- Jun 3, 2019
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Please don make mc special needs. If they add the stuff back in there won't need to be odd plotpoints to make things make sense.That really explains quite a lot, thanks for filling in the missing pieces. It makes more sense now why the MC seems like some kind of dumb Stockholm syndrome person plus why the characters feel so one dimensional and comic book villain like. Like how the adult babysitter goes from caring to cruel and evil between frames, and where her boyfriend comes in suddenly cucking MC and abusing them too.
Its a shame there's no vision for characters or context provided, it might be pretty decent if the characters were properly fleshed out and questions answered. It would be good to know if MC is some kind of special needs, vulnerable persons which is why despite being a 'legal age' teenager, he needs supervision and makes him very susceptible to adult manipulation.