Well just finished playing this (version 0.1) didn't play the demos before and just spent quite awhile reading these 19 pages. Just want to say upfront none of this is an attack on anyone. Take what you will from it.
I have to agree that the opening statement came off very poorly. I know it's been explained here what was meant but also consider not everyone playing your game will come to the forum and see the explaination. May want to consider changing it a bit.
I love the girls models (shape wise) Paris's face is unique (in the sense I've not seen it in a game before) but I'm not sure if I like it. Her resting face is fine but when she shows some kind of emotion it seems strangely off-putting to me.
Personality-wise so far i'm liking Miracle best. The other two i'm not sure I have a handle on yet.
It may be just me but occasionally Sasha and a lot of times Paris's teeth look weirdly too dark to me. I haven't noticed it with Miracle.
As has been mentioned before the attraction between MC and girls can seem quick in terms of beginning of game. This really doesn't bother me as we are just jumping into a random point in their lives. We haven't gotten to see the years of relationship before game start that could lead to the attraction.
Then there is this....
The panty scene in the car comes off as completely unbelievable for the simple fact that there is no way he could see her panties in the rear-view mirror without first moving the mirror. Anyone who's driven a car knows that you would be able to see only her head in the mirror or only her crotch, but not both at the same time. Porn works because credulity is being strained, but in this case the laws of physics are being broken. Furthermore, there is no way Paris would be able to tell where the MC's line of sight was in order to call him out on it later. Having him move the mirror would make the scene be more believable.
These were my exact thoughts when I got to this scene. I thought to myself the only way he could see her panties was if they were in a limo.
On a similar note, I was taken out of the story when I got to the acting scene. The beginning was fine but when they moved to the 2nd scene, why was Sasha reading a different characters part? They are there for her to practice so it makes no sense for the MC to retain his character and her to switch. Unless she is playing multiple characters in the play. If that's the case then it should be stated in game. Like having the director say, "Ok let's move on to your other roll" or something to that effect. I know it's really just a means to get Sasha to grope MC and lead to some sexual content but it was just not logical progression for me. None of the masturbation made any sense really other than a tossed in scene for some sexy time. I can only talk from my experience but I've never experienced an erection so strong that I just had to jerk off in a very inappropriate place with an inappropriate person present. I mean honestly (for me) it would have taken longer to jerk off and cum with what stimulation MC was given than to just ignore it and let it go away naturally.
