VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[Canto Forte]

DEVS got called out on CUTTING !@#%!@#$%$!@# CONTENT !!!!

Not to mention ... their WRITING GOING NOWHERE despite all the smoke all can blow up their ...

This is the whole point of feed back -> pro beta testers are much more upfront and deprecating than this, because some are actual coders and can spot sloppy work a mile away!

 

[DarkSithLord47]

It's only a 0.2 with incest theme guys. We can't expect an orgy after 2 updates, he is still introducing new characters.

We dont expect an orgy or to fuck the daughters right off the bat but at least let the mc have some side action,he could have thrown us a bone sex wise,there's literally nothing right now and so what if its 0.2 that's no excuse if you really wanna add something into the game Edit : there are a lot of ways to keep the players entertained ie a night peeking scene,a dream sequence and so on

 

[Richard Perkins]

I don't expect it quick, but shouldn't you get a peeking scene every now and then????

 

[ThunderRob]

i dont expect sex yet..but i felt no progression(wow Miracle kissed her sisters..a wee peck) does not count..it is treading water..like is aid..it is well written and beautifully rendered..but it's stuck in first gear and you hear the cogs grinding as they stick...

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

The game ends after the sasha boxing event right?

Yes.

Nice game,cool renders and i like the story but it might be a little slow paced for my taste,dont get me wrong i like a little teasing here and there and don't expect sex right off the bat but is it me or there are no real h-scenes in this game? i know its only 0.2 but still kinda disappointed by the lack of nudity...I think i'm gonna hold up for a few good updates until some real content piles up and give it another go then.

how to get paris topless scene?

It looks like it's been removed.

Common ... throw us a bone ... newly bonified super writer supporter ::::

WHAT DID DEVS CUT OUT OF THIS GAME ???????

this update just gave me the feeling SW is trying to show off his pithy writing and humour..game is going nowhere really progress wise...stuck in the mud...no offence SW..i like your writing..but it was just fluff gamewise and did nothing really...so what it is basically..to me..so far..is the most well written and visually pleasing Ptolemy team game so far..but the least involving.

It's only a 0.2 with incest theme guys. We can't expect an orgy after 2 updates, he is still introducing new characters.

yeap, probably..

We dont expect an orgy or to fuck the daughters right off the bat but at least let the mc have some side action,he could have thrown us a bone sex wise,there's literally nothing right now and so what if its 0.2 that's no excuse if you really wanna add something into the game

I don't expect it quick, but shouldn't you get a peeking scene every now and then????

I understand you guys want some action, which is why you WILL BE ABLE TO HAVE SEX NEXT UPDATE, WITH A SEX ANIMATION. And the story will continue to progress and there are still new characters coming. This is only 0.2, guys! Please give me a chance to give you guys more content, because there's plenty more

 

[Canto Forte]

Dames that do MC favors are aLREADY A trope around here ... even some corn dog dev that only released a 0.1.1 iteration had the decency <not really, because it was so grind oriented that most gamers gave up looking for it> to stick a night club into the game where MC could do fun adult stuff real grown ups get to in IRL night clubs and thus saved the game ...

 

[Small tits are best]

Yes.











I understand you guys want some action, which is why you WILL BE ABLE TO HAVE SEX NEXT UPDATE, WITH A SEX ANIMATION. And the story will continue to progress and there are still new characters coming. This is only 0.2, guys! Please give me a chance to give you guys more content, because there's plenty more

don't let the bastards grind you down go at your own pace but keep your game true or you will give it up if you stop enjoy doing it the true fans will follow

 

[DrakoGhoul]

Well since there's no sex yet i can just enjoy the story this update(haven't finish downloading yet), so this doesn't count towards my no porn games for a month.

As for people asking for peeping action, wtf guys come on I'm trying not to fap. My dude needs a break sheesh .

 

[Canto Forte]

those that had problems were just pointing the distressing fact peeping scenes got cut and moved up to some future updates. That is all. We do enjoy the game and only called out what seemed as out of nowhere. Why would devs hinder their cool and thought out pace by moving content around so that players that do try every version in succession get left with ruptured continuance because of this.

This was just the early warning that mingling about in the game and / or story from update to update as opposed to building on said story with each iteration will cause gamers to go mad as to not recognizing the game anymore ... even worse .. giving up on trying when all the foreseeable character build up from one iteration might go up in smoke in the next.

