Bruhtato

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something up w the game? I can't merge the patch with the game doe "having the same name"
though they are supposed to have the same name
 

jamiehmcw91

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What if : Brenna organises a party for Sterlings birthday. She books a club and everyone is their (Brenna,Catherine,Aliza,Lucia,Ophelia,Tiffany,Amber,Rebecca, Mallory,Kiera,Nora,Kumiko(Amber's mum), Amber's sister,Eva, (the girls from Mallory chapter were Aliza was to blame for sleeping with her dad), also the girl Drew was fucking( one who Brenna hates. Hunter,Drew, Kevin and Peyton are invitied. Hunter overhears Brenna saying to the girls that there is a gloryhole in the club and they can all take turns fucking Sterling though it. She also tells them to get off the pills as they should give Sterling some babies. Hunter then confineds with Drew,Peyton and Kevin about what Brenna said and tells them that he plans to fuck them all and they can too. Hunter then says he wants to be the one to breed them.
The night of the party everyone is their drinking and giving Sterling presents. Brenna says to Sterling to meet her in the mens toilet. As she leaves, Hunter talks to Drew,Kevin and Peyton. Sterling goes outside but he gets knocked out and kidnapped. Hunter says hes away. Hunter then goes to the toilet. And he is in the cubicle he puts his cock through the hole where Brenna is and then Brenna say she loves Sterling ( its Hunter who is there) and wants his cock in everyhole. She starts sucking his cock and deepthroats Hunter. After a while Hunter cums in Brenna's mouth and she swallows his cum. Then brenna says she wants him in her ass , his cock then pounds her tight ass for half an hour and Hunter cums inside her tight asshole. Brenna then says its time for the grand finale, I want you to breed me Sterling , Hunter has a cheeky smile and Brenna begins to fuck Hunter and he eventually cums inside her tight breedable fertile pussy. Brenna then leaves with her tight ass and pussy full of cum.
 

jamiehmcw91

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What if : Brenna organises a party for Sterlings birthday. She books a club and everyone is their (Brenna,Catherine,Aliza,Lucia,Ophelia,Tiffany,Amber,Rebecca, Mallory,Kiera,Nora,Kumiko(Amber's mum), Amber's sister,Eva, (the girls from Mallory chapter were Aliza was to blame for sleeping with her dad), also the girl Drew was fucking( one who Brenna hates. Hunter,Drew, Kevin and Peyton are invitied. Hunter overhears Brenna saying to the girls that there is a gloryhole in the club and they can all take turns fucking Sterling though it. She also tells them to get off the pills as they should give Sterling some babies. Hunter then confineds with Drew,Peyton and Kevin about what Brenna said and tells them that he plans to fuck them all and they can too. Hunter then says he wants to be the one to breed them.
The night of the party everyone is their drinking and giving Sterling presents. Brenna says to Sterling to meet her in the mens toilet. As she leaves, Hunter talks to Drew,Kevin and Peyton. Sterling goes outside but he gets knocked out and kidnapped. Hunter says hes away. Hunter then goes to the toilet. And he is in the cubicle he puts his cock through the hole where Brenna is and then Brenna say she loves Sterling ( its Hunter who is there) and wants his cock in everyhole. She starts sucking his cock and deepthroats Hunter. After a while Hunter cums in Brenna's mouth and she swallows his cum. Then brenna says she wants him in her ass , his cock then pounds her tight ass for half an hour and Hunter cums inside her tight asshole. Brenna then says its time for the grand finale, I want you to breed me Sterling , Hunter has a cheeky smile and Brenna begins to fuck Hunter and he eventually cums inside her tight breedable fertile pussy. Brenna then leaves with her tight ass and pussy full of cum.
Part 2 to come lol
 

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Might work...except:
• Size
Kiera and Nora are the only ones you listed who have seem Hunter's penis(in canon). They might be willing, depending on how they feel about Hunter after all these years. But the others would surely know that it wasn't Sterling poking through there.
• Taste
Remember the stuff Catherine gave Sterling to improve the taste of his semen?
She would be able to instantly tell that it wasn't Sterling(or be pissed that he stopped using it).
The others would probably notice, too.

Now would this be enough to foil Hunter's plans? Maybe. Maybe not. Interesting premise, though.
 
