Ren'Py Power Vacuum [Ch. 12 Official] [What? Why? Games]

[Rabbit6605]

WOW amazing, I am taking this as my new canon. All of that said, I would just insist on the NTR aspects, change a bit of the last paragrahs and adds more to it but make no mistake, you've just done a terrific job at fanfiction :

Sterling resigns himself to the situation of sharing his family with Kevin. They may even come to an understanding, that Kevin serves as cover so the world doesn't suspect Sterling is fucking his own mother and sisters. But Eventually they start having less and less sex with Sterling as Kevin just has that "elements" that makes the sex much better with him.

More time passes and Ophelia, Brenna and Catherine admits that while sex with Sterling is passable, it wasn't healthy to have sex with him. After all, they are related and the incest part is a bit less sexy when their fantasy is to get pregnant. And now that Kevin has proven to be more than able to satisfy them, they don't see the point of continuing to have sex with Sterling...

Of course this is pretty much an excuses that they have found as they keep having "group sex" with each other but Sterling is simply no longer enough for them...

At first Sterling is shocked by the news but he resign himself and understand that he can neither goes against their wishes or counter-argument their words because an incestuous baby or even relationship is indeed neither normal or sane.

Of course they would end their relationship on good terms as they still love their brother/son but it just would no longer be the same afterwards as they would have gone back to a "normal" relationship in their family.

10 months later, Sterling would have move out from the house but now he come to visit his family and he will "gladly" help them taking care of the numerous kids that Kevin keeps having by the dozens.


And anytime Kevin would speak to Sterling he would be genuinely cordial... even if he would have trouble hiding the fact that he loves every single women in the household... A lot... as he would "get" something anytime Stelring is present (Brenna giving him a blowjob under the table when it's time for dinner with Sterling, Paizuri in the kitchen with Ophelia when everyone is eating, sex with Catherine when everyone is watching a film in the living room, etc.)

Of course the girl would be complicit into making sure that Sterling would not interupt or find out what is happening not because they are malicious but simply because they prefer to keep this illusion of "normality".


Would you add more or change anything about this?

YES.... 1. I would have kept KEVIN with long hair and a little more weight on him. Starting to look too much like Sterling,
2. Hunter be the only one that knows whats going on.

 

[panzermaster]

You know what, I like your take on the aftermath better!

As I review the scenes, I'm struck by the part where Brenna fucks Kevin and she says "I just needed... the extra big dick!" and he replies with "Sterling not cutting it?". I think it's clear from this ending (and many others) that the girls' emotions follow after their bodies' reactions. Having their physical needs met by Kevin, it's easy to imagine the girls would reevaluate their relationships with Sterling, and decide no more incest would be the right thing for everyone.

Of course Sterling still has other women in his harem, so he may move out of Ophelia's house and move in with Amber's family, or Tiff's. The question then is, would this be the new status quo, or would Kevin continue to usurp Sterling's women?

Thank you! For my part, I consider that Kevin would absolutely continue to Usurp as to make it a full NTR ending. He is not even malicious about it, it's just natural for him.

And I just thought about something else that would make it even better :

After Kevin has been reintroduced to the house and spent a bit of time. When Sterling realize that Kevin is taking more and more space in the house and that the girl like him more. Sterling has 2 Options :

1. Resign himself that he is no longer the main alpha male of the house and that the women prefer Kevin to him. He can still have sex with them from time to time but he just won't be the father of their kids because of the incest involved. It would be safer if Kevin is the one getting them pregnant.

Should Sterling accept that he will have a secondary role in the household but still very much present...

In this case, the scenario ends up the way you first wrote about it, the two men are sharing the women but Kevin remains the Alpha so it's kind of bittersweet...

OR

2. Sterling become a bit too possessive and give the women an ultimatum. He fully admits that it might be hypocritical considering his promiscuity BUT he feels like the more Kevin is there and he loses "influence" and eventually he will no longer have anything. So he decides to tell his family that he can no longer accept Kevin in the house and that they have to choose between him or Kevin.

In this scenario Sterling is certain that the Girls will still prefer their sibling/son to this guy who used to be a joke to them and spied on them without their consent. He is certain that their familial bonds will prevail...

The problem is that now the girls are now addicted to Kevin and while sex with Sterling is servicable, it just does not compare to Kevin performance.

Sterling is shocked and understand that he has just been too greedy. But now it's too late to go back... He start to pack his belongings and is quite sad.

But then 10 months later, they have a conversation on the phone and they are ready to reconcile and it would be good for him to meet his new nephew/nieces/siblings so he comes back. And the rest of the scenario is exactly how I explain in my last comments about the ending being full NTR.

Would you add more or change anything about this?

 

[pinkie96]

We should have seen the reaction of Sterling seeing his mother taken away from her by a guy who was once considered a joke. It doesn't need to be an overly dark ending, just a humourous one where Kevin cuckold Sterling.

The cuckholding aspect of the NTR content hasn't been what I've liked about them but this would've been absolutely hilarious to see. Kevin would absolutely mog Sterling.

