You *might* want to add a bit more explanation of the the plot, setting, or story background to the
Overview. As it is now, a reader must know what your game is about before the Overview makes any sense but most people are not going to look further than just reading your Overview!
Examples: Am I a citizen? Am I usually safe or usually in danger? Am I part of the Agency? Am I neither citzen nor Agency? What am I hoping for that I shouldn't give up that hope? And how can 'Dating Sim', 'Paranormal', 'School Setting', 'Sci-fi', and 'Superpowers' possibly fit into the story together?
And, no, you can
*not* expect people to try your game to get the most-basic information necessary to decide if they want to play it. You have their attentions now, at this moment, but their time as players/supporters is very limited so it is much easier to try something else that has enough info to interest them enough to download and support something that doesn't waste that precious time!
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P.S.: I hope this advice helps you!
I won't be trying your game simply from personal taste. The 'Big Eyes, Small Mouth' type of art reminds me too much of the worst case examples from genetics lab classes when in University.
