I 100% agree with u with everything!!
He's getting a bit to far carried away with trying to have as much humor as possible with this game now, the more n more it continues to go on.,
To where now it's seems like it keeps on getting harder n harder to try keep up with following the actual story itself, with every character almost always having some type of clever joke to say, or some type of clever mocking comeback, that just ends up being a little to far over the top to even be able to follow where it is that each character is trying to go with there clever remarks.. Idk rather if that's intentional/unintentional misleading., But with all of that having to run on, n on, n literally almost evey singal character lines back to back, just really makes all the reading quite exhausting from all of those pointless things to be read n the mix of everything.. Which not to mention, all n the ending process just makes it harder for the reader to be able to even understand just what exactly is supposed to be happening n where the story scenario is supposed be going..
But other than that tho, I really do truly love the game n where the actual story is going..
But, at the exact same time I do really wish the developer will just kool it down quite a bit with all of the special jokes, n clever comebacks, n the over the top mockery n every single character lines, n just stick to how he was writing things out n the first few, couple of chapters...
Just my opinion!!!!!!!