If those scenes that got cut were non canon ... it were better the devs said so upfront, because some gamers are lost as of now as to where they are actually in their progression with the characters that got their scenes cut and hopefully moved into the "action pocked next update" ...

Game On!!!

 

[sakuyas_mmaster]

I liked the update. I have a hunch Miracles first novel will be rather scandalous, hehehe.

 

[Canto Forte]

Mc will be there for her and any crisis will be averted ... dev is called Super Writer ...
That has to count for something !

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

those that had problems were just pointing the distressing fact peeping scenes got cut and moved up to some future updates. That is all. We do enjoy the game and only called out what seemed as out of nowhere. Why would devs hinder their cool and thought out pace by moving content around so that players that do try every version in succession get left with ruptured continuance because of this.

This was just the early warning that mingling about in the game and / or story from update to update as opposed to building on said story with each iteration will cause gamers to go mad as to not recognizing the game anymore ... even worse .. giving up on trying when all the foreseeable character build up from one iteration might go up in smoke in the next.

If those scenes that got cut were non canon ... it were better the devs said so upfront, because some gamers are lost as of now as to where they are actually in their progression with the characters that got their scenes cut and hopefully moved into the "action pocked next update" ...

Game On!!!

There weren't any peeping scenes and nothing got cut out that would hinder the story. Let me just tell you what was altered, both in the DEMO.

1) At Sasha's rehearsal, you don't jerk off in the room with her and instead go in the bathroom.

2) In the dressing room with Paris, she doesn't show you her boobs.

Those were the ONLY things changed.

 

[Canto Forte]

Thank you for clarifying that ... now that we are moving into serious game plot territory ... character build up will be carefully and painstakingly fleshed out! Got it!

Any ways ... please stay true to making the next update action packed ... even if it is all wet dreams and day dreaming dumb smitten MC fantasizing about the forbidden fruit and such

 

[apnea111]

Thank you for clarifying that ... could it be some of your earlier demos had fun spin offs just for the fun of building up hype .. but now that we are moving into serious game plot territory ... character build up will be carefully and painstakingly fleshed out?

Any ways ... please stay true to making the next update action packed ... even if it is all wet dreams and day dreaming dumb smitten MC fantasizing about the forbidden fruit and such

Lol Mate...

You are shouting in the Last 2 pages of this thread about the cut of scenes and it seems you didnt even played it...

Keep it up superwriter. Looking Good so far.

 

[Canto Forte]

Cut out .. left out ... lost on the editing room floor ... changed ... Those are all slang for movie editing that leaved audiences lost for words ... In here, beautiful renders, scarce skin ... players that got those small glimpses of gals in the demo were right to either figure they imagined it for the scenes to be different in version 2 and / or call out the only 2 places where things got heated up were CUT FROM THE GAME.

I agree with Rob and Thea that faint glimpses of action that we know know got a rework as to NOT SHOW ANY ACTION AT ALL were simple and unimportant for devs rearrangements of scenes and nothing more.

All the best to the devs ... just that when action is scarce ... gamers get paranoid.

The problem is that gamers need to get some gratification -> finding the new improved scenes ... those scenes are right now devoid of the action part and gamers are very much entitled to be outraged as those slim action pickings got scraped off.

Happy Gaming Everyone! There is no action to find right now. Enjoy the story!

 

[Razielprince]

I knew superwriter wouldn't do something like that.

Dude. I. Want. To. Know. Just. One. Thing... who the hell is that trap in the gif you have?

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Sasha and Paris: We need to be subtle when we try to convince Miracle to stay in the dorms.
[5 minutes later]
Sasha and Paris: Wouldn't staying in the dorms be really great? You can't stay at home for forever, you know!

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[Deleted member 1412183]

Sasha and Paris: We need to be subtle when we try to convince Miracle to stay in the dorms.
[5 minutes later]
Sasha and Paris: Wouldn't staying in the dorms be really great? You can't stay at home for forever, you know!

Right, they totally failed at being subtle, which is why they failed convincing her the first time =]

 

[Watcher X]

This game has only had 2 updates and people are bitching about the lack of sex, yet games like A Wife and Mother have been out for 2 years and I don't think anyone has even touched boob in that game.

 

[joe316]

No incest patch yet to make you the girls father?