Lap-pillow Princess
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- Apr 14, 2018
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I can't believe Sterling managed to make the same mistake twice, the total idiot - first with Brenna, then with Ophelia; the second time after very clearly having learned his lesson about consent with Brenna AND after having a conversation with Ophelia where he realised the way he was acting towards her made him sound like a date-rapist.
I mean really, how damn stupid can you get?
Plus, we've got a "great" setup with Hunter's bag of drugs that can very easily be made to seem like Sterling's the one who's been drugging everyone, since he's got them locked up in his possession.
It's well-written, but it's also so frustrating how excruciatingly bad his decision-making is.
It's depressingly impressive how pretty much every chapter so far has ended on a downer, made even worse this time because of the above failure to learn AND because so much good progress was made with pretty much everyone else beforehand - Ophelia's content this time around really makes Brenna's "I guess you really ARE just a great, generous guy" dialogue so tragically, laughably wrong in comparison.
I mean really, how damn stupid can you get?
Plus, we've got a "great" setup with Hunter's bag of drugs that can very easily be made to seem like Sterling's the one who's been drugging everyone, since he's got them locked up in his possession.
It's well-written, but it's also so frustrating how excruciatingly bad his decision-making is.
It's depressingly impressive how pretty much every chapter so far has ended on a downer, made even worse this time because of the above failure to learn AND because so much good progress was made with pretty much everyone else beforehand - Ophelia's content this time around really makes Brenna's "I guess you really ARE just a great, generous guy" dialogue so tragically, laughably wrong in comparison.
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