his sister went to his room and everyone went to sleep.
The photo he took came to Pete's mind the next day during recess and showed it to Bobby and Danny. The three of them read the list again but couldn't make any sense. After a while, Danny thought of Goggle. they immediately searched the first line, an anime movie came out, the other line was an anime name and the next one.
The paper was just a list of anime. It had no features.
Pete was discouraged. The prospect of learning something secret belonging to his sister excited him. but nothing came of it.
but Danny and Bobby continued to peruse the list. Bobby asked Danny to search the whole list, not one by one. Even though he didn't like to write all the names one by one, Danny did as he was told.
tadaaaa! they had found the site where the list was published
(cheerfully) hey Pete we found your sister's site
Pete - so you hang around here you bitch
Bobby (laughing) - your sister isn't a bitch man (to danny) her sister is beautiful, but she's weird. I hardly know her, she never talks to you. She acts like you don't exist.
Pete- I don't know him either but her body is beautiful and he masturbates all the time in that room
Danny - are you serious?
Bobby (laughs) - daydreaming, never caught it
Then the bell rings and they go to class. During class, Pete hatches a plan.
after class, in the garden
Pete- we'll make a new list!
Bobby - Why?
Pete (sneaky)- for my sister, an anime of our choosing. incest and shota theme will be our number one criterion.
Danny -wow, how are you going to get him to watch the movies on this list?
Pete - we're going to e-mail her. first we will be a member of that site, we will be an e-mail subscriber to send a list. Then we will change the e-mail they sent and write our own list. Then we will get a new e-mail address. Of course, the name of the address we received will be in accordance with the name of the site, then we will send the fake list to my sister.
Bobby - what if she notices
Pete - we don't lose anything.
Danny- we don't lose anything right, she can't know we sent it.
Bobby - ok, when I get home I'll sign up and copy the email
Danny- I will list incest animes
Pete- I'II will list shota animes, then see you in the morning!
The three of us leave to go home.
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Thank you for the compliment but I am not good with detailed writing like onurcamel's. I merely present possible scenarios for the story writer to consider. For example : Due to the conflicts between the married couple, they see a marriage counsellor (Afterall Jessica is a faithful and dutiful wife and marriage is a serious matter to her.) The couple is prescribed some time-off from Danny and some couple's time for themselves. Jessica reluctantly agrees and they send Danny off to Jessica's sister. We can then conjure up various scenarios for the sister - single; single parent; married but domineering wife; career woman; has a son/daughter etc etc. The sister has to look similar to Jessica (The readers have to recognise their similar facial features) but is a polar opposite to Jessica's character and personality. While with the sister, Danny loses his virginity but he is awaken to his manhood(pun intended) and the joys of sex(The emphasis here is on SEX and not lovemaking - this part is ultimately realised later with Jessica - also because Perfect Bond is reserved only for them.) Upon his return home, Danny becomes both envious and jealous of David. Jessica on the other hand feels so guilty about sending Danny away (Remember she promised at the adoption centre that she will never leave him?) that she overcompensates her love and care for Danny. She too notices the behavioural changes in Danny but like before, misinterpret them and then comes up with her solutions to them (more than tickling this time around); resulting in more compromises on her part. But in so doing she too has an awakening of sorts. What finally drives her to Danny's loving arms? Many possibilities, the chief of which could be David's extra-marital affair - a last straw for Jessica! This is but one of the many angles of the development of the story. Have a nice day everyone.
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Hi everyone. Today I want to talk about a seemingly unimportant character - David.
I consider him an integral part of the story. Whatever happens to him has a ripple effect to the main characters. So far David has been the “adult in the room”. (He saw through Danny’s inappropriate behaviours' toward Jessica and didn't hesitate to put him in his place. He also correctly pointed out to Jessica that Danny is a man and not a boy). David comes across as competitive and he definitely loves his wife. Unfortunately he is fighting a losing battle (to our delight of course). As the story progresses, David finds himself having to tiptoe around Danny for Jessica’s sake and for the sake of their marriage. This of course makes Danny bolder in his interactions with Jessica. David hates being curtailed and losing spontaneity – even in the privacy of his bedroom ("Not so loud,” I could almost hear Jessica whispering). Inevitably their nocturnal activities suffer and that could be the catalyst for him to seek the comfort of another woman - colleague, Jessica's sister, niece etc - up to story teller. I find it more meaningful to give that extra humanity to David’s character. I hope small details like these may give Perfect Bond a distinct difference to other AVN: the CG appeals to the eyes, the storyline to the mind. Thank you for your time.
