A very entertaining game and I have hopes for it. a couple of things though 1st No serious actress would get tats all over like that in highly visible places. The work involved with covering tats up for rolls where they are not appropriate is highly difficult, between applying make up in a way to cover them, and then not getting that make up all over your costume, and doing this for every performance (sometimes more than once per performance). I am speaking from experience and I only have 1 tat on my upper arm/shoulder area, so its far easier to cover up, what she has would be an incredible pain and in and of itself a LOT of casting agents, directors and what not, would take 1 look and send her packing. And the 2nd thing is that I think it was a mistake to change the authors render the way you did, she looked far better in the first 'draft'
Now of course 1 is just a fact that you will take it how you will and the 2nd is just a personal opinion. I would suggest from this point on, try to avoid doing any make overs of previously established characters, it will bother people (not all) every time you change somethign that has already been established.
With that said, keep up the good work and I look forward to the next release!