Fully agree.
Another character I feel is pretty weak is the landlord. That masturbation scene with the laptop came out of nowhere, would have liked some build-up to that scene not just one prior meeting with him.
The jerk off scene with him didn't seem too out of place since he seems like the kinda shameless old pervert character. My only gripe with him and similarly with Yoshida is that there is very little excitement to see how they try to take advantage of Jenny.
One of the biggest selling points of female protagonist games to me is that inner conflict where she tries to maintain composure or dignity but there's a part of her that wants the guy to do things to her and that means the guy needs to have at least some redeeming quality.
Mr. Humphry is an ugly, fat guy with buckteeth and a microdick and Yoshida is 'herro prease wercome to shitty wok' who also probably has a microdick so it's like what incentive does Jenny have to start to
want more from these interactions and will there be anything that affirms her subtle desire? Like it's hard to imagine it being very hot when the landlord sticks his little stump into Jenny and her feeling anything other than just horror and disgust.
Like part of what made LoK so hot was that Krystal always subtly wanted it and the lizardmen were very masculine. Her inner monologue was really hot when she was noticing how big they were, or when she would start imagining getting fucked by them, and then trying to shrug it off and keep her composure and maintain the facade that she's above it all. There is a sense of fulfilment that she gets when she finally lets him put it in and that drives her deeper into corruption.
I'm not saying all the characters needs to be Chad Thundercock but they also shouldn't be in the opposite extreme either. The game is still early enough in development that I feel like taking the time to revise and improve the writing and a slight adjustment to the models would do a lot of good.
I'm sad to say that at this point the only sex scenes I'm looking forward to right now are the random gropers on the bus.
I hope that changes.