I consider him an integral part of the story. Whatever happens to him has a ripple effect to the main characters. So far David has been the “adult in the room”. (He saw through Danny’s inappropriate behaviours' toward Jessica and didn't hesitate to put him in his place. He also correctly pointed out to Jessica that Danny is a man and not a boy). David comes across as competitive and he definitely loves his wife. Unfortunately he is fighting a losing battle (to our delight of course). As the story progresses, David finds himself having to tiptoe around Danny for Jessica’s sake and for the sake of their marriage. This of course makes Danny bolder in his interactions with Jessica. David hates being curtailed and losing spontaneity – even in the privacy of his bedroom ("Not so loud,” I could almost hear Jessica whispering). Inevitably their nocturnal activities suffer and that could be the catalyst for him to seek the comfort of another woman - colleague, Jessica's sister, niece etc - up to story teller. I find it more meaningful to give that extra humanity to David’s character. I hope small details like these may give Perfect Bond a distinct difference to other AVN: the CG appeals to the eyes, the storyline to the mind. Thank you for your time.
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When Danny comes home, he searches about incest anime as promised. After a while, it sends the results to whatsapp groups. Likewise, Pete has also made a shota anime list and shares it in the group. Finally, Bobby plays on the original mail and creates the new list and sends it to Emily.
Looking at the phone's notification sign, Emily clicks on the new incoming mail.
"the naughty editor's special selection"
Browse through the list of interesting names. This is the first time he's heard these animes in his life. he liked this situation and he searches for the first anime on google and starts watching it.
The anime is about 2 people who fall in love with each other. Their love turns into marriage and then they have 3 daughters. Then fastforward, the parents have aged a bit and the girls have grown up. The low-cut clothes that beautiful girls wear at home provoke their fathers and this causes the man to fantasize about his daughters.
Browse through the list of interesting names. This is the first time she's heard these animes in her life. she liked this situation and she searches for the first anime on google and starts watching it.
The anime is about 2 people who fall in love with each other. Their love turns into marriage and then they have 3 daughters. Then fastforward, the parents have aged a bit and the girls have grown up. The low-cut clothes that beautiful girls wear at home provoke their fathers and this man puts them in ridiculous situations against their daughters.
While continuing the movie with an interesting sense of humor, the eldest daughter showering with dad is too much for Emily and stops the anime.
Emily goes to the kitchen and gets a glass of water, she has always described herself as open-minded, forward-thinking and tolerant. but now, she gave up at the first different thing she came across. she thinks she's disrespecting herself. Emily takes a sip of water and returns to her room, continuing the anime.
In a few days, Emily will be watching the entire list.
The next day in the morning in the school garden:
The question is whether Emily followed the list. but Pete doesn't know about it because his older sister is always in the room. she locks the door when he is not in his room.
thus the Trio loses interest in Emily.
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Idk what's happening here but a lot of people recently pop up in this thread and bringing up their own script on how the game should do next idk if you're the stonewars dude onurcamel but I don't like your idea bringing up your own plans to the game showing up from nowhere. the people here are passionate about the continuation of the original game "true bond"and we are trying to make it as close as possible to the original and if happens your stonewars that Mr black is mentioning in the credits screen every update you should play the original first before writing anything here .don't ruin the game with your own scripts !let the dev and the main man handle the writing etc.the fan made spin off itself is lacking on writing and if your idea will come to that game I'm afraid it will not be true bond anymore.
The original game only focuses on corrupting Jessica nothing more.and even it's a slow burn it doesn't mean the dev will add the character you mentioned in your script.we are here since the beginning of this thread so stop it it's doesn't really make sense to me adding a dozen more character to the game.the name is true bond it focuses on the process of making strong relationship between the mother and adopted son period if anything will add on the current spin off like a side bitch or another dude then this game is has no reason to continue because it will change the atmosphere of the whole perception both original and the spin off so we are really careful here when it comes to writing.
We are lacking with that now but personally I don't like your formulated scripts.you can do that with other game but not this one.no hard feelings it's just an honest observation from what your are writing here.
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The original game only focuses on corrupting Jessica nothing more.and even it's a slow burn it doesn't mean the dev will add the character you mentioned in your script.we are here since the beginning of this thread so stop it it's doesn't really make sense to me adding a dozen more character to the game.the name is true bond it focuses on the process of making strong relationship between the mother and adopted son period if anything will add on the current spin off like a side bitch or another dude then this game is has no reason to continue because it will change the atmosphere of the whole perception both original and the spin off so we are really careful here when it comes to writing.
We are lacking with that now but personally I don't like your formulated scripts.you can do that with other game but not this one.no hard feelings it's just an honest observation from what your are writing here.
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You guys here are free to write any SCRIPTS THAT ARE CLOSE TO THE ORIGINAL game atmosphere that can help mr black in writing the game to make it more feasty to hold. And FOR THE LOVE of this game stop making new theories about how the game should look like even if it a mere suggestion it will still influence people's minds. c'mon let's help this game come true and not adding your personal kink.im not prohibiting anyone here to write it's your free will but please stay relative and sensible to what cloudlet left us.thank u
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