Sterling also wouldn't have an excuse to justify preventing Kevin perusing the girls without coming off as a complete hypocrite and degenerate. Kevin isn't related like Sterling, Hunter and Drew nor did he use dirty tactics. Serling would just have to let it happen

 

[Jerk-man]

Looks like the discussion about Kevin has gone too far and is even ready to turn him into an MC

Sterling's self-confidence seems to have pushed everyone back. sit down and relax Sterling

 

[Fayn Arawn]

Thank you! For my part, I consider that Kevin would absolutely continue to Usurp as to make it a full NTR ending. He is not even malicious about it, it's just natural for him.

And I just thought about something else that would make it even better :

After Kevin has been reintroduced to the house and spent a bit of time. When Sterling realize that Kevin is taking more and more space in the house and that the girl like him more. Sterling has 2 Options :

1. Resign himself that he is no longer the main alpha male of the house and that the women prefer Kevin to him. He can still have sex with them from time to time but he just won't be the father of their kids because of the incest involved. It would be safer if Kevin is the one getting them pregnant.

Should Sterling accept that he will have a secondary role in the household but still very much present...

In this case, the scenario ends up the way you first wrote about it, the two men are sharing the women but Kevin remains the Alpha so it's kind of bittersweet...

OR

2. Sterling become a bit too possessive and give the women an ultimatum. He fully admits that it might be hypocritical considering his promiscuity BUT he feels like the more Kevin is there and he loses "influence" and eventually he will no longer have anything. So he decides to tell his family that he can no longer accept Kevin in the house and that they have to choose between him or Kevin.

In this scenario Sterling is certain that the Girls will still prefer their sibling/son to this guy who used to be a joke to them and spied on them without their consent. He is certain that their familial bonds will prevail...

The problem is that now the girls are now addicted to Kevin and while sex with Sterling is servicable, it just does not compare to Kevin performance.

Sterling is shocked and understand that he has just been too greedy. But now it's too late to go back... He start to pack his belongings and is quite sad.

But then 10 months later, they have a conversation on the phone and they are ready to reconcile and it would be good for him to meet his new nephew/nieces/siblings so he comes back. And the rest of the scenario is exactly how I explain in my last comments about the ending being full NTR.

Would you add more or change anything about this?

Hmmm... as I said before, I can definitely see a sharing situation, but I also agree, Kevin would become the preferred lover, with the ladies only settling for sex with Sterling when it's not "their turn" with Kevin. Eventually this would probably destroy Sterling's ego and his relationships with his family.

I wouldn't buy the idea of Sterling fully "going back", because once he accepts that Kevin has taken over, there's not much to go back to. But if Sterling just visits his mother and sister and their new kids, while the women sneak around fucking Kevin, it's kind of funny but a little weak on the NTR aspect. I mean, they shouldn't have sex right in front of him, but it should be obvious from their load moaning and thumping beds that they're fucking while Sterling is in the house. I think it'd be funny (and messed up) if Sterling is trying to get the babies to fall back asleep while they're crying after being woken up by the sounds of Kevin fucking their moms.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

Looks like the discussion about Kevin has gone too far and is even ready to turn him into an MC

Ahahah lol Although there is nothing surprising here, this has always been the case. since some most NTR fans have always been more interested in "What happened next." so they don't care what the MC does, this is already a habitual situation

Sterling's self-confidence seems to have pushed everyone back. sit down and relax Sterling

Dude is tired of fucking already,

Spoiler: give him a rest

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[Jerk-man]

so they don't care what the MC does, this is already a habitual situation

I wouldn't be surprised at all if Dev actually reads all these discussions and and would look shocked that now everyone hates Sterling

 

[panzermaster]

Hmmm... as I said before, I can definitely see a sharing situation, but I also agree, Kevin would become the preferred lover, with the ladies only settling for sex with Sterling when it's not "their turn" with Kevin. Eventually this would probably destroy Sterling's ego and his relationships with his family.

I wouldn't buy the idea of Sterling fully "going back", because once he accepts that Kevin has taken over, there's not much to go back to. But if Sterling just visits his mother and sister and their new kids, while the women sneak around fucking Kevin, it's kind of funny but a little weak on the NTR aspect. I mean, they shouldn't have sex right in front of him, but it should be obvious from their load moaning and thumping beds that they're fucking while Sterling is in the house. I think it'd be funny (and messed up) if Sterling is trying to get the babies to fall back asleep while they're crying after being woken up by the sounds of Kevin fucking their moms.

Well when the choice happens, Sterling still has not fully accepted that Kevin is the new Alpha. He is trying to cope and then 2 options are given to him.

I could add that in this scenario, when Sterling "accepted" Kevin into the house, he had every intention to "prove" them or at least "remind" them that Kevin tried to Spy on them so that they would reject him of their own will. Of course it would not have work in the long run and after a bit of time, he would have to choose between : sharing (bittersweet ending) or Ultimatum (bad NTR ending)

I was more trying to find a reason for Sterling to "get out of the house" for 10 months, the best way I thought about was if he got too greedy and selfish at wanting to keep everything for himself. And then kind of had to leave because of his actions.

