Ren'Py Completed Personal Trainer [v1.1.2] [Domiek]

[Deleted member 694527]

May as well leave the commissioned artwork for Sophie here.

 

[ZagorTeNay]

What I'd like to do is focus on the current locations and story-lines of the characters we already have

Good choice! Someone pass these words of wisdom to Chris Roberts.

Sooo...it comes down to Sophie, Jenni, Amy, Hikari, and Dani...right?

 

[Deleted member 694527]

Good choice! Someone pass these words of wisdom to Chris Roberts.

Sooo...it comes down to Sophie, Jenni, Amy, Hikari, and Dani...right?

Everyone with a portrait in the in-game guide + Jazmine down the road. That puts us at 10 chars, which is still ambitious but half of the originally planned 20.

There will still be plenty of new faces with random interactions. But these are shallow and I don't spend much time customizing them.

 

[fanboi]

Everyone with a portrait in the in-game guide + Jazmine down the road. That puts us at 10 chars, which is still ambitious but half of the originally planned 20.

There will still be plenty of new faces with random interactions. But these are shallow and I don't spend much time customizing them.

I think you've made the right decision. You can always add in more characters to expand the game after finishing with the characters you already have. Many developers end up taking too much on and then getting frustrated/bored and don't finish, so maintaining a realistic scope is important IMO.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

That's not fair, spoilers are just begging to get clicked. lol

 

[Jurandirr]

Enjoyed the great game so far, and i rly like the scenes you can do again, few games do that, bit disappointing that we do few things with the cousin, think she is best girl

would like a bit more of anal, and maybe more repeated scenes with Amy in yoga and sauna, since you already did

Need ask if im not doing wrong, Alex is the last girl correct? cause after her its a "?" And i dunno where to find another other, or if i can find another one, like the black and white girl, no content abou then yet right?( but the white girl did get some fun in the room...)

Also, the "football" mom rly got me, there is no content with her and just trash talk in the gym? i feel sad

 

[Gattaca1997]

Was this game written by a 9 years old?

 

[Alfred the Fallen]

Will it be possible to avoid Alex entirely?

If I just never return to Daisy's room, will it bugger up any other character paths? I'm not overly fond of Daisy, so I don't mind missing her content if need be, but I'm a bit worried that plot lines for characters that I do like will be walled off in the future.

I know that we can avoid the second event with Alex, but I really don't want to do anything with her at all, ever. I find her to be annoying, unattractive, and I have no desire to ride the town bike without proper protection. For someone like Alex, that would mean recreating the scene from the Naked Gun movie where they wear the full body condoms.

 

[Mattock]

(sorry for being late! but I talk about the 0.25-version)
I'm a bit disambiguous with this title, overall it's a well-made world with some freedom and characters to fall in love with.
On the other hand, pretending to be gay as a girl-owning measure is....not what I would have thought of, on first glimpse...
also I'm not too much into "ntr"(Amy)
That aside, I definitely will replay a newer version, if I got the time!

happy playing, greets Mattock


P.S. @Domiek: as said this is about 0.25 and I hope it is already fixed, but that error will fill the stack every day:
in game_locations.rpy
label loc_sophie:
call sophie_work from _call_sophie_work
=>this MUST be: jump sophie_work

 

[Deleted member 694527]

Will it be possible to avoid Alex entirely?

If I just never return to Daisy's room, will it bugger up any other character paths? I'm not overly fond of Daisy, so I don't mind missing her content if need be, but I'm a bit worried that plot lines for characters that I do like will be walled off in the future.

I know that we can avoid the second event with Alex, but I really don't want to do anything with her at all, ever. I find her to be annoying, unattractive, and I have no desire to ride the town bike without proper protection. For someone like Alex, that would mean recreating the scene from the Naked Gun movie where they wear the full body condoms.

This game is supposed to be silly and fun, not to be taken too seriously. Which is why I think it's kind of odd that I have to point out the following.

Alex gives one BJ to non-MC, and now she's a dirty slut/town-bike that needs to be quarantined. Meanwhile MC fucks everything he can get his hands on and that's ok? Come on guys, our mamas raised us better than that

Was this game written by a 9 years old?

In pursuit of the highest quality writing, I hired the same guy who writes my president's speeches. Hugely talented 9 year old, believe me folks.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

This game is supposed to be silly and fun, not to be taken too seriously. Which is why I think it's kind of odd that I have to point out the following.

Alex gives one BJ to non-MC, and now she's a dirty slut/town-bike that needs to be quarantined. Meanwhile MC fucks everything he can get his hands on and that's ok? Come on guys, our mamas raised us better than that



In pursuit of the highest quality writing, I hired the same guy who writes my president's speeches. Hugely talented 9 year old, believe me folks.

I don't know about these men but my mother raised me not to spread my legs for any man that smiles at me and pretend it's empowering. lol
Didn't she herself say she was a slut or was that daisy? The mc even had the option to call her a slut and then proceeds to bareback her.

 

[Jurandirr]

Alex gives one BJ to non-MC, and now she's a dirty slut/town-bike that needs to be quarantined. Meanwhile MC fucks everything he can get his hands on and that's ok? Come on guys, our mamas raised us better than that

i think the problem is the scene when implies that MC was going to suck de dong, s myself and maybe many people don't have problem with her fucking the town( cause she is a bitch...), but one dong in the room is the my rule unless the other is from a trap, who make things better

 

[Deleted member 694527]

i think the problem is the scene when implies that MC was going to suck de dong, s myself and maybe many people don't have problem with her fucking the town( cause she is a bitch...), but one dong in the room is the my rule unless the other is from a trap, who make things better

Hey, your opinion is totally fine. It's ok to say "that's not my thing" and be done with it. I'm not a fan of more than one dick in a room either. But some (not you) being outraged that a woman showing some agency is somehow a lesser human is just plain silly.

 

[anonymoushoney]

will Jazmine be included in next update? shes a gorgeous character

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

i think the problem is the scene when implies that MC was going to suck de dong, s myself and maybe many people don't have problem with her fucking the town( cause she is a bitch...), but one dong in the room is the my rule unless the other is from a trap, who make things better

I agree he should remake Alex into a trap.

 

[a1fox3]

I agree he should remake Alex into a trap.

If that happens then this VN will go into the trash can.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

If that happens then this VN will go into the trash can.

That was rude and uncalled for. She's already in the trash. lol

 

[Deleted member 694527]

I'm getting the feeling that I should do it.

 

[icesun]

@Domiek

EDIT: This game (at least so far) is a sweet journey of "pleasing women in need" without thinking about consequences... ...I'd like for it to stay that way...

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I'm getting the feeling that I should do it.

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Finally, the power of nagging compels you. lol