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What happen near the end of chap 9 with Ophelia?
There's something somehow really wrong with it, I get it her wish to try something like that but you can't change a personality of a person like that, i mean she clearly was not the submissive type but she was also a caring person all the time with a touch of willingness and understanding, a snap in the fem dom is totally out of the character, especially against a person that can easily overwhelming you, the thougths of rationalize the deed of the mc with this make no sense, at least on how the story developed. As the mc said they barely talk anymore so is possible that the relation will change back to the previous status in the next chap or so ( I didn't yet complete the chap 10) but still is somehow forced, like they say, too much too quickly.
Another note, unsure how the dev is treating the trans issue, in one point seem to be more than willing to accept it without questions and the other side point more than once the paradigm with it, combining with the confusions of mixing trans ppl and futa is a bit of a mess..
There's something somehow really wrong with it, I get it her wish to try something like that but you can't change a personality of a person like that, i mean she clearly was not the submissive type but she was also a caring person all the time with a touch of willingness and understanding, a snap in the fem dom is totally out of the character, especially against a person that can easily overwhelming you, the thougths of rationalize the deed of the mc with this make no sense, at least on how the story developed. As the mc said they barely talk anymore so is possible that the relation will change back to the previous status in the next chap or so ( I didn't yet complete the chap 10) but still is somehow forced, like they say, too much too quickly.
Another note, unsure how the dev is treating the trans issue, in one point seem to be more than willing to accept it without questions and the other side point more than once the paradigm with it, combining with the confusions of mixing trans ppl and futa is a bit of a mess..