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jamiehmcw91

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Might work...except:
• Size
Kiera and Nora are the only ones you listed who have seem Hunter's penis(in canon). They might be willing, depending on how they feel about Hunter after all these years. But the others would surely know that it wasn't Sterling poking through there.
• Taste
Remember the stuff Catherine gave Sterling to improve the taste of his semen?
She would be able to instantly tell that it wasn't Sterling(or be pissed that he stopped using it).
The others would probably notice, too.

Now would this be enough to foil Hunter's plans? Maybe. Maybe not. Interesting premise, though.
Its meant to be a what if part
 

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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/gym_menu.rpy", line 11, in script
jump cgym
ScriptError: could not find label 'cgym'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/gym_menu.rpy", line 11, in script
jump cgym
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1757, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "renpy/script.py", line 918, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'cgym'.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Power Vacuum CH11Beta
Mon Feb 27 18:48:23 2023
```
Facing this on the latest beta
did you find a fix? I'm still having the problem even after the beta
 
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What if : Brenna organises a party for Sterlings birthday. She books a club and everyone is their (Brenna,Catherine,Aliza,Lucia,Ophelia,Tiffany,Amber,Rebecca, Mallory,Kiera,Nora,Kumiko(Amber's mum), Amber's sister,Eva, (the girls from Mallory chapter were Aliza was to blame for sleeping with her dad), also the girl Drew was fucking( one who Brenna hates. Hunter,Drew, Kevin and Peyton are invitied. Hunter overhears Brenna saying to the girls that there is a gloryhole in the club and they can all take turns fucking Sterling though it. She also tells them to get off the pills as they should give Sterling some babies. Hunter then confineds with Drew,Peyton and Kevin about what Brenna said and tells them that he plans to fuck them all and they can too. Hunter then says he wants to be the one to breed them.
The night of the party everyone is their drinking and giving Sterling presents. Brenna says to Sterling to meet her in the mens toilet. As she leaves, Hunter talks to Drew,Kevin and Peyton. Sterling goes outside but he gets knocked out and kidnapped. Hunter says hes away. Hunter then goes to the toilet. And he is in the cubicle he puts his cock through the hole where Brenna is and then Brenna say she loves Sterling ( its Hunter who is there) and wants his cock in everyhole. She starts sucking his cock and deepthroats Hunter. After a while Hunter cums in Brenna's mouth and she swallows his cum. Then brenna says she wants him in her ass , his cock then pounds her tight ass for half an hour and Hunter cums inside her tight asshole. Brenna then says its time for the grand finale, I want you to breed me Sterling , Hunter has a cheeky smile and Brenna begins to fuck Hunter and he eventually cums inside her tight breedable fertile pussy. Brenna then leaves with her tight ass and pussy full of cum.
The basic idea of renting out a club for Sterling's birthday has a lot of potential, although Brenna probably wouldn't invite some of those people.

The gloryhole trick is kind of unoriginal, and it wastes the setup of renting out the club, i.e. they could literally have sex on a stage. Maybe they plan some kind of kinky sex show with Sterling as the star, but thanks to blindfolds and/or drugs the wrong people end up having sex?

Even in What Ifs, the characters should act consistently with what we know about them. And events should follow cause and effect, not just be "and then, and then, and then".
 

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The basic idea of renting out a club for Sterling's birthday has a lot of potential, although Brenna probably wouldn't invite some of those people.

The gloryhole trick is kind of unoriginal, and it wastes the setup of renting out the club, i.e. they could literally have sex on a stage. Maybe they plan some kind of kinky sex show with Sterling as the star, but thanks to blindfolds and/or drugs the wrong people end up having sex?

Even in What Ifs, the characters should act consistently with what we know about them. And events should follow cause and effect, not just be "and then, and then, and then".
So it has some potential?
 

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Hunter has no gas, no drugs to help him in a neutral site. Sterling would be on high alert if he knew Hunter/Kevin/Drew/Payton were all there. On top of that the reason for the party can't be Brenna's birthday if you want that to be the guest list. Now if it's an end of the summer get together for everyone to celebrate then it becomes more plausible for all of them to attend. It has the makings of something workable but would need major tweaking to fit the story properly.
 
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