Ren'Py Completed Personal Trainer [v1.1.2] [Domiek]

[ThunderRob]

Sorry Rob, you may have missed my comment earlier. I hope to finish this game within a year so I'm cutting down planned main characters from 20 to 10, and won't be adding any more explorable locations. Otherwise I'll be stretched thin and it will take years to complete.

This is my first game and the primary objective was to learn as much as I can about making these sort of games. As tempting as it sounds to milk PT for a few years, I'd like to take what i learned and eventually ake another game even better!

"Rob hears the sad cries of many..."

 

[Deleted member 694527]

"Rob hears the sad cries of many..."

Don't worry Rob, this is actually good news. My story structure, planning and writing wasnt a high priority or taken seriously (as is obvious) in exchange for focusing on learning the technical side of things. If you enjoy PT, you will enjoy the next game more where the story and writing will be a lot tighter and more coherent.

Imagine the Sophie/MC level of writing/dynamic but better and with more characters.

Of course, this is still a year or so away. Need to focus on doing PT justice for now.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Don't worry Rob, this is actually good news. My story structure, planning and writing wasnt a high priority or taken seriously (as is obvious) in exchange for focusing on learning the technical side of things. If you enjoy PT, you will enjoy the next game more where the story and writing will be a lot tighter and more coherent.

Imagine the Sophie/MC level of writing/dynamic but better and with more characters.

Of course, this is still a year or so away. Need to focus on doing PT justice for now.

An even better game than this? I was kinda sad when you were talking about ending but all good things must come to an end. Still can't see how you could possibly get any better but I'm not a game dev so I'll take your word for it. lol
That might have came out rude but I meant in the good way.

 

[Rythan25]

secondary characters..She-Hulk,Latina-Milf,Landwhale,blondie all have repeatable scenes...main-dames..Jenna,Amy,Momma(is she main?) have some repeatable scenes also some tertiary characters have repeatable scenes.

Is Latina Milf the one in the sauna ? If yes she is my favorite minor character in the game, as she is hot as hell, she's also the victim of the best pick-up line ever despite the fact that she doesnt apprciate it...

Dont remember how it goes but its a rhyme about the depthness of the soul, and how he is gonna "plow" her motherly hole !! I literally replay that scene every day without fail (even more than Amy's or Maria's) just for that line !

 

[Rythan25]

Don't worry Rob, this is actually good news. My story structure, planning and writing wasnt a high priority or taken seriously (as is obvious) in exchange for focusing on learning the technical side of things. If you enjoy PT, you will enjoy the next game more where the story and writing will be a lot tighter and more coherent.

Imagine the Sophie/MC level of writing/dynamic but better and with more characters.

Of course, this is still a year or so away. Need to focus on doing PT justice for now.

If you end up making a VN game (not sandbox) after PT is done, I would definitely follow that game ! especially if you have a couple as protagonist or something... the best writing in this game (other than the funny stuff) is the banter between Sophie and the MC, literally I can see how the two cousins would eventually bang, and possibly even fall in love, their chemistry is off the charts !

I legit cant think of another couple that flows so naturally together in a VN... The closest ones that come to mind is the Escort and the MC from Depraved Awakening... but no one else, not even from DrPink's games have such a cute couple.

 

[ThunderRob]

his sandbox elements are not as frustrating as many games are...its streamlined and efficient...yes i'd like a VN with ton of choices..but if his next game follows this style i'll continue to be a loyal follower...that being said..if he ever adds grind i'll swear bad words at him

 

[rf96]

letsupload link doesn't work for me.

 

[Deleted member 694527]

his sandbox elements are not as frustrating as many games are...its streamlined and efficient...yes i'd like a VN with ton of choices..but if his next game follows this style i'll continue to be a loyal follower...that being said..if he ever adds grind i'll swear bad words at him

I wont be doing a sandbox like this again because the coding is a messy nightmare, among other drawbacks.

