Ok, played around for 5 minutes, here are the points I'll have to make:
1) version 1 already awfully grindy. Late game would be atrocious if it is not adressed. If this is a ploy so that people subscribe to your patreon to get the cheat codes... then you are doing things the wrong way my friend. If your game is not fun, nobody will play it, least pay for it when it is free. And no cheat codes are required to cheat on a SugarCube game lol...
2) fixed image height AND width is a no go. This should have been tested and not even released, distorted images that are sometimes squished horizontally and sometimes vertically, just next to one another. It actually made my head spin... and both look awful compared to the original.
3) english is not great but bearable. Dialogs are simplistic to the extreme, which is not a problem if you're here for the images (you shouldn't, at least until point 2 is fixed). Oh and don't expect a realistic scenario, I mean a nerd picking up chicks just by saying hello is hilarious.
It would be fine if it was gratuitous sex scenes one after the other, or whatever supernatural thingy intervening in protagonist's favor (we know the story is usually subpar then, but it is beside the point of the game), but when you also have to grind to barely get to a kiss scene, it's like the two worst parts of lewd games meshed together. And that begs the question... WHY?
Anyhow, good luck on developping this game, wish you good luck and hope you succeed. I won't play it though.
Now, you take my criticism for what it is: either you feel it is constructive and act according to it and your beliefs, or you dismiss it. Who knows, maybe I don't think like the majority, but that was my honest opinion and that's it.