A bit like any NTR ending happens because at one moment Sterling makes a bad decision.

But perhaps I am thinking too much and my initial idea was better.

And I absolutely love your idea that Sterling is trying to calm the babies but Kevin and the girls moaning make them wake up and then Sterling has to work even more to keep his promise of taking care of them... It would be hillarious.

Even more if he had a date the next morning and miss it because he couldn't get enough sleep due to Kevin and the girls "activities"...

 

[Fayn Arawn]

I wouldn't be surprised at all if Dev actually reads all these discussions and and would look shocked that now everyone hates Sterling

To be clear, I don't hate Sterling at all. And no one has treated him worse than the dev himself, forcefully turning Sterling into a woman in one ending, and a quadruple-amputee who then dies in another ending. The main story is already so far-fetched, I don't see anything wrong with exploring these hypothetical endings.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

I wouldn't be surprised at all if Dev actually reads all these discussions and and would look shocked that now everyone hates Sterling

Although... why does they hate him?

Shit, when I went through the bad ending of Hunter, where Sterling became an AI robot, I was really sad when I saw Brenna or Ophelia suffer alone in their rooms at night, due to the absence of the real Sterling. in fact, despite all the controversy about ntr, I see how girls actually love MC, it's just that Sterling doesn't notice it well, since he's too young for such things.

I wouldn't say that everyone hates him, story just make us hate him.

 

[Adhdclassic]

so you cant play ntr unless you do the add on

 

[pinkie96]

THE NATTY HARD WORKING WOMANIZER VS THE JUICED FREELOADING INBREEDER

Which side are you on?

 

[SuddenReal]

so you cant play ntr unless you do the add on

No, you can't play the game unless you do the add on (due to Patreon rules). The NTR is a switch in Hunter's room.

 

[Jerk-man]

To be clear, I don't hate Sterling at all. And no one has treated him worse than the dev himself, forcefully turning Sterling into a woman in one ending, and a quadruple-amputee who then dies in another ending. The main story is already so far-fetched, I don't see anything wrong with exploring these hypothetical endings.

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Shit, when I went through the bad ending of Hunter, where Sterling became an AI robot, I was really sad when I saw Brenna or Ophelia suffer alone in their rooms at night, due to the absence of the real Sterling. in fact, despite all the controversy about ntr, I see how girls actually love MC, it's just that Sterling doesn't notice it well, since he's too young for such things.

I wouldn't say that everyone hates him, story just make us hate him.

In this situation, when discussing side stories, we can completely forget the main stories. Now I'm starting to understand why everyone wants the main story to be finished quickly so that Dev can then focus on "What if...?"

 

[panzermaster]

THE NATTY HARD WORKING WOMANIZER VS THE JUICED FREELOADING INBREEDER
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Which side are you on?

The worst part is that from a very "real world" point of view, once Kevin gets his shit together. Him impregnating all the women is technically a SANER ends than the actual good ending where Sterling will be the king of his own family...

 

[Adhdclassic]

No, you can't play the game unless you do the add on (due to Patreon rules). The NTR is a switch in Hunter's room.

fuck that sucks. i have no clue how to do it when i try it fucks with my game.

 

[pinkie96]

fuck that sucks. i have no clue how to do it when i try it fucks with my game.

You unpack the patch into the \game\ folder then start a new game

 

[Fayn Arawn]

THE NATTY HARD WORKING WOMANIZER VS THE JUICED FREELOADING INBREEDER
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Which side are you on?

Spoiler: meme

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Sterling is Better

We all know captain had fucked Tony in the civil wars

 

[MAGO-DAG]

THE NATTY HARD WORKING WOMANIZER VS THE JUICED FREELOADING INBREEDER
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Which side are you on?

It's too early to draw such conclusions. Especially knowing that Sterling is currently focused on protecting his family against Hunter and Drew, will he be a workaholic or a worker? We have already seen what David himself faced when he left the girls alone with Hunter or Drew, do you want a repeat of the father’s fate for MC?

Mc's mission has just begun, some secrets have been revealed, Cat is also already pregnant, Brenna has already opened a porn business, Ophelia has started working in the kitchen cooking and Sterling is sure that over time he will begin to work on something to provide for his family.

and the picture you posted, Sterling didn’t seem to want marks smeared on him. Where was Kevin all this time? collected incriminating evidence for jerking off and did not even pay full attention to Aliza... so we draw conclusions early on about Sterling, knowing what he went through against his grandfather and his machinations that he himself faced

I'm not saying Sterling is better than Kevin or Kevin is better than Sterling. Both have many drawbacks. Remember that Kevin even blackmailed Ophelia, if Sterling had not pulled him out of the shell he was sitting in, it is quite possible that he would have continued to do all sorts of things because of his hacker knowledge. In the future, I wouldn’t even be surprised if Kevin turned to Hunter out of envy, such an outcome is also quite possible