Next game will be free-roam limited to one location, with the story progressing via linear VN. Think similar to Deluca.

Rob, you know I don't like grinding. Even back in my early 20's at a club, I remember approaching this absolutely stunning brunette in a red dress. I asked for a dance and she accepted. She then proceeds to bump and grind to a salsa-esque song. I turned her around to face me like a person and proceeded to seduce her with my white boy cuban motion. She stopped shortly after and said "If we aint grinding, we ain't dancing at all". I burst out laughing and walked off.

So no worries Rob, I HATE grinding.

 

[Sawyer89]

Search is not working for this thread i don`t know why, can someone please post a 0.26 save so i can play the update please. Cheers

 

[andreibvb1]

any other games where the characters looks like jenna or have the same physique?

 

[Baxonius]

Hmpf...i never see such that with timetable..always just nothing.
like this one
https://f95zone.to/threads/personal-trainer-v0-27-domiek.14093/#lg=post-846921&slide=4

 

[ThunderRob]

any other games where the characters looks like jenna or have the same physique?

Jenna is Jenna..she is unique..closest to her face is Michelle in Lukes Way..not as nicely rendered though with some WTF poses..Jenna is always hot

 

[Nolander]

From the Patreon post.

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0.27 is identical to 0.27beta except that 4 Patreon scenes are added.
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I haven't tried this in months, it looked like this was headed down the wrong path with the cheating/ntr and no real incest so I deleted the game and haven't followed it but a friend told me it seems to be back on track, is that true?

 

[Deleted member 694527]

Hmpf...i never see such that with timetable..always just nothing.
like this one
https://f95zone.to/threads/personal-trainer-v0-27-domiek.14093/#lg=post-846921&slide=4

You need to select a day of the week after selecting a girl.

 

[Deleted member 694527]

I haven't tried this in months, it looked like this was headed down the wrong path with the cheating/ntr and no real incest so I deleted the game and haven't followed it but a friend told me it seems to be back on track, is that true?

Yes, it's on the right track. Amy's husband apologizes to you and you end up inviting him to fuck your cousin whenever you want as long as you can watch. There's a lot of great renders of Sophie getting fucked doggystyle but unfortunately(fortunately?) Most of that view is blocked by Walters big saggy balls swinging back and forth.

 

[ThunderRob]

Yes, it's on the right track. Amy's husband apologizes to you and you end up inviting him to fuck your cousin whenever you want as long as you can watch. There's a lot of great renders of Sophie getting fucked doggystyle but unfortunately(fortunately?) Most of that view is blocked by Walters big saggy balls swinging back and forth.

glad i didnt see that..i'd rage quit if i saw anyone touch Sophie :O she must be protected

 

[Baxonius]

You need to select a day of the week after selecting a girl.

i did..but nothing with timetable..look this. screenshot. i guess need to start again maybe because some with new update?

 

[Nolander]

Yes, it's on the right track. Amy's husband apologizes to you and you end up inviting him to fuck your cousin whenever you want as long as you can watch. There's a lot of great renders of Sophie getting fucked doggystyle but unfortunately(fortunately?) Most of that view is blocked by Walters big saggy balls swinging back and forth.

That's nasty! I don't care to see any of that crazy scenes like that! Good Luck though.

 

[AlexTorch]

Yes, it's on the right track. Amy's husband apologizes to you and you end up inviting him to fuck your cousin whenever you want as long as you can watch. There's a lot of great renders of Sophie getting fucked doggystyle but unfortunately(fortunately?) Most of that view is blocked by Walters big saggy balls swinging back and forth.

Saggy balls goddammit, you make me spill my coffee all in my keyboard.

 

[Deleted member 694527]

i did..but nothing with timetable..look this. screenshot. i guess need to start again maybe because some with new update?

On your screen shot it doesn't show a day being selected. It will be a different color than the other days if selected.

Also note that the schedule is only filled with interactions you had. It doesn't start out filled out on a new game.