1) Stupendous art and choreography. Seeing Ophelia with her hair down and mascara running was amazing.
And having her catch a couple fucking is a nice way to bring up the tension slightly before the main event.
2) I'll have to go back and read the actual chapter, but in this story I actually didn't side with Sterling at all. It's just weird to have him try and cockblock his mom. I forget what Erikk did that made him seem like a bad person though.
Solid fan